163. Commenting on "The Ancestors Have Spirits in the Sky"

Today I would like to recommend to you a work that is still being pushed by Dafeng.

"The Ancestors Have Spirits in the Sky", author desktop computer, level 3 author.

Classification Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.

【Introduction】

I am a physical cultivator, specializing in the physical body,

I have dominated an era and built a glorious family.

Breaking the law with one force is actually talking about me!

After I sat down, my body did not die for thousands of years, but I was pulled out of the coffin by a group of unfilial descendants, and used my body to ward off disasters and destroy enemies......

"The old ancestor is above, the Red Whale Gang is coming, the elders can't stop it, borrow your old body for use!"

"The old ancestor forgives, the Heavenly Sword Sect is here again, the patriarch is beaten and vomits blood, I have to borrow your old body to block it!"

Until one day......

"It's too troublesome to dig up the body of the ancestor and bury it in it every time, so it's better to sacrifice the ancestor into a battle puppet of my clan!"

"For the sake of the family, I believe that the ancestors have spirits in the sky, and they will forgive us......"

"I can't forgive!"

This group of unfilial sons and grandchildren should be beaten!

this day.

I was so angry that I came back to life and lifted the coffin board......

This is a positive energy story of a body cultivator who has made great contributions to human cultivation and civilization for thousands of years, and has been lifted by a group of descendants who are so angry that they will continue to shine and make contributions after being resurrected, and educate future generations to respect the old and love the young, and work hard together for the peace of the human universe.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, dig up an old ancestor. The family was attacked by the enemy, so they had to dig up the body of the ancestor and throw it among the enemies, so that the enemy could attack the ancestor. The ancestor's body protection qi instantly killed the enemy in an instant. This group of descendants is planning to refine the ancestors into puppets and fight forever.

Chapter 2, The Resurrection. "The Ancestor System" was scanned and approved, and the protagonist Liu Fan was successfully resurrected. The name of the previous life is too big, but the appearance of the descendants of the future generations who are acting recklessly is really not worthy of protection at all.

Chapter 3, The Wrath of the Ancestors. System scanning, the descendants present will still add a lot of filial piety to the protagonist despite their bad intentions. The protagonist finds a person who is fishing in troubled waters and wants to catch him on the spot.

Chapter 4, between people, the most important thing is to treat each other with sincerity. A descendant who was spelled by the protagonist taunted the other elders in public, and made his hidden identity public, and even scolded his master to the blood. Death is not far off!

Chapter 5, Spirited Spell. The family is really at the end of its rope, and there is nothing rich to have. After dark, someone sneaked into the mourning hall, ate tribute, and was arrested.

Chapter 6, salted fish, so fragrant. When someone is slumped and wants to go through the back door, the protagonist casts a positive spell that shifts their frustration slightly.

Chapter 7, the qualifications of the clansmen, obey the normal distribution. The protagonist uses the system to know the distribution of the qualifications of the clan, similar to the normal distribution or summation order in mathematics. Some people keep stealing other people's stories, pretending to be pathetic, and everyone ends up hungry.

Chapter 8, Old Ancestor, your old man is too strong. Someone discovers a mysterious technique behind the protagonist's back, and they hurry up to learn it. Although I haven't practiced it yet, I can feel the effect a little bit.

Chapter 9, Vicious Wind and Sea, Flying Boat Outside the Sky. The elders restored the protagonist's body to its normal position, pinning their hopes on the author's name - you. If it weren't for the protagonist's strong ability, he would have been thrown out a long time ago.

Chapter 10, we must refine our ancestors into battle puppets. These people are still not giving up, and have been discussing with each other, whether they can get what they want from their ancestors? And there is a guy named Liu Dongdong, who has been crying, it turns out that he is just repenting.

[Brief comment]

The introduction to the book is very long, at least five hundred words.

The pace of the book is a bit slow, even a little watery.

In the first ten chapters, you can also see that there is no clear career line at the end, and it looks very messy.

The protagonist of this book is even more tragic.

is also a crossing, he has become the ancestor of a small family, and experts are vying to predict, hoping to extract some more useful skills and exercises from the protagonist.

The world is on the verge of collapse, mainly in the human body.

No matter how small the family is, there are also great opponents and giant peaks that are difficult to cross.

They tried a lot of ways to bury the protagonist and make the protagonist into a puppet, but none of this worked.

They also find a way to read the text on the protagonist's back.

It can be seen by all indications that these people really do not have much intersection with the fate of the protagonist.

Their life and death will not affect the mood of the protagonist.

It's not that the protagonist is too old and too hot-blooded.

Because tomorrow will soon befall something even more dangerous, thank you, spire master.

The writing of this book is not very good, the logic is a bit confusing, and the plot is too busy to advance, as if it has just entered.

I believe many people can see these shortcomings, but why can they be selected for the starting point?

First of all, it may have something to do with classification.

The current fantasy text, there are too few good works, there are invincible streams, mortal streams, and stand-alone streams.

But the beginning of the old ancestor flow, how similar to "Sword of Dawn". But the quality is very different.

The ancestor of this book, who has been locked up until now, has not had a reasonable reason to let him out.

Despite this, there are still a lot of highlights at the beginning, so it is not an accident that the big seal is pushed.

Secondly, it may have something to do with the story.

Borrowing from "Sword of Dawn", it is a bit bold, but the story doesn't seem to unfold much.

The protagonist lies motionless in the ancestral shrine, not even a dream world, and can only talk boringly to the system.

In the later stages of the book, all kinds of pit filling and digging are also going on.

None of this has anything to do with this book, it's just for fun.

Again, the process of getting into the book is very inspiring.

It was on the shelves on January 1, and the first order was only 390

In two months, it was written into a masterpiece.

It's so terrifying, if you change it to someone else, it's estimated that it's all cut.

So, I have to support it anyway.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

The mental state is not very good, and the things that are written are not nutritious.

It's like some brainless little white text.

The online text market is like this, any book can be read, and any book may become popular.

Those who can be pushed by the big seal are all glory that can only be achieved after going through various tests.

So the quality of the book, not much of a problem.

It's just the style that's problematic.

There are too few good fantasy.

After identification, this book can only be read at will, not in depth.

Otherwise, you will be the ones who will suffer.

Today is another light rainy day, and the mood is still a little bad.

I need a black willow to refresh myself.