430. Commenting on "Girl, You're Wrong"
I accidentally found a book, and the title and introduction are too inappropriate.
"Girl, something is wrong with you", Youzhu, level 4 author.
Category: Light - Native Fantasy.
【Introduction】
【Introduction】
The family is poor, both parents are dead, and the divorce of the beautiful fiancée is encountered.
Standard Xiaobaiwen protagonist template, so my cheat is coming, right!
Unexpectedly, that night, his fiancée suddenly repented:
I won't quit this marriage!
And she has to live and sleep together, and she will pay all the living expenses!
Well, if you live together, you live together, and I don't suffer anyway.
After a night......
Hey, there's something wrong with this fiancée?
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【Introduction to the Serious Edition】
Demons are ravaging the Shenzhou Continent, and human beings are retreating to giant technology cities to survive, and the world is in danger.
The northerners crossed to the south, and there were many differences; The imperial family is fighting endlessly; The common people of the poor family are unbearable; The homeless people are handsome, eyeing the tiger, and when the time comes, they will rise up and completely tear apart this hard-won order.
To describe it in two words, that is this human world, Fira is unbearable, pills.
Cheng Jinyang, a sick and weak boy who has crossed over here, has set two small goals for himself:
1. Exercise and recover as soon as possible.
Second, you have to become stronger!
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The author has a 210w word of the finished book "The Sword of the Blue", HappyEnd character guarantee, not too unfinished, not trustworthy!
The introduction of these two versions,At a glance, you can know that the introduction of the relaxed version is more real.,The introduction of the serious version is too unbright.。
【Golden Ten Chapters】
In the first chapter, this is not the right start. The protagonist Cheng Jinyang is a time-traveling party, his family is poor, his parents died, and his neighbor's childhood sweetheart also died of demons. The protagonist suffers from a heart illness and has nightmares every night. He just came out of the hospital, and he encountered the divorce of his beautiful fiancée Xing Yuanzhi. So far, the standard configuration of the protagonist of the online text has been collected, and only the gold finger has not yet arrived.
Chapter 2, don't bully the young poor, unless. The tone of the fiancée's divorce is very familiar, which makes the protagonist very angry, and he almost shouts out the famous sentence of divorce. The other party suddenly turned around and offered generous conditions, so that he agreed to withdraw from the marriage at once. During his class, he suffered a heart attack and fainted in the classroom. After being checked by the school doctor, it was found that the blood concentration had increased a lot. Although it is not yet to the level of awakening, it can be regarded as good news.
Chapter 3, an unexpected reversal. Xing Yuanzhi talked to her father about the divorce compensation, but fell into the abyss when she fell asleep. As usual, the protagonist thought that he was going to fight the demons for another night, but instead he entered the dream of Xing Yuanzhi killing the demons and comprehending the other party's abilities. He withdrew from the dream, glad that he didn't have to toss all night, when there was a knock on the door, he saw Xing Yuanzhi's strange eyes in the cat's eyes. 1800 Literature
Chapter 4, Temptation of Another. Xing Yuanzhi woke up from a nightmare and went to the bathroom to scrub repeatedly. The events that happened in her childhood have always been buried deep in her heart, but she didn't expect that this time she would reappear in her dreams, and the most important thing is that she was witnessed by the protagonist. She went to the protagonist's house alone and stated that her insistence on getting out of the marriage was a last resort, hoping that the protagonist would understand. She had the intention of repenting, but she didn't expect the protagonist to accept the divorce long ago.
Chapter 5, I won't quit this marriage! Xing Yuanzhi revealed her regret for the divorce, and was even willing to give more money to the other party, just asking to live with the protagonist. She wants to further determine if the protagonist has the ability to penetrate dreams, and if it is true, the protagonist will be a dusty gem. The protagonist listened, did not drive the other party away at the first time, and finally said his own conditions. He needs the Cheng family's gravitational algorithm.
Chapter 6, Ah Zhi stays tonight. From the concept of time and space, the protagonist deduces that the algorithms of the Cheng family and the Xing family should be deduced, but Xing Yuanzhi promised to directly get the Cheng family's primary algorithm for the protagonist. The price is that the protagonist will have to live with each other in the future. And Xing Yuanzhi has a serious cleanliness habit, not only sending the protagonist to buy a sleeping bag at four o'clock in the middle of the night, but also accusing the other party of not paying attention to hygiene at all.
Chapter 7, Ah Zhi, who loves cleanliness. Ah Zhi realizes that the protagonist is a talent of Jiupin, and it is very worth wooing, especially since he may be a genius in the future. To do this, she had to set up the room herself. And the protagonist goes to the clinic to see a doctor, and it is confirmed that he has improved a lot. The rest will be left to time.
Chapter 8, don't call me Ah Zhi. The protagonist finally lives with each other, and sometimes it's not necessarily a good thing to live with someone who has a habit of cleanliness. The protagonist feels that he has made the wrong choice. However, the other party quickly got himself the Cheng family's gravitational algorithm.
Chapter 9, the shameless predecessor of Sima Yi. This world is a parallel world, and even the "Theory of Relativity" was written by Sima Yi, and the unit of measurement is horse. The protagonist tests his blood concentration again, and it is still very high. It's just that Ah Zhi reminds him that the neglect may be caused by other reasons.
Chapter 10, the basis of love is wanting to kill. The two of them enter the experience of nightmares, and the protagonist's secret is known by someone who has passed, and he also wants to take the opportunity to invite each other. As a result, overnight, the two couldn't talk about the result, the protagonist took out a pistol, and the other party immediately admitted defeat.
You Zhu, a level 4 author, is the author of two works, "The Sword of the Blue" and "Girl, You're Wrong".
"The Sword of the Blue" was ordered by him from the first 280, and it took seven months to write a masterpiece, which was so powerful that it took off.
"Girl, You're Wrong" currently has a starting collection of 16,600, a book city collection of 188, and 61 fans, but there are 5 league leaders.
Reason tells me that the number of fans is a bit weird. However, this chapter is very active, and it seems to be normal.
Especially Sister Lily, one of the three poisonous milks, has already written this book, and her popularity should have increased a lot.
Therefore, the right and believe that the data is normal.
In terms of content, the brain hole of this book is different from ordinary people.
The setting is very peculiar, and the ability awakening is about the highlights, the concentration of blood vessels, and the computing power of the brain domain. The concentration of bloodlines is related to genetics, similar to the blood limit in Naruto. Each family has a different bloodline power.
Brain algorithms, on the other hand, are related to mathematical laws and physical laws. For example, the Cheng family, where the protagonist is located, has a gravitational algorithm; The Xing family, which is good friends, is a mass effect, which is related to kinetic energy; The Wu family is emotionally manipulative; The Zhou family is a memory reader.
This setting is still very different from ordinary immortal cultivation. It's a little more anime-like, and it's very interesting. It is especially suitable for family marriage, practicing the technique of male and female joint attack, and achieving the effect that one plus one is greater than two.
The language characteristics are also very obvious, in addition to spoofing classic online text famous scenes, Internet jokes, magical brain circuits, are all good highlights.
The only flaw is that this is a new book, and readers may find it too short and not enjoyable.
But what I want to say is that you are in a hurry, and it is early in the car. It's always more interesting to pay attention early than to watch those lengthy monster fighting upgrades, right? No matter how bad it is, raise it~
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
The style of this book is very interesting, and the old bird's skill in playing new stalks is very strong.
It is worth everyone's attention to a wave~