Today I would like to recommend a new urban book to you.

"Cultivating Immortals Like This", Jack, Level 5 Author.

Category: Urban - Magical Super.

【Introduction】

Ordinary post-90s, ordinary college graduates, ordinary jobs.

Originally, Su Tong thought that this ordinary life would accompany him all his life, but there are always countless possibilities in the world, and when he got the stone that could travel at will between the modern world and the Xianxia world, everything changed.

When a longer lifespan and countless supernatural abilities that could only be found in Li appeared around him, what else could Su Tong do?

Of course, you can't escape the law of true fragrance!

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, Quarrel. The protagonist Su Tong, a 211-year-old Chinese college student, entered a garment factory as a reserve cadre. He finally took charge of the specific work, but he didn't deal with the new factory director, and the two had a big fight. When he returned to the dormitory, his palm was pierced by the stone he had scooped up, and blood seeped into the stone.

Chapter II, Military Orders. The hand is punctured, nothing unusual, and the protagonist is pulled by an acquaintance to go to the cafeteria to eat. They bumped into the boss's reprimand for the new factory director, and they also received a military order to complete the task. Although the contradictions have intensified, the results seem to be slowly getting better.

Chapter 3, Charging. The stone that the protagonist picked up before he found it in the dormitory turned into a goldfish. He charged the stone, and it was really rechargeable. It's just that the charging speed is a bit scary and expensive, and the electricity is gone in half an hour and fifty kilowatt-hours. He secretly went to charge the goldfish with electricity from the factory, and after filling it, the goldfish turned into stone again, which is so mysterious.

Chapter 4, Seeking Wealth and Danger. The protagonist holds the stone and enters a mysterious space, with green vegetation, extremely high temperatures, and nothing else out of the ordinary. Soon, he retreated from the mysterious space. The factory sent him additional manpower to assist in completing the production task. The division of labor between men and women is different, and the task is finally completed. However, he plans to go to that mysterious world to continue his adventure.

Chapter 5, Rejection. His friend came to him in the toilet, fearing that something would happen to him in the toilet. The two had an in-depth conversation, which can be regarded as heart-to-heart. Other colleagues had already helped him do all the tasks he had to do, and he wanted to invite a female colleague to dinner, but unfortunately he was refused. The other party is also very powerful at killing people.

[Brief comment]

Jack, a level 5 author, is the author of six works: "The End of the Ming Dynasty", "My Career in the Ming Dynasty", "I Was a Father in the Ming Dynasty", "My Wife is a Bandit", "My Career in the Republic of China", and "Cultivating Immortals Like This".

Two of them were ruthlessly sealed.

Of the four extant books, three historical texts have been completed. every day

And now this new book is an urban text. It's not a complete transformation, after all, I also wrote a book "My Wife is a Bandit" and "My Career in the Republic of China".

It's just that, to put it mildly, the trial reading experience was not very good, and I didn't feel like a level 5 author wrote it for a while.

Online articles, mostly small white texts, this is indeed understandable.

I've also tried to read a lot of Xiaobaiwen, but it's really very rare to be so white.

There is a means of writing, which is phonetic typing. It's just to use your mouth to pull and pull it all the time, correct the typos, and send it out. An hour can be tens of thousands of words.

My first impression of this book was that I had completed the first draft by phonetic typing. The colloquialism is very obvious, and there is no sense of elaboration.

The golden five chapters are simply terrible. The sense of age is very strong, and it is no different from the beginning ten years ago. I don't know if the author is angry with himself, a good historical essay, how promising.

If you have to write an urban Xiaobai essay that you are not good at, the key is that you can't write anything cool. The arrival of the gold finger is too slow, the function display is delayed again and again, and the number of words in each chapter is very large, but the actual content is very small.

It can be, from the first chapter, that he has been in hydrology, quite an obvious kind.

It is recommended that you can use this book as a negative textbook for novice writing, learn a little lesson from it, and highlight your own characteristics in the early stage.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

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【Cang's Whispering】

This book made me very disappointed with the author's level of 5.

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