165. Commenting on "Han Zuo Gaomen"
Picking up from the above, I recommend another historical text.
"Hanzuo Gaomen", the author is well-dressed, and the author is a level 5 author.
Classification history - two Jin, Sui and Tang dynasties.
【Introduction】
Shen Zhezi came to the early years of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, incarnated as the son of Jiangnan Haozong, with 10,000 acres of fertile land, thousands of family wealth, a group of servants, and a rare starting point of high matching, but unfortunately his father was a rebellious habitual offender.
Dressed in the south, the five chaotic flowers, the lamentation of China, the sad song of Han Zuo.
The family is unreliable, the north and the south are raccoon dogs, two litters of bad species, and they only seek Gou'an.
Shenzhou's fertile land of the Han family, how can Hu Lu be allowed to make a fuss!
Poor all my life, I want to build a Northern Expedition righteous division that kills Hulu, restores Shenzhou, and Xinghanzuo!
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, The Pride of Koto. The protagonist Shen Zhezi crossed over and became the son of Jiangdong Haozong. But his father was a brainless rebel, and he saw that he was about to rebel again, and his good days were over. The protagonist hurriedly stops his father, on the pretext of killing him to sacrifice the flag.
Chapter 2, Wang Men Beiling, Pig Belly also. The protagonist stops his father, but is scolded by the other party. He put forward three extremely realistic reasons to persuade, thinking that his father had understood, but unexpectedly, Wei Jin was a bit of a backbone, and his father still insisted on raising troops. The protagonist had no choice but to sacrifice a killer feature.
Chapter 3, The Marriage of the Door. The suggestion made by the protagonist is to ask the Langya royal family for a marriage to him, which is absolutely impossible according to the class at the time. After some persuasion, Father Shen finally dispelled the idea of starting an army. At this time, the lobbyist of the Shen family sent by the emperor turned back and handed over the matter to Shen's father.
Chapter 4, the north wind blows dust, and the time is sad. After appreciating the singing and dancing, Shen's father not only showed that he would no longer rebel, but also exerted more pressure on the imperial court. Subsequently, Shen's father began to write letters to heroes from all walks of life, and the protagonist was shocked for a while, it was all real money.
Chapter 5, Family Studies. The protagonist reads from his father's style that his father is definitely not simple, and the Shen family is by no means as bandit and powerful as he seems. What I didn't expect was that the family study turned out to be "Ram Spring and Autumn", and the insights were very unique.
Chapter 6, Slander and murder are worse than swords. Shen's father explained to the protagonist why he resigned, if he really became the third prince of the imperial court, the Shen family would not be integrated into the major families in the future, and the end would be extremely bleak. Later, when leaving the manor, the protagonist realizes that he is such a tyrant.
Chapter VII, Military. Shen's father takes the protagonist to inspect the barracks, and many of the scenes are different from what he imagined, and he has a deeper understanding of "Ci Bu Commanding Soldiers". After consulting the military force, he also had a deeper understanding of the Shen family's military strength and the weakness of the imperial court.
Chapter 8, there are no good people in Hongtong County. By asking about the strategists and generals, and their reactions, the protagonist bluntly states in front of his father that these people are probably unreliable. And Father Shen already knew it.
Chapter 9, Recreating Sun Wu. Father Shen, as a person from Eastern Wu, even had the ambition to recreate Sun Wu, but unfortunately the situation is like this, and the situation of the Shen family is becoming more and more difficult. Either it is reversed or it falls, and it is urgent to break the game.
Chapter 10, Xia Wu Wei Zhou, there is a philosopher king in the world. The protagonist took the initiative to invite Ying, joined the club as a hostage, and made a deal for his father's advisers. If you can convince the Hui Ji Yu clan, no matter how bad it is, you will counterattack your father and save the family business. Shen's father thanked his son for his great wisdom and gave him "Wei Zhou", which has far-reaching implications. The protagonist lives up to his high expectations and earns a county when he first arrives in Huiji.
[Brief comment]
Story features:
This book mainly tells the story of the Sun family in the south of the Yangtze River in the early years of the Eastern Jin Dynasty.
The protagonist Sun Zhezi, the son of Jiangnan Haozong, successfully stopped his father from rebelling, and the fate of the family changed as a result.
Although the Shen family has 10,000 acres of fertile land, thousands of family wealth, groups of servants, and thousands of private soldiers, the family situation is still not optimistic.
Surrender or battle, there are not many options in front of you.
The protagonist is talented and intelligent, and through the identity bonus, he can be familiar with the history of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, and he can't help him turn the situation around instantly.
He had no choice but to risk his life at the age of eight, go to the meeting in person, and stir up a storm.
Character characteristics
The protagonist Sun Zhezi has a very high IQ, rigorous logic, and when he is reasonable, he convinces people with reason; When you are unreasonable, pretend to be like the wind and act decisively.
The essence of "mercy is not in charge of the army" has not yet been grasped by him.
Too young, still need to exercise, seems to be "almost a demon", in the current situation, he is also the most intelligent and wise man.
It is not enough for him to judge the situation and control the future, but he still has to outperform these natives.
Stylistic features
The style of the book is still very rigorous.
and his new book "Crowned Tang Emperor", in the same vein.
The writing is so beautiful that it makes people forget the story.
Despite its numerous advantages, this half-literate and half-written style of writing at any time is still daunting to many readers.
It gives the impression that between popular history and vernacular literary history, the role of the author seems to be only at the level of translation and understanding.
It doesn't make people feel that the author is creating a story, as if he is translating and combing through history.
Fortunately, the results of this book are much better than the new ones. The starting point collection is 130,000, the book city collection is 3.38 million, and the number of fans is 310,000.
As I said above, his writing style does not fit in with the online text market.
Because, sometimes online articles really don't need overly elaborate writing and rigorous historical materials.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
Reading two books by the same author in a row, and they are works of the same style, the reading speed is greatly affected.
The author's writing is really extraordinary, and his knowledge is also very rich, but the entertainment and popularity of the story are greatly reduced.
Without a good story, writing and knowledge, it will only drag down the book's grades.
In fact, despite the suspicion of complaining, I really envy the author's merits.
If he didn't write historical essays, he would have been able to figure out a different feeling if he had written about cultivating immortals and immortals, or urban emotions.
If you can't do it, writing some beautiful essays and essays is more popular than boring historical essays.
The online article is really not easy to mix.
There is never a shortage of authors with amazing writing at the starting point, but authors who are good at storytelling and magical brains.
If you have the above points at the same time, you are a truly rare talent, and it is possible to write a hit that readers like.
However, you don't have to cater to your readers' preferences.
Readers are very ruthless, like a book, and will also ramble a few bad words and rub salt on the author's wounds.
For books they don't like, after they prostitute them in vain, they have to smear them, which is really sad.
So, it's really rare to be able to persevere all the way, keep writing, develop your own writing style, and stick to it.
If you don't really love writing, who wants to do such thankless mental work?
Finally, I hope you will support the historical essay, it's really hard to write!
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