465. Commenting on "A Thousand Autumns Immortal"

Today I would like to introduce to you a 1.11 million word Xianxia.

"Thousand Autumn Immortals", the ninth destiny, level 5 author.

Category: Xianxia - Mythological Xiuzhen.

【Introduction】

Literary Edition:

Huihui Xingdouhuan article, chasing away the idle clouds and farewell to the emperor's hometown. A pill is refined outside the square, and a hundred poems are drunk and crazy.

Hutian has its own Changchun realm, and the island is quiet and nightly. Stepping through the blue clouds, the Nine Heavens are proud of the Emperor.

The dream is broken, the yellow grain is closed, and the smoke and waves are not visible. Cook lead and mercury for 3,000 days, and jump out of yin and yang for 800 years.

The sword hangs in the south and goes north, and the air is across the sky and the moon is slightly headed. When he came, the film was flawless, and the high sticker Qingxiao refused to accept it.

Popular version:

A modern person traveled to Dashang, at this time the emperor collapsed, the saint appeared, the phoenix sang Xiqi, and the hearts of the eight hundred princes floated.

The three religions jointly promoted the god list, but the protagonist unknowingly got on the chariot of big business, and the story will start here.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, self-hanging southeast branch. The protagonist Yu Qi traveled to Dashang, so poor that he was about to starve to death, there was no system, and his relatives were dying. He finally came to his parents' grave and wanted to commit suicide, but was saved by the rich lady.

In the second chapter, hang the southeast branch again. This place belongs to the property of the Zhou family, and the protagonist has to go elsewhere if he wants to commit suicide. Miss Zhou threw down the food for him and left with the maid ring. The protagonist didn't rush to eat in front of people, and he didn't care about these things, he wanted to be a full ghost. As a result, the hanging was successful and the system was activated. He couldn't see what was drawn in the continuous lottery, because it was dark in front of him.

Chapter 3, Tiangang Change. The protagonist is once again rescued from a tree and given food. After the person leaves, the protagonist begins to claim the system rewards. I never expected that the exercises drawn would actually come from someone else's "Tiangang Change".

Chapter 4, The Confusion of the World. With the help of the system, the protagonist's cultivation can be regarded as an entry, because what is sprayed on the pores of Xianxia's standard has already appeared. On his way home, he went to the river to take a bath. When he met the old man secretly cooking dog meat, he didn't rush to eat it. Later, his sister finally found him, and his only relative cried into tears.

Chapter 5, The Way of Skill. The protagonist follows her sister to her husband's grandson's house, and her sister brings out the food, but before the protagonist can eat a few bites, she is knocked over by her sister's mother-in-law. The long-accumulated contradiction broke out in an instant, and the protagonist hit the Sun family's father and son and decided to leave here completely.

【Brief Comment】Reading Network

The Ninth Heavenly Mandate, a level 5 author, is the author of six works such as "The Inheritance of Shen Gong Leopard", "Yipin Daomen" and "Taishang Zhifu".

"A Thousand Autumns Immortal", the current starting point collection is 85,200, the book city collection is 5,836, the number of fans is 160,000, the alliance leader is 7, and the silver league is 1. It was put on the shelves on July 10, with the first order of 1700, and the boutique was reached on September 10. This is his fourth boutique Xianxia.

This is an old author, and his works can basically be completed smoothly, and his reputation is not bad.

This book gives me the impression that the writing skills are quite mature, the details are more rigorous, and the style is more relaxed and funny.

After all, the system that can only be activated by hanging the southeast branch twice is also full of personality. The author even rewarded the novice of the system and drew a book from someone else.

The key is that the book called "Tiangang Change" does not seem to be very famous. Could it be that the man is the author's tuba?

The question now is whether the protagonist's newbie reward is extremely unrebellious, and whether he can control it in the later stage. These are probably the things that the author should be thinking about.

All in all, this book is okay, and the title of the book appeals to me.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

This book is quite controversial, some people like it, some people sneer at it.

From the writer's point of view, every word is the author's painstaking efforts, and no one is allowed to point fingers.

To point, point yourself.

From the perspective of the reader's reading experience and the author's pursuit of progress, whether it is a good or bad review, it is the reader's feedback and a rare opportunity for the author to improve himself.

So, please don't scold me, just care more.