When I saw the title of this book, I immediately thought of Sauron, the Eye of the Lord of the Rings.

"The Evolutionary Eye", Asherro, Level 5 Author.

Category: Fantasy - High Martial World.

【Introduction】

Go out with a knife, and the equipment is all about exploding!

Bai Wen, an online writer, was brought to the era of psionic energy a hundred years later by a magical eyeball.

The infiltration of the spirit child, the wreak of mutant beasts, the invasion of the spirit monsters, and the data-based earth are like a super-large game!

I came, I saw, I conquered!

Bai Wen opened his eyes and roared out a strong language, but he was only 130 years away from the college entrance examination.

Conquer the era of psionic energy, starting from becoming the top student in the college entrance examination.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

In the first chapter, I became handsome and stronger. Bai Wen, a writer who wrote online articles, traveled to Bai Xiaowen, a high school student a hundred years later, and his blood-colored eyeballs increased his spiritual power, which could see all objects with spiritual power. The most important thing is that he has changed from a fat house to a handsome guy with a reverse appearance, and a beautiful sister.

Chapter 2, Zhou Yi. The protagonist is enrolled in a combat class and is expected to become an Awakened in the future. The person who beat him to death was his classmate Zhou Yi, and there was a death index in the training class, so Zhou Yi would be punished at most. But in the hospital, Zhou Yi definitely didn't dare to do it. In addition, the ward also has three girls who know the protagonist.

Chapter 3, Li Shuyi. 's daughter Li Shuyi appeared and drove the perpetrator Zhou Yi away, and this thing took his girlfriend to chase after other girlfriends, arrogant. Li Shuyi and the protagonist have feelings for each other, and this time they are not only a farewell, but also a help. She is about to wake up and give the protagonist a comfortable job before leaving.

Chapter 4, Supergod Apothecary. It was a very imposing pharmacy, and people who were not rich or noble came in and out of it to express their intentions and were taken to the director's office. He was asked to complete the work of transcribing the label, but with the insight of the Eye of Evolution, he discovered the clue and recorded it as proof. The supervisor was obsessed, so he went to the manager with two potions to report it.

Chapter 5, Dry Flip Supervisor. After revealing that he was recommended by Li Shuyi, he won the trust of the mausoleum chief, and then he took out evidence to prove the fact that the supervisor had been greedy for ink for a long time. The store manager made a decisive move and took down the supervisor and his accomplices. Later, two job offers are offered to the protagonist, and the protagonist chooses to work in the pharmaceutical department.

Chapter 6 is another year of college entrance examination season. The class teacher emphasized the importance of the college entrance examination in the classroom and informed the students that a field drill would be organized in the near future. The protagonist's meditation ends, and his strength grows. After school, he was blocked by Zhou Yi, and the other party's hostility was obvious, just to drive the protagonist out of the combat class.

Chapter VII, Assistant Examination. Someone in the pharmaceutical department was promoted, and the assistant seat was vacant, and a group of miscellaneous people were eyeing each other for this place. One of them, the swaggering, seemed to have made sure that they could hold on

Chapter 8, Announcement of Results. If the test paper is difficult, the gap will be opened from the eleventh question. Fan Renjie, who thinks he is very playful, became more and more confident after witnessing his achievements. In order to get rid of the protagonist, he took the initiative to find fault and did not hesitate to bet.

Chapter 9, the classic lines of Xueba. Fan Renjie's score of 76 was the highest among the apprentices who got the test papers, and in the end, only one person made it to the interview, which he thought was him. As a result, the protagonist scored a hundred points in the exam. "You score 76 because you only have 76 in your ability. I scored 100 points because the test paper only had a total of 100 points. Eventually, he was hired.

Chapter 10, A Powerful Replica. The protagonist follows the master to make potions, and the cooperation is getting better and better. After the production was over, he did not leave, but extracted materials rich in spiritual power from the waste materials, perfectly reproduced the master's pharmaceutical process, and made a strengthening potion. After taking it, he not only started his career as a pharmacist, but also improved a lot.

[Brief comment]

About the author

Asherro, a level 5 author, is the author of five works such as "Xuanba Nine", including 2 masterpieces.

This book is his best one, with the first order of 2700, the starting point collection of 230,000, the book city collection of 150,000, the number of fans 560,000, and the alliance leader 6.

Book friends praised the book as having the posture of a god in the early and middle periods, but it ended hastily in the later period.

The author also admits that the world pattern behind it is too big and the writing is crooked.

Let's make this clear first, and give everyone a preventive shot.

Synopsis

This book mainly tells the story of traveling to a hundred years later with the eye of evolution, from an otaku street author to the chosen son to save the world.

The protagonist has a reverse appearance, has a super brain, and the eye of evolution can perceive everything, although his physique is weak, with the blessing of the perfect kryptonite potion, he has also grown up step by step.

Especially in the early days, when I completed the hero-level transfer mission, the starting point was far more than the girl who was known as the proud daughter.

After the Super Cup, it ended hastily, but crooked is crooked, and the author knows that he can't make up for it, and he doesn't want to add dozens of chapters.

Character characteristics

The protagonist was killed at the beginning, and his own strength was too poor.

Fortunately, with the help of her daughter and the blessing of the reverse system, she has grown up quickly.

Although the system is relatively inverted, the protagonist's super brain is really easy to use, and it helps him to deal with it perfectly in many cases

His heart is also very persistent, and he will work hard to accomplish the goals he identifies, no matter how difficult it is.

So, it's still more bloody.

Stylistic features

This is a work released three years ago, and many of the settings are not very suitable from the current point of view. In fact, the difference is not too big, and the road of this book is still relatively obvious.

It's not much different from the urban outfit slap in the face.

What is more unique is that the early copy setting is very rigorous, and at a glance, the information has been checked.

Data flow, easy to write when you start, just heap data. But as the realm rises, the data collapses.

So, if you want to write a similar work, be sure to do a good job of setting it.

Because, if you don't get it, you'll collapse faster!

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

As mentioned above, the first thing that attracted me was the title.

The function of the Evolutionary Eye was similar to that of the Golden Pupil at first.

But the psionic transformation of the real world does have something in common with books such as the world of high martial arts.

Among them, various dungeon settings and slap in the face coincide with game texts and urban texts.

It can be seen that if you want to write a high-quality essay, in addition to endowing with transcendent wizards, you must prepare sufficient information, do a good job of rigorous settings, plan a good writing outline, and control the realm of the characters.

In addition, it is really necessary to learn the characteristics of various books, absorb their advantages, combine their own abilities, and give full play to the characteristics.

Even if there are only one or two points to zoom into, write to the point where it is different.

No matter how bad it is, bursting the liver is also a good shortcut. The strength is not enough, and the number is to make up.

In short, this completed "Evolutionary Eye" is still worth a look, and it is good to learn various paths.

When you learn thousands of ways to create online articles, you may find something shocking.

It doesn't seem to be going far!

Because, everyone seems to be more in favor of flow.