381. Commenting on "The Coming of Heaven"

Today I recommend a book that I have always wanted to push but don't know how.

"The Advent of Heaven", Yanyu Jiangnan, Level 4 author.

Category: Fantasy - Otherworldly Continent.

【Introduction】

Chu Jungui was originally a secret experimental subject cultivated by the Tang Dynasty with forbidden methods, trying to create a deep space warrior who could conquer any corner of the Star Sea. However, in an accident, he broke away from the experimental base, broke the restrictions, and gained an independent personality. Since then, in this great era of interstellar development, he has conquered all directions, stepped on the galaxy, and finally opened a new era for mankind.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Who Am I. He wakes up, lives according to the intelligent program, eats breakfast, looks at the sea view, takes a plane, and arrives at the base. He started training, and the first two projects were completed smoothly, but there was a small accident in the intelligent personality test. He seemed to realize something.

Chapter 2, Memory 7. He is a deep space warrior, but he is distracted by the strange questions of the experimenters. The base was mysteriously attacked, and the No. 7 memory was taken by Dr. Chu and finally put into his body.

Chapter 3, Against the Tide. The protagonist is given a memory and name by Dr. Chu, and a spaceship escape is arranged. Only then did he learn that his previous residence and memories were believed to be in control. He actually lives at the space base. He piloted the spaceship to escape from the base, but the enemy besieged him. It was still Dr. Chu who piloted the fighter plane and showed the king's combat ability and rushed towards the enemy.

Chapter 4, Freedom. The spaceship makes a space jump and arrives on a completely new planet with an air environment that is perfect for him to survive. But I kept thinking of Dr. Chu's words, thinking of the picture of the other party protecting himself and leaving, and seeing the earnest teachings left by the other party.

Chapter 5, Basic Survival. Using the ship's own survival tools, the protagonist digs a deep trench and assembles the tools, preparing to gain a foothold in this place. But he didn't expect that the oxygen content in the air was not enough, and there was something wrong with his breathing.

Chapter 6, the people take food as the sky. The protagonist uses the existing conditions to make a lead-acid battery to ensure that he has electricity in his hands. He went deep into the forest again and brought back a lot of food and sap, but unfortunately he still couldn't find a water source. The barbecue made by the little beast was very high in sulfur and tasted so bad that he could only turn off his sense of taste and barely eat.

Chapter 7, Justice and Truth. In the era of interstellar exploration, the experience of his ancestors told him that firepower is justice, and caliber is truth. He made bullets and pistols and continued to go several kilometers further and found a source of water, but did not come close. He built himself a wooden house, and began to build a blueprint for the heavy machine gun in his mind, and he made it smoothly.

Chapter 8, Melee Firearms. The protagonist finds himself in the territory of a predator, and something is secretly observing him. He laid traps around the cabin, and as night fell, he prepared for a counter-hunt. After a fierce confrontation, he killed a wormman. These monsters have rough skin and thick meat, but they don't have a high IQ.

Chapter 9, is it really good. A spaceship descends here, dropping a lot of fighters, making the protagonist think that they are here to hunt him down. Under the ambush of the alert, he witnesses one fighter being knocked out by his teammates, and he finds another opportunity to knock the other unconscious. Judging from their weapon system, it is possible that this group of people is only here for individual exercises.

Chapter 10, Mystery Player. The protagonist wants to quit the training battlefield of this gang, but he is regarded as an opponent, so he has to fight back with all his might, and soon easily dissolves some of them. His skill and ability were so superior that he aroused the suspicion of the ship's commander, but he did not send drones to investigate. The protagonist finally meets a powerful character with an identity.

[Brief comment]

Yanyu Jiangnan, a level 4 author, currently has three works under his name: "Dream Empty City of Six Traces", "Daoyuan Futu" and "Heavenly Advent".

"Blasphemy", "Dust", "Demon Hunting Notes", "Sin City" and "King of the Eternal Night" I don't know where they went, maybe they were sealed.

This book was released on January 1, 2019, with an initial order of 6300, and a high-quality product was reached on January 2. At present, the starting point has a collection of 190,000, a book city collection of 23,400, 410,000 fans, and 29 alliance leaders.

In my impression, it seems that he should not be a level 4 author, and from relevant sources, he used to be a level 5 author.

Downgraded?

And his "Blasphemy" is a masterpiece, and with this book, he should be a god-level author. Is it a walk?

There are thousands of online authors, and they may really have passed away.

His book "The Advent of Heaven" is currently being updated weakly, and he is in a state of constant thinking, and he doesn't know what the hell is going on. I read books

Because judging from the content, it is a very good science fiction work, and it has little to do with fantasy.

This is a story about interstellar civilizations and super soldiers.

The protagonist is an experimental subject, used to fight in the sea of stars, but unfortunately the base was attacked, he was able to escape under the protection of Dr. Chu, and with the identity, memories and hopes left by the other party, he successfully landed on a planet suitable for survival.

However, the development of the planet is very difficult, but fortunately, the protagonist is an experimental subject, who has a strong physical fitness and the ability to survive in the wild, and can make various equipment, energy and weapons, so he barely survives.

It's just a coincidence that he actually encountered the military training of a certain army, and after being involved, in order to protect himself, he had to show his super individual combat ability, and was favored by a certain big man.

He finally returned to civilization again, and was entrusted with a new life.

This book is very good, but it is a bit boring and verbose in the early stage, and there are too many descriptions of wilderness survival, which makes people doze off.

However, the detailed setting and knowledge reserve are still quite powerful, and it can be seen that the author's skills are very strong. The fights are also intense, and the rhythm is good.

It's just that there are fewer jokes, the laughter is a little less interesting, not relaxed and pleasant enough, and it is biased towards traditional science fiction literature.

Coupled with the fact that the update is not very good, the results may not meet expectations.

After the vicious circle, the motivation to write decreases a lot, and there is a high possibility that it will end badly.

This is the online article, no one has preferential treatment!

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

Today's author has a somewhat similar name to the legendary one who wrote "Dragons".

In fact, the level is not much different, but the degree of heat is different.

Just like the platinum writer I eat tomatoes and the great god writer tomatoes, the names are similar, but the fame is much worse.

There is no way to do this kind of thing, Chenji Tang Hongdou's name is very content, but the results of the new book have not risen.

This is the online article, and no one has preferential treatment.

I advise new authors, let's stay up first, and if you can't get through, then continue to boil.

If you can't survive, let's change your career, you can't die on a tree!