What's wrong? Yi Shu asked slightly nervously.

"I'm not very satisfied."

"Not satisfied? How so? If I was really not satisfied, you should have had someone kick me out a long time ago, how could I be allowed to stand here properly? Yi Shu asked rhetorically.

"Your drawing is good, but it doesn't meet my requirements."

"Your request? Didn't you say that day? It's easy to circulate, and everyone can understand it, so can't anyone understand what I draw? ”

It can be seen that Yi Shu is very confident in his works.

"You have a lot of questions."

"......" easy book.

"I am Party A's father, and the one who wants to give the money is naturally the one who has the final say. You didn't meet my requirements, shouldn't you ask me what my specific requirements were? If you are not satisfied, can you revise it? ”

"......" easy book.

Well, it seems that what the book says is right, if it is really difficult for women and villains to raise.

He obviously did what she said before, but now he has changed his hexagram again, and he has such righteous words that people can't refute the reason.

In order to complete the content of the first five chapters, he endured three days without sleep and read the whole book, just to understand the plot direction of the story, so as to set the image of the characters, determine the style benchmark of the painting, and grasp the overall style of painting.

He asked himself very attentively, without a trace of slackness at all, how could he say that he was dissatisfied in her opinion?

If he was not satisfied, why waste five days of his time and give him so much hope?

Well, he'd like to hear where he's not drawing well enough.

"Then you say, what are you not satisfied with?"

"If you look at it by ordinary people, you will inevitably think that the painting is good, there is a plot, a style and novelty, and the painting style is very vivid, and the plot is also expressed, which is very storytelling."

"But in my opinion, it's not enough."

"Have you ever walked down the street and listened to what a listener had to say about this story? Have you ever seen what the candy man about Journey to the West is sold on the market? ”

"If you want me to say, your paintings are not full enough, and there are some details missing."

"I remember saying that it should be easy to circulate so that everyone can understand it. Your paintings are just paintings, purely based on stories, and are not completely connected to the story. ”

"If someone who has read Journey to the West comes to see your painting and understands it completely, what about those who haven't? You must understand it, right? ”

Hearing Bai Jinli say so much in one breath, Yi Shu couldn't help but ask.

"Since you know so much, why don't you draw it yourself and what do you want me to do?"

"I'm tired. I have money, why don't I find someone to paint? Why do it yourself? ”

"......" easy book.

"Besides, I can only see, not draw."

"............" easy book.

Okay, it's going to lose again.

"Then what do you say is completely connected to the story?" Yi Shu asked.

"Yi Shu, when you painted in the past, you just simply painted, didn't you write poems and lyrics on the paintings?"

"Absolutely."

"Isn't that enough?" After Bai Jinli finished speaking, she picked up the tea next to her and took a sip.

"You mean, you have to put the text of the story next to the painting??"

"Why not?"

"I've never painted anything like this." Yi Shu opened his mouth sincerely.

"I know, life is still long, you need to keep innovating, you can try."

"What five hundred taels?"

"After you draw a painting that satisfies me, I will naturally fulfill my promise, after all, you have also seen that my family is not short of money." Bai Jinli had the tone of a sister.

"But now ......"

"Xiangming, take him to the account office for twenty-five taels of silver in a while, which is considered a deposit."

"There are a total of 100 chapters in the book Journey to the West, and I will pay you a total of 500 taels of silver, that is to say, if you draw a chapter, it will be 5 taels of silver."

"What you brought to me today is the first five chapters, but I'm not satisfied, so I don't have any money."

"Considering that we will continue to cooperate in the future, and your situation is quite special, I asked the account office to advance your silver for the first five chapters."

"But if you run away or go back, I'll make you miserable."

"Oh, you don't know yet, do you? My father-in-law is an official, my sister-in-law is the county lord, I know the people from the Prime Minister's Mansion, the people from the General's Mansion, think about it carefully. ”

"......" was stimulated by Bai Jinli's show-off + threatened by Yi Shu.

"Also, don't ask, although I'm very powerful, I'm not familiar with you, so it's impossible to be idle and panic and help you get revenge."

"We just have an unequal partnership, and if you want to sign a deed, I have the final say."

"......" Yi Shu, who originally wanted to talk to Bai Jinli about the conditions, had not yet spoken, and suddenly got stuck in his throat.

"How's it going, do you regret it now?"

"If you don't regret it, isn't it just a deed? I signed. Yi Shu opened his mouth without thinking.

He is so miserable now, if he gives up this opportunity, I am afraid that he will never be able to get up.

He'd wasted so much time that he didn't want to waste it any longer.

He will avenge the revenge of his parents and his own hatred. What belongs to him, he will also get it back little by little.

Otherwise, he is really in vain!

"Very good, Xiangming, give him the deed."

"Yes."

Soon, Yi Shu got the deed that Bai Jinli had prepared a long time ago, listing many terms, and read it carefully.

I have to say that the deed prepared by Bai Jinli is really comprehensive.

The time, the people, the events, the points to be aware of, the rules that need to be kept secret, the chronology of the payment of the money to him, and what to do if the agreement is violated, etc., are all written on the paper.

There is even another article that says that Party B only needs to complete the tasks in the deed within the specified time.

In other words, after he completed Bai Jinli's request within the specified time, he could do what he wanted to do the rest of the time, and Bai Jinli would not interfere with him.

That's beautiful.

After reading it, Yi Shu signed and drew without any doubts.

"Xiangming, take him to the account office to pay the money."

"Yes."

After dealing with this matter, Bai Jinli asked the next person about Luo Ningmin's whereabouts, and then learned that she was arrested by Mrs. Li to try writing and playing chess.

She also had something to do, so Bai Jinli continued to be busy with her own affairs.

——

Outside the city, Kyoto Riding Camp.

When Lin Shenyuan was training the soldiers of the thirteenth battalion, he suddenly received a letter from Bai Jinli Rang Erhuo from Chasing Wind.

After opening and reading the contents of the letter, Lin Shenyuan's face instantly darkened.

If I'm not mistaken, Feng Li left Beijing today, right?

And under his arrangement, Lin Ziang, as a member of the envoy group escorting the Vermilion Bird Kingdom, was also in that team at the moment.

"Chasing the wind, I have something that you need to do immediately."

"Master, you say."

After giving the order to chase the wind, Lin Shenyuan walked to the training ground of the thirteenth battalion again, and then hooked his finger at Xiong Shuai, the deputy battalion commander led by him.

"Boss, isn't it? Me again? Xiong Shuai's face instantly wrinkled into a bitter melon.

"Less nonsense, this time, I'll let you make five moves."

Hearing Lin Shenyuan say this, Xiong Shuai immediately straightened his face, and then took advantage of Lin Shenyuan's inattention to make a quick move.

In the first five moves, Lin Shenyuan really didn't take the initiative to make a move, but just kept dismantling the moves.

After five moves, Lin Shenyuan began to take the initiative to attack.

After about thirty rendezvous, the red tassel spear in Xiong Shuai's hand was picked on the ground, and an unsheathed long sword was against his neck.

On top of that, his whole body hurts.

"Boss, I lost." Xiong Shuai opened his mouth flat.

As a deputy battalion commander, he is easy to do.

In addition to training the rabbit cubs of the thirteenth battalion every day, he also has to be a target for the boss and be ravaged like this by the boss.

The boss's strength is too strong, saying that he is fighting him, but in fact, he is completely abusing him.

It's just a matter of defeating him, but the boss's martial arts moves, the way of shooting is very strange, and he never follows common sense.

Not only can you defeat him quickly, but it can also make him enjoy the pain all over his body while being defeated, which is really sour.

"You haven't been training the way I said lately?" Lin Shenyuan glanced at him.

"Yes, yes, yes, boss, I'm definitely not lazy. In the past, if you beat me like this, I would have been lying on the ground and unable to get up. ”

"Now look at me, am I still alive?" Xiong Shuai hurriedly spoke.

This is the truth.

When he played with the boss a few times before, he couldn't pass so many tricks at all.

And he clearly felt that the boss had saved some strength.

In that case, he was miserable, miserable, and his body was in pain for a long time.

But since he trained in those strange ways that the boss said, not only him, but all the brothers in the thirteenth battalion have grown.

First, everyone's physical fitness has improved and their physical fitness has increased.

For example, when it was time to have lunch at noon, everyone obviously finished the training together, but the people of the 13th battalion ran the fastest and were always the first to eat.

Another example is that when I used to fight with people from other battalions, I would inevitably get hurt.

And now, the men of their battalion have hard fists and are resistant to beating.

Second, everyone's reaction ability is much faster than before, and their patience is much better.

Third......

All in all, under the leadership of their boss, the people of their thirteenth battalion have been working hard to become stronger, and they have faintly become the strongest battalion in the entire Xiaoqi Kyoto battalion.

But that's not enough.

Because under the boss, they still can't get past many tricks.

As the deputy battalion commander, he has to be called over by the boss from time to time to practice.

"Too weak."

"Uh, boss, I'll train hard."

"Tell everyone to pack up their things, and after a cup of tea at the slowest pace, set off to go outside to practice."

"What? Calendar...... Experience? ”

"What? Questions? Lin Shenyuan glanced at him lightly.

"No, my subordinates will go and order."

Xiong Shuai shook his head, turned around and went to tell everyone in the thirteenth battalion to pack their clothes, weapons, and horses.