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After reading yesterday's chapter, I was a little confused, and I felt very uncomfortable with my inner shock, and I didn't write a word for a day yesterday.

Recently, I have been writing these chapters very carefully, but I still saw that some brothers said that it was very watery, and I am now a little confused about the definition of water, and I am falling into self-doubt.

I've read the latest chapter at least seven or eight times in the evening, and I still don't understand what the problem is.

Some brothers said that I wrote too detailed and trivial, and said a lot of unnecessary explanations to treat readers as idiots.

To be honest, I've encountered a lot of situations before, and even this book has appeared a few times, and if it's a little more subtle, someone will jump out and say something buggy, and what they can't understand, which leads me to write like this.

Some brothers said that the point was not obvious and they were very messy, and some brothers said that it was too procrastinating and intermittent.

The core of this little Gao Yu Dynasty is not what pretending to be forced and forced, but the protagonist goes from a weak chicken to a bull, and the transition from not forcing to being forced.

The power of the protagonist is a bit complicated, and because of the power system of this book, I have to explain in detail that it has been improved so much, otherwise it is easy to have a fault in the back.

You may have noticed that in the last Great Gao Dynasty, the protagonist's battle did not improve a little.

This volume is to make the protagonist transition from scratch, and the foreshadowing and promotion of the entire volume are in preparation for the next major event, the next volume of "Whispers of the Old Gods".

Of course, I definitely have a problem myself, but I don't think it's a matter of the attitude of coping with things and making up the number of words, it should be that my pen and control of the rhythm of the story are really not in place.

You may not feel the improvement that I am working on, but I do feel that I am making a little bit of progress as I write.

I'm still thinking and researching, and if it feels necessary, I'll rewrite that chapter from yesterday.

If you have any suggestions and ideas, you can leave a message, and I will read and reply. Thank you all for your support, thank you!

Today's update will be a little late, please forgive me.

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