I heard that there should be a testimonial on the shelf, as a little budding new, I also followed the trend to write one, and by the way, I would like to make a reflection and summary.

First of all, thank you readers, I don't dislike reading it all the way, after all, this writing is not very good, I'm ashamed, and I will try to correct it.

It's not easy to go all the way, thank you again for your support, first of all, thank you to the editor Blu-ray.

Brother Captain of the Iron Blood Banner helped a lot in the early stage and helped me get to the chapter push of the great god of water.

In addition, thanks to the two alliance leaders, the iron-blooded wind and the plum rain falling moss, they are generous and deserved.

There is also a ticket king mud long wet sand wall (remember to give me my monthly pass!) ）

The list of other tips is as follows, Meow Meow Don't Love Meow, FrancisLW021, Mo Scarlet Xinyu, Red Star Bear General, Pretender Senior Brother, Wei's No Danger, Chen Shouxin, Dog Tail Ring 2011, Sand Leak in the Hourglass, Nothing to Do, Cat Who Loves to Watch Rabbits, Compendium Process, Suddenly Another Summer, Dayuan Lele Bottle, Elk's Face, GivenUp, Hu Dou 509, Flying Dance" Xiaoyao.

Some of them have changed their names to the latest IDs.

As a newcomer, writing such a long story will inevitably lead to problems of one kind or another. Even if you have an outline, you still write badly, which has something to do with your pen power.

After more than two months of perseverance, there was a low ebb period during the period, and I always felt that I was not satisfied with what I wrote, and I had to update it head-on, and it was very painful to write.

As a newcomer, everyone should be more responsible, I will slowly polish and strive to improve my level.

Please also continue to support all readers, you can come to some of the votes and rewards, and the most important thing, subscribe! Subscribe! Subscribe!

The important thing is said three times, please subscribe to support, after all, it doesn't cost a few cents, and subscribing is the greatest recognition of the author.

Tomorrow morning at eight o'clock on the shelves, three more, and then depending on the subscription situation, add one more for every hundred subscriptions, if it reaches a thousand (I'm thinking about fart eating), add an additional ten more!!

(Blow, it's impossible to get to a thousand anyway.) ）

But there must always be a dream, and I beg you to make the first order.

So now let's talk about the summary, a budding author, with a lot of blood, plunged into this big pit. The writing is average, the level is limited, and I thank you readers for not giving up.

This book looks like a brain hole, but when I read it, I found that it was not like that, and I will say sorry first, this is my problem.

Although I know that the three golden chapters are important, the beginning is as light as water, which is one of the main reasons for the dismal results of this book.

I don't want this to happen, because I really can't write the beginning, I don't know when this problem can be changed, sometimes I know it's wrong, but I can't change it, it's very painful.

Another is that the protagonist is set to travel through the loss of memory.,This is the outline.,But it caused a big trouble.,That is, some background settings were not explained well in the early stage.,I put some background-related things too far back.。

This makes it difficult for everyone to read, and many people in the comment area say they can't understand it.

On the one hand, my writing level is limited, and I miss a lot of things, and on the other hand, I want to bury a lot of foreshadowing, which leads to some things being unclear.

I've started to change these questions, including the previous chapters, and I'm correcting them little by little.

Including adding some corresponding background introductions and settings in the front, I will mention these introductions again later, so it will not affect everyone to continue reading, and you don't have to look at the previous plot.

Probably the biggest change will be at the beginning, but of course when I think about how to change it.

This book is not a small white text, I want to write something different, this is too iron-headed.

In addition, there is a problem with my own writing, and the plot is advancing too slowly (I especially hate my slow heat, but I haven't seen how to change it.) ）

This is a question of plot control.

I hope that through this book, I can discover more of my shortcomings, correct these faults, and present a better reading experience and more wonderful stories to everyone.

Finally, ask for the first order!

Finally, please order the first time!!

Finally, ask for the first order!!