Su Sheng followed Li Yan to the pavilion, and after sitting down, Su Sheng handed over the script in his hand.

asked, "That's the case, Mr. Li, I've never been white, why does Xu Yiwan like Li Chengyu so desperately?" ”

Li Yan took over the script, and did find something wrong in it, the original plot was cut a little, which caused the girl to fall in love with this man A little absurd.

After reading it, Li Yan put the script on the stone table, took out his mobile phone from his pocket, slid it on the screen a few times, and handed it to Su Shang.

Then he said, "This plot itself is that Li Chengyu went to meet Xu Yiwan's father for his younger brother's study, and when he was talking to Xu's father, he was heard by Xu Yiwan's daughter.

The father was reluctant to help the fallen prince, but Xu Yiwan was moved. She pretended to be her father's student to teach Li Chengyu's younger brother, but in the end she fell in love with Li Chengyu, a man.

But the director thinks that this place can be cut a little bit, and it becomes the version that you don't understand. ”

Su Sheng is considered to have listened to the yin, and he is not very white, why did Xu Yiwan fall in love with Li Chengyu, a man, now I understand.

Su Sheng nodded and said, "I'm white, but I suggest that this matter be added, otherwise the audience may have the same confusion as me at that time." ”

Li Yan said, "I will discuss this matter with the director, and I will definitely add this paragraph when the time comes." ”

After Su Sheng left, Li Yan was still standing in place and watching her back gradually disappearing, and when she looked at this girl, Li Yan's eyes were a little more appreciative.

He couldn't deny that Su Sheng could have such an idea at his age, which was a surprise to him.

She is the only one of the many artists he has seen who can point out the loopholes in the script, in fact, when he handed over the script to Shu Yu, Shu Yu deleted it, and he didn't go out of his way to check and interrogate, this is the way he and Shu Yu get along.

Maybe the appearance has all the characteristics of deception, and for others, maybe he is still young. In fact, he is no longer young for him and the age on his ID card, after all, he is about to be thirty years old, where can he be young.

However, for the surprise of Su Shang, Li Yan felt that he could write a perfect script again, this girl seems to have magic in her, and after you get in touch with her, you will find that everything about her appearance has become something that can be ignored after devoting herself to the script.

Even if she is beautiful, even if she is thrillingly beautiful, even if she has a lot of magic in her, but after she enters the script with all her heart, it is as if she is a character in the play.

When he talked to her just now, Li Yan almost thought that Xu Yiwan was real.

After Su Sheng went back, he combined what Li Yan said with the script, and after the combination, he found that the plot was not generally smooth, and the little awkwardness before did not exist, this is a good script.

It is worth her to show the role of Xu Yiwan in the best state, Su Sheng believes that she is worthy of this role, and Xu Yiwan is also suitable for her.

After Su Sheng processed the script, he searched for Li Yan when he picked up his mobile phone, and was still startled when he clicked on the information.

The data shows that he is already 29 years old, but he still looks like a teenager next door, and when he first saw him in the dormitory, he thought he was 20 years old at most.

But now when I checked the information, I found that I was outrageously wrong, I don't know if I was too precocious or Li Yan was too good at maintenance, Su Sheng always felt that when the two of them were together, she was the older one.

***

The first time Su Sheng and Gu Ran met, they were playing, in fact, they didn't know much about this senior brother Su Shang, but they just learned about it on Baidu, and he didn't introduce him much, but they all said that he was a good person.

In fact, as long as the other party is not Juhua, it is acceptable for Su Shang.

It's not that she doesn't like Juhua, but she has never been optimistic about him.