Chapter 147: A Bunch of Troubles
"Senior, if I go to a master's degree in Europe...... Will the recognition be lower after returning to China? ”
"If you just look at the recognition, in fact, except for the Ivy League and Oxbridge, the national reputation of other schools is not very good. We go abroad to learn things, not to go by name. For industry insiders, the schools you are going to apply to are all famous, and as for non-industry insiders, I don't think you need to make that false name. ”
He Yan put down the mouse and continued: "Nowadays, many agents like to ask how many of their students have applied to the QS ranking to attract students, but I feel that this is extremely irresponsible for students. Some of them have commission affiliations with those schools, and for every good student you send to them, they give the agent a kickback. Students don't understand this, and they don't care about their majors when they look at the rankings, so they won't learn anything at all in the last few years, but they just take a master's degree certificate and cheat the ghost. ”
Yi Aijia had heard some similar things from Jiang Yuzhi before: "Now the mainstream countries studying abroad will more or less have such a situation." ”
"Yes, they've industrialized education." He Yan frowned slightly, "I just thought that everyone in the country was stupid and had a lot of money, so I sent my child out to be gilded." But if you really go to this kind of school, say that you have gone abroad, and as a result, there are a total of 70 students in the class, 40 of whom are Chinese. Do you think it's gold or copper? So when I started working with Yu Yi, I wanted to help students find schools and programs that really fit them, so that they didn't spend money and didn't learn anything. ”
"But there are many people in the study abroad party who go for gold-plating, and they don't care what major they go to, as long as they are a master's degree."
"This kind of ...... We can only try our best to choose better gold-plated programs for them within our control, and don't let them take the IELTS test of 6.5 before going abroad, and only 6.5 after returning home. ”
Yi Aijia chuckled: "I suddenly remembered the statistics major of a famous university in the United States. ”
"The famous water class for Chinese people has an average of 50 students from one professor a year." He Yan also smiled, "So the teacher-student ratio is also something I value more." Generally speaking, a research master's degree can be done by one professor to three students, or even one professor to two students, so that you can ensure that you can really learn something when you go there to study a master's degree, and you will not be blinded when you enter the corporate bank in the future. ”
"Teachers and students have finished reading it more than you?" Yi Aijia looked at He Yan's computer, and it was clearly written that the ratio of professors to students in the school major she applied for was basically achievable.
"These are the homework I have done before, and I am especially impressed by the prestigious schools. It's just that Yan Qi hasn't received anyone who has applied to five prestigious schools at the same time for a long time, and Yi Xuemei is here to help us fire. ”
"What kind of fire, don't harm our family Jiajia old fritters." Jiang Yuzhi was holding a cup and leaning against the door of his office.
"What kind of meeting are you having?! And that's the end?! He Yan was surprised.
"No, I heard a boring PPT, so I ran out to the toilet." Jiang Yuzhi glanced down at the time, "I'll go back in two minutes." ”
He Yan: Oh my God, there is no royal law anymore! The top management of our company even had their own meetings!
"So you're back to inspect?" He Yan's face was loveless.
"I forgot to bring a document, so I'll pick it up." Jiang Yuzhi entered the door and took the counseling agreement with Yingyuan from Yi Aijia's hand, "It seems that you and Jiajia have a good chat." ”
"I'm doing business, for a promising student like Yi Xuemei, I have to analyze it carefully." He Yan is indeed a businessman now.
Yi Aijia covered her mouth and smiled, got up and pulled Jiang Yuzhi out.
Jiang Yu looked back with a puzzled face.
"Send you to a meeting." Yi Aijia smiled, and held his hand tighter, "Don't skip class anymore, Senior He just said that the three of us should discuss how to write the paperwork together." ”
"Okay." Jiangyu was willingly pulled to the corner of the conference room like a child.
"Your family, Mr. Jiang, is this considered sick." He Yan behind him looked resentful, "How about giving a single dog a way to live!" Yes?! How can it be! ”
Yi Aijia turned around and comforted: "Isn't the senior going to live well now?" ”
Congratulatory message: "......"
Yi Xuemei, you still don't talk, does this mean that the two of them are in love and have already let themselves go? It's all the sour smell of love!
"Senior sister, let's go back and look at the contract......" He Yan sighed and turned around.
This time, I got a contract for my study abroad plan, and the contract clearly stated: to assist Ms. Yi Aijia to apply to six schools in the 2017 application season, and to ensure that the other party will be admitted to at least one school.
The rest of the inner Yi Aijia didn't look at it, and signed his name with a brush.
He Yan's face was shocked: "Senior sister...... It's a contract, it's legally valid, are you sure you don't want to look at it again? ”
"Don't look at it, Mr. Jiang can't fool me. Besides, even if the senior wants to cheat me, it doesn't seem to be getting any benefit. Is it just to trap me? ”
Congratulatory Message: It makes sense......
"That's fine...... If you don't look at it, don't look at it, and your Mr. Jiang will think through every clause on this contract. He Yan stood up and, according to Jiang Yuzhi's instructions, made a cup of flower tea for Yi Aijia.
"Senior, are you going to develop Yanqi to other countries?" Yi Aijia asked suddenly.
"Maybe, but now there are financial constraints, so it's good to be able to gain a foothold in the country."
"Oh......" Yi Aijia was a little bottomless in her heart.
He Yan, who had high emotional intelligence, understood what she wanted to ask, so she said: "Senior sister, don't you know that Yu Zhi is ......?"
Before he finished speaking, a colleague from the company came over to call He Yan: "Mr. He, Mr. Jiang said that Dake has a good idea, let you go over." ”
"Okay, I'll be right there." He Yan turned around and was about to leave.
"Senior just wanted to say what happened to him?"
He Yan thought for a while: "It's nothing, it's just that he got a new contract, in the UK." Wait here first, there are more distinctive documents I selected before on the computer desktop, you can take a look at the reference. ”
"Okay, seniors are busy first."
Yi Aijia was left alone in front of the computer in the office.
It's not that I haven't seen the so-called "document template" before, what to write in the first paragraph and what to write in the second paragraph are all stipulated, and you only need to combine your own conditions to set it up.
However, the articles provided by He Yan did not follow the format of the template, and the focus was on their most distinctive points, the length of the articles was properly controlled, and the structural level was also very clear. Let's take a look at the colleges and universities that people are applying to, um...... Very good, no wonder it was the students who went to the Ivy......
After reading four or five articles, Yi Aijia felt that she really understood the framework of each instrument. Go back and look at the resume you drafted...... Yi Aijia sighed, probably the format and content order are going to be restarted.
"How's it going?" The meeting on Jiangyu's side was over, and he came back with He Yan.
"It doesn't feel easy to write, the structure I imagined before was too simple, and the logic may not be smooth."
"Already have a draft?" He Yan asked.
"Yes, I'll open it for you now." Having said that, Yi Aijia is very shy in her heart, and her personal statement inevitably praises how good she is and how suitable the master's program of the other school is. Of course, it's okay to write this kind of thing yourself, but the problem is to show it to others.
Do they feel like they are narcissistic?
As soon as he thought so, He Yan spoke first: "You haven't said enough about your advantages. ”
Wait a minute...... This means that I haven't written narcissistic enough???
"Jiajia, the motivation letter handed to the school should state why you must choose their school. Therefore, your personal strengths in this master's program must be highlighted. It's not the kind of boast you might imagine, but a kind of confidence. You have to show them that you are capable of further education and that you are even capable of being the best of them. Now this content is a little too subtle. Jiang Yuzhi agreed with He Yan's view,
And you haven't really written down what you've gained from research, what you've learned. The essay is the most taboo, and you must put your abilities and potential into practice for admissions officers to see. ”
"How about we conceive it like this?" He Yan said, "Yi Xuemei's internship experience is indeed not a highlight, but I can't help but mention it. Therefore, if you want to write an article, you can first introduce your academic background and talk about your intention to go to graduate school. Later, I will start to mention my internship experience, and then explain that I prefer scientific research to career work, and then start to elaborate on your scientific research experience at length.
Finally, a few more hobbies about your hobby as an amateur painter. Anyway, the general format is, event one, what did you participate in, what work did you do in it, what skills were improved in the end, and what experience were learned. Then Event 2 and Event 3 go on like this. It looks clearer and clearer, and it is also more in line with the logical thinking of business. ”
"So the question now is how to connect the parts in a reasonable way. Jumping directly from one section to another will appear stiff, and the article will be scattered when written. Jiang Yuzhi said, "The resume is also opened, let's start with the resume, and finally write the content worth writing on the resume on the motivation letter." ”
"I think there is a school that asks for a personal statement instead of a letter of motivation?" He Yan said to himself, "You look first, I'll go and confirm the school selection information, and by the way, go through the online application process to see if there are any additional documents needed, and it will take more time if you need to do transcript certification." ”
"It seems that there is no transcript certification, but Rotterdam needs to apply for a Nuffic certification." Jiang Yuzhi said.
"Nuffic should be able to do it fairly quickly now, let me confirm if the proof of enrollment can be certified."
Yi Aijia: Who am I, where am I, what are they talking about...... What certifications? Isn't it okay for the school to have a transcript with the official seal of the Academic Affairs Office? Why do you need certification...... Is it going to cost money again......