On the question of comparing water in the chapter on reality

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Everyone's comments have been received.

I started from the author signing group, and there were also peers reading my book, one said what I wrote, skip it directly, and didn't read it at all, and the other said that I wrote too carefully, and there was a suspicion of deliberately watering the chapter, but it can be broken by speeding up the pace.

Some people in the readership say that the reality chapter is not well written, it is a poisonous point, and it ruins a book that can get up, and another chapter that says that it is a bit embarrassing, especially to deal with the two old men, it is not decisive enough, and it is a small poisonous point.

I also read the opinions of book friends in the book review area.

I summed it up, everyone is not against me writing a reality chapter, but against the garbage I write, it's boring to read, right?

After finishing last night, I saw that the book review area was not optimistic, and I panicked at the time, and temporarily decided to cut the later chapters and force a new copy.

After Sun Erniang's poison point was sprayed by a group, I really, my mentality is unstable, and I am nervous to death at the slightest disturbance.

Today, after reviewing all the opinions and weighing them in my heart, I decided to finish writing the reality chapter, and there are only 3 chapters in total anyway.

The original plan was before, and the amount of content in the reality chapter was 3 days, which was set in my mind before the end of the Water Margin copy, and it was really not deliberately added to the hydrology temporarily.

The pot that wasn't written, I admit.

Next week is the six-frequency recommendation, and the quota of Sanjiang will be set before next Wednesday. That's my brain pumping.

In the next 3 chapters, the pace should be fast (don't make people feel that they are in hydrology), the content should be reasonable (don't force the awkward comparison), the protagonist's character is affectionate and righteous and decisive in killing, and the character design cannot collapse.

Before entering the new dungeon, arrange things in reality so that the protagonist has no worries, which is my previous plan.

Another reason for not changing is that my peers told me that it is best for the author not to easily adjust his ideas and outline, as it is easy to break the rhythm.

Thank you, everyone, I've read all the comments.

Please continue to support me.

It's been a month since I changed my status.,I'm updating 4000+ words every day.,The attitude is visible to everyone.,Even if the new copy is temporarily changed and the preparation time is not sufficient.,I didn't deliberately stop to slow down the update.,I didn't ask for leave during the Dragon Boat Festival.,It's all visible.。