Chapter 109: First Draft

Qi'er's spirits are getting better and better. She is a competitive person, she never wants to be sloppy in her studies, and she works hard when she works, even if she is "disappointed in love", she does not slack off in the slightest. After that day, however, she never spoke of going to France, as if there was no such thing at all. Jingzhi was also very cooperative and didn't ask again.

Every morning, before dawn, the two of them made an appointment to go for a run together. In this way, the calm days continued.

One day, Jingzhi changed her clothes, walked to the mirror, and looked in the mirror carefully. In the mirror, there is a girl in a light pink suit, with black hair coiled up behind her head, and a small pale pink bead flower pinned to it, which is both solemn and a little playful and cute.

The door of the room was open, Qi'er saw Jingzhi's dress, her eyes widened, and she asked curiously, "Sister Jingzhi, why are you wearing a suit today?" As she spoke, Qi'er took two steps forward, lightly touched the corsage on Jingzhi's chest with her right index finger, and sighed, "This corsage is so beautiful!" I like it! ”

Jingzhi glanced down at the corsage on her chest, a few small pearls were held together and attached to a small round gold plate, which was really cute.

"It's not a big deal, but I agreed with my mentor to meet this morning, so I chose a more formal outfit." After speaking, Jingzhi turned around in front of the mirror.

"Beautiful!" Qi'er gave a thumbs up, "Sister Jingzhi has a good figure, she looks good in anything!" ”

"Haha, it's sweet in your mouth!" Jingzhi smiled and said, "It's almost time, I have to go to the office first, and I have to get ready before I go." ”

"What a busy man!" Qi'er sighed.

"Ha, aren't you the same! Like a hardworking little bee. I'm not wrong, right? ”

"Not really!" Qi'er didn't mean to be modest at all, and calmly explained, "I'm the hardest working student in our department, and even the teacher praises me!" Awesome! ”

Jingzhi nodded, and said in admiration, "Awesome! That's amazing! ”

"Haha......" Qi'er smirked, "Live with me, even if you are lazy, you will be taken by me!" ”

"You're right!" Jingzhi said with great certainty, "So I have to hurry up now." I don't eat breakfast at home, you can cook your own food and eat it yourself. ”

Qi'er pursed her lips, looking unfinished, and said helplessly, "Okay, then come on, I can only wish you good luck......"

"Thank you......" After speaking, Jingzhi picked up her bag, took three steps and made two steps, walked to the door, and closed the door from the outside with a "bang".

Jingzhi has a total of two mentors. One was an old woman with gray hair. She is a professor at Mutas University and her parents are both British immigrants to Australia. Although she was born in Australia, she studied in the UK from secondary school and stayed at Mutas University in the UK as a lecturer after graduating with a PhD. Today, she is a well-known professor at Mutas University.

In her twilight years, her hair was all white and she wore a pair of silver-rimmed glasses. She was not tall, somewhat thin, with obvious wrinkles and age spots on her face, neck, and backs of her hands. She usually wears light makeup, and she looks very energetic. Her eyes are not large, and because of her age, her upper eyelids are always drooping, making them appear flat and small; Her gaze is very sharp, and she can clearly see two bright "sharp blades" through the lens.

Another of Jingzhi's mentors is a German, in his mid-40s, who was promoted to associate professor at Mutas University just last year. Her hair looked blonde to the eye, and a hint of silver could be found on her sideburns. She was much taller and fatter than her older mentor. Although she is a woman, she only wears a suit on weekdays, and she always walks with her head held high, with a serious and majestic expression.

The German used to be a postdoc of an old professor, and the two hit it off at first sight. Although there is a big age gap, they get along harmoniously. They have completed a number of research tasks together and have obtained many valuable research results.

The place of meeting was the office of the female professor. The female professor is old and does not have a good time going back and forth; Moreover, her office should be more spacious and well-equipped, with a sofa and coffee table dedicated to receiving visitors, two computers and a small printer on the desk.

Jingzhi knocked lightly at the door, and the German came to open it.

“hello! e, please" (Hello!) Please come in. )

The Germans speak fluently and pronounce well, and it is difficult to tell that she is German simply by listening to her speak English.

“thank you!” (Thank you!) With that, Jingzhi walked in the door and stood in the doorway.

“good orng!” (Good morning!) Seeing Jingzhi walk in, the female professor said hello first. She was old, and her knees ached from time to time, so she didn't get up to stand up, but sat down on a swivel chair and nodded gently.

“good orng, professor sith!” (Good morning, Professor Sith!) As she spoke, Jingzhi bowed slightly to the female professor as a sign of respect.

The German closed the door and walked over to Jingzhi to shake hands with him with the words "I' very happy to see you aga, jgzhi you look pretty this PK suit." You look good in this pink suit. )

The Germans speak Chinese well and pronounce the name "Jingzhi" very accurately.

“thank you, dr fischer how are you dog these days?” (Thank you, Dr. Fischer.) How have you been? )

“very well! and you?” (Excellent!) How are you? )

"I' fe thanks" (I'm fine. Thank you. )

"You both are very bright and breezy today." The old professor sighed.

Dr. Fischer smiled at the old professor as a direct response to her compliment. Jingzhi also smiled shyly and whispered "thank you." )

Dr. Fischer sat down next to the old professor and motioned for Jingzhi to sit on the couch not far away.

"thanks." As she spoke, Jingzhi sat in the corner of the sofa.

Jingzhi had just sat down when the old professor said very seriously, "Let's get down to the pot." )

Hearing this, Jingzhi quickly took out a notebook and pen from her bag and prepared to start recording.

The old professor said with a tone of praise "actually, we do appreciate the first draft of your paper you sent a week before." )

Dr. Fischer smiled and added, "Yes, I agree with that a very good draft with beautiful calcutions and reliable ncsions." A very good draft, with very good calculations and credible conclusions. )

“yes, dr fischer and i already checked your calcutions they are surely with no errors good job!” The old professor exclaimed. (Yes, Dr. Fischer and I have checked your calculations.) There is no doubt that there is nothing wrong with them. Well done! )

With that, the old professor and Dr. Fischer looked at each other and smiled.

"Thank you." Jingzhi said with gratitude.

"but," (but,) the old professor put his right hand in his eyes, his expression more serious and sharp, "we still have a lot nts you know, about how to and it." You know, about how to modify it. )

"Yes, as your research partners, professor sith and i are very gd to share the experience we've auuted previoly i hope you won't d her callg the 'nts'. Professor Sith and I would be very happy to share with you our previous experience. I hope you don't mind her calling those "opinions." )

Dr. Fischer's words were very pertinent, and every word was like a little angel the size of an ant, lined up and flew into Jingzhi's ears.

"No, no," Jingzhi smiled and shook her head, "defitely not." )

"Here's a Py of Your Draft." After speaking, the old professor picked up a pre-printed document from the table and handed it to Jingzhi.

Jingzhi lowered her head and browsed it in general. The black English is a draft she had written before, with a red double horizontal line underneath some of the black letters; Between the black fonts, some fonts are one size smaller and the blue characters are not known who added them; In addition, a few lines of small green letters between the black fonts are also clearly visible.

After a few minutes, seeing that Jingzhi was almost done, the old professor explained, "As you can see, the sentences with red double les are those we thk it's better to delete you know, verbose sentences which we thk are unnecessary" Those sentences with double red lines are the ones that we think are best removed. You know, they're all long sentences, and we think they're redundant. )

"Yes, please bear d that we should avoid writg eless words an acadeic paper." Dr. Fischer added.

"I've got it." As she spoke, Jingzhi nodded very sincerely.

The old professor nodded with satisfaction and continued, "Very good that's very clear to see apart fro that, so sentences are bule they are y opions, jt so plents which I believe should be volved you ay have a look at." The ter by yourself, becae they are not difficult to understand, i thk but if you do need y help, you ay send an eail is that ok for you? That's easy to see. In addition to this, there are some sentences that are blue. They are my thoughts, just some additions that I think are necessary to touch. You can take a look at them for yourself later because they're not difficult to understand, I guess. But if you do need help, you can send me an email. Is that okay for you? )

Jingzhi nodded and said "OK" (yes)

The old professor nodded, looked at Dr. Fischer, and said to her, "It's your turn." )

Dr. Fischer also nodded at the old professor, then turned his face and said to Jingzhi, "The green sentences are e, they are what I thk you should ntion the paper, they are very iportant fact, you've ignored o res now, i' gog to provide." you with so details, apart fro what i already typed the draft please take down what i’d like you to ver this paper there’re o books that i’d like you to read, which can Be certaly found the library (those green sentences are mine. That's what I hope you mentioned in the article. They are very important. In fact, you're ignoring two cores. Now, in addition to what I've already typed into the draft, I'm going to give you some details. Please make a note of what I want you to cover in this post. There are two books I want you to read, and they are sure to be found in the library. )

"I will, I proise" (I will, I promise.) Jingzhi swore by it.

"good, let's beg now, the first issg re retes a very traditional paper......" Now, the first missing point concerns a very old article...... )

After that, Dr. Fischer spent about an hour explaining to Jingzhi in detail what important information she had overlooked, why it was important, and how to collect it as quickly as possible and finally write it in the article. She is both rigorous and rigid, and every piece of advice is listed very clearly and explained very clearly. The old professor sat there, listening carefully, without making a sound.

Dr. Fischer was very serious, and when she spoke, her expression was calm, but her eyes were so intense that she seemed to be able to see through everything. She sat firmly in her chair, her body not shaking at all, only blinking her eyes occasionally as a moment of rest. Jingzhi raised her head from time to time to make eye contact with her, and immediately lowered her head and wrote in her notebook, for fear of missing a little bit of valid information.

"That's all i'd like to say about your draft today." With that, Dr. Fischer let out a long sigh of relief.

"Thank you, for all your help, Dr Fischer." )

"Happy to help." Dr. Fischer said with a smile.

Now it's the old professor's turn to speak. She took a sip of her coffee and calmly said, "Well, Dr Fischer has done her job now, aordg to what she's told you, i'd like to provide so ideas if you don't d ,you ay take down three pots first,......" The doctor has done her job. Now, as she's already told you, I'd like to offer some ideas. If you don't mind, there are three points you can jot down. First of all...... )

The old professor spoke much more slowly, and she stopped every now and then to take a sip of her coffee. Jingzhi's notebook is full of pages, page after page. Before I knew it, more than half an hour had passed.

In the end, the old professor concludes by "as we said at first, it uld be a very good acadeic paper, if you work hard on it" (as we said at the beginning, it would be a very good academic article if you worked hard to write it well. )

"Thanks I will try y best." I'll do my best. )

"I hope so dr fischer and I are very eager to see it published one day." Dr. Fischer and I very much hope to see it published one day. )

The old professor's words reminded Jingzhi of Jason's words, and her face began to heat slightly. She quickly closed the notebook, held it in her hand, and said embarrassedly, "hopefully." )

“good ck to you!” (Good luck!) Dr. Fischer said with anticipation.

"Thank you." With that, Jingzhi put the notebook and pen in her bag.

The old professor glanced at the time and exclaimed, "Ti files, isn't it?" (Time flies, doesn't it?) )

Dr. Fischer also glanced at the time, shrugged his shoulders, and said helplessly, "Can't agree you ore." )

The old professor continued: "We will arrange another etg after you fish your send draft anythg to ntion before you leave?" (We'll organize another meeting after we receive your second draft.) Is there anything else you'd like to say before you leave? )

Jingzhi thought carefully for two seconds and asked, "When do you want to see y send draft?" (When would you like to see my second draft?) )

The old professor thought for a few seconds and said, "Well, I have to say as soon as possible but, take your ti, please I don't want you to rh too uch at the begng around one onth will be fe, if you really need a." deadle (well, I have to say as soon as possible.) However, take your time. I don't want you to rush it in the first place. Almost a month is fine if you really need a deadline. )

"I see thank you" (I see.) Thank you. )

"Not at all I enjoyed it anyway, good ck to you" (You're welcome, good to help. Anyway, good luck. As he spoke, the old professor stood up and shook hands with Jingzhi.

"Thank you." Jingzhi smiled and said, "I' very gd to et you, Professor Sith and Dr Fischer"

"You too" (Me too. The old professor smiled.

"You too" (Me too. Dr. Fischer laughed too.

"See you ter." Jingzhi said goodbye.

"See you." )

"See you." )

The old professor and Dr. Fischer also said goodbye to Jingzhi. In the next second, Jingzhi left the old professor's office with light steps.

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