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Brother Bank's computer has been repaired, so don't worry. However, the manuscripts stored on the computer have been lost, and there is no update today...... The computer gentleman said: I don't carry this pot.

The above is a joke to liven up the atmosphere, and the following is to get down to business:

In the past two days, Brother Qian plans to revise the free chapters of the first volume, and the first volume has 40 paid chapters, which is too cumbersome to modify, so he will not change it.

The first volume only modifies some of the chapters, so the structure cannot be moved, otherwise the free chapters will not be connected to the paid chapters.

Countless book friends said that this article is too fascinating, I can't understand it, the reason for this, Brother Banknote thinks that the structure, setting, and pen power each account for 1/3 of it.

This article has been fine-tuned three times before, the first revision deleted half of the first 10,000 words, merged the five chapters into three chapters, and received a short station after the revision; Before putting it on the shelf, 20,000 words were deleted from the emotional line; Last month, 12,000 chapters were deleted for the daily plot and the system was too abstract.

So, after the revision, Brother Banknote is not sure that this article is easy to read, but at least it can make Brother Banknote more satisfied.

It is said that the text should not be changed back and forth, other texts may be applicable, but this article is not applicable.

When I code the previous chapters, I always want to write a little more detailed, and when I look back, many detailed descriptions don't contribute much to the plot except for grinding the pen.

There will be an update tomorrow after the change, if the change is not completed, the update will be resumed on Monday.

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