In Hubei, last night it rained heavily and gusted wind, and as a result, the electricity meter in the corridor was drifted in by the rain and burned, and the entire community was without power today, and it has only been repaired now.

This is the sadness of not having a manuscript.

So......

The time is very short, can you still complete the task of 2 more today?

In order not to let the book friends who have invested lose (3000 words are updated every day, and for 30 consecutive days), I will chat with you first, some words have been held back for a long time, and when typing, it is very fast.

After I finish this paragraph, I will continue to write, and the new chapters I have written may be sent tomorrow, which can be regarded as leaving me 2 chapters for storage, and the days when I didn't save the manuscript are really ...... It's too scary.

Understand, I'm not lazy, the text I posted today is definitely more than 4000 words.

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However, I still have to be cheeky and ask everyone for a recommendation vote.

Now this book is about the fourth in the same period, and the second round of PK is still being tested, which can be described as crossing the river with eggs - every step is frightening, and I burp if I am not careful.

In order to make this book go further and better, let the author write more, please hand over your tickets.

(Let's talk about the idea of the Water Margin copy first)

When I was writing this book, I prepared 5 chapters for submission, and at the same time, I gave many author friends in the author group to help check it.

I got a lot of comments, and I revised them one by one.

Among them, the biggest one is - Wu Song is dead, I still have a fart!

At that time, I was shocked half to death, thinking, Wu Song is not dead, how to set my gold finger?

Could it be that this book can't be written?

Later, after weighing it, I still wrote it head-on.

Then, after the internal investment was passed, 10 chapters were left for storage, and the article was issued.

The days after the article were not easy.

Because it's a new author who hasn't made any achievements, I'll post it, wait to test the waters, test the waters, wait for the promotion, and wait for the next round of promotion.

At present, this book is in the second round of testing the water PK, if it is not eliminated, there are still 3 rounds behind, and I don't know where it can go.

Writing about the Water Margin is a bold attempt on my part (or a hot brain to find a draw), thinking, this copy has a hot spot, but no one writes it, others don't write it, I'll come.

At that time, there was also a feeling that I had picked up a bargain.

Unexpectedly, there are pits everywhere!

What is the biggest pit?

That is, the era of the creation of the Water Margin is the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, when the Han nation rebelled everywhere in order to overthrow the rule of the Mongols.

Moreover, there are several authors of the Water Margin, and they were not completed by one person (this point has been concluded, and students who don't understand please Baidu).

In fact, there are a lot of geographical common sense in the Water Margin, so I won't say much here.

The 'loyalty' and 'righteousness' advocated in the Water Margin are untenable from the perspective of modern people's values.

In other words, the so-called 'good man', Du Nima is not a good thing, and he will be killed if he disagrees.

Now, the cliff is the target of the target.

So how do I write it?

If I stand on the side of the government, I will definitely be sprayed, and readers will say that I, Nima, have come to see the heroes, not the eagle claws of the court.

Well, I'm on the side of the heroes, and I'm sure to get sprayed too.

There is no good thing in the heroes, you are actually in the company of them, and you have a wrong outlook.

So how do you ask me to write?

I trembled, walking on thin ice, and I thought I was smart enough to put forward a line of Wu Song and write it separately, Liangshan is deep, I won't mess with him, right?

Originally, there weren't many stories of Wu Song, there were only a few in total, and there wasn't much content after writing.

So I thought again, why don't you write an excerpt from the Water Margin and the Golden Bottle Plum together?

Oh also, I'm so smart.

As a result, some readers sprayed me, and I had a good blood margin, and you wrote it as a child's love and palace fight, disgusting.

I was confused.

You can find that after copying the house from Ximen Mansion, the tone of the writing is a bit like the golden plum.

The fast pace of the Water Margin, the slow pace of the Golden Plum, one fast and one slow, swapped each other, which was originally very good.

At that time, I was hot-headed by Sun Erniang's matter, and I was trembling and trembling, and as soon as this reader sprayed, I immediately shrank my eggs.

Jin Vase Mei, I don't dare to write.

I just want to write a story that respects the original work and is authentic.

Nima is too hard.

(Regarding the opinion of the reader, should the author listen to it?) ）

Actually, I really like to communicate with readers.

I also like to read book reviews.

Later, I found out that I didn't praise me much, but sprayed me a lot.

As a result, my mentality collapsed, and I couldn't create with peace of mind, resulting in a series of miscellaneous diseases such as bowel and bowel disorders, hemiplegia, not lifting in the morning, and not urinating far.

How?

Now try to read as few book reviews as possible.,I can't do it if I don't read it at all.,Anyway, if one day I haven't finished writing the day's update.,Secretly read the book review.,That's me making a mistake.,Looking for a pump.,Find yourself disgusting.。

Readers' opinions.

You listen, some people say that you lack assertiveness, don't have your own independent ideas, and it is difficult for you to become a big thing.

If you don't listen, you say that you are stubborn, unrepentant, and have a good word, no wonder you hit the street.

What do you want me to do?

I can only tell myself over and over again that I can't satisfy everyone, those readers who leave, I don't feel distressed, and they will leave sooner or later anyway.

I just hugged the thighs of most of my current readers.

Guys, is there still a pendant missing on your legs?

Think about me.

I can only comfort myself like this.

(Question about Sun Erniang)

When I wrote this paragraph, I was in a very uneasy mood.

Sun Erniang's problem, I admit that it was my negligence, when I conceived the plot, I thought that adaptation is not the same as writing blindly, try to respect the original work, and retain the original flavor of Water Margin.

Since the protagonist has inherited Wu Song's mantle, Wu Song's interpersonal relationships and grievances have naturally been inherited.

In addition to respecting the original work, there is another reason, that is, it is useful to accept Sun Erniang.

As for why I didn't change it, it's not that I like to be sprayed.

It's that I can't take care of my energy.

I helped someone move, but I was unlucky, and the stairs were empty, and I twisted my waist.

I went to the hospital for an examination, took an MRI, and said that it was a slight lumbar disc herniation, and I was supposed to recuperate at home, but it was boring to be idle anyway, so I wrote a book to pass the time, often writing a chapter, and I had to go to bed for a while.

Chapter 14 just came out before.,Someone squirted violently.,I was impetuous.,I didn't write an article for 2 days.,And the alliance leader added a chapter.,There were originally 5 chapters of the manuscript.,It's all gone all of a sudden.。

Now it's all written and issued.

You asked me not to update it, and to spend a few days to change the previous text, and then I am afraid that those readers who read it every day will not be able to pick it up after a few days of throwing it away.

You asked me to take care of the update and quality, to change the text, I can't take care of my energy and time, and I can't finish it.

That's why I didn't change.

If you think I've fed you, you're angry, you can spray, anyway, I don't read the book review area now, I promise not to delete the post, and I can't help it.

If you finish spraying and then leave, I won't send it, everyone is happy to get together and disperse.

There is not much hatred and resentment.

There are many good books, and there is always one that suits your eyes.

As for those who say, 'If you don't change, you'll definitely die, you could have been on fire.'"

I think it's better to forget it.

I'm just a sought-after person, writing for hobbies and 600 full attendance, and now my expectations have been lowered again and again, maybe it will be gone at some point, and I really don't dare to dream of becoming famous.

The big change is to let me break off, it is better to directly commit suicide on the spot to save trouble.

After the book is published, it is guaranteed to be updated every day, which is the author's top priority.

I overcome many difficulties to keep it up to date and try to write as best as I can, which is the right reward for the people who support me.

There was a poison point, and I didn't want to, it wasn't intentional in the first place.

No author deliberately gets along with the grades.

Before I wrote it, who knew it was a poisonous point?

There are also some people who say that the heroes of the Water Margin are not good birds, and they should all be killed, I admit that from the perspective of the modern three views, what you say makes sense, but I'm just a Tianliu novel, used to pass the time, and I'm not writing a textbook of history or official history.

Some people also say that it was illegal to eat beef in the Song Dynasty.

If that's what you're saying, then I really can't write this copy.

You have fundamentally overturned my creativity and copy choice, and I am afraid that you will only be satisfied if I delete the book and leave.

The concubine can't do it!

Then why don't you go and spray the Water Margin and spray the four famous books?

Wu Song also has a sworn brother and sister who eats human flesh, and eats beef every day in the Water Margin.

This is just a web novel, a book that hits the streets, a sought-after on the streets, you have such high requirements, can you still get by?

At first, I wanted to change, but time did not allow, and now I am irritable from being sprayed, and I am determined not to change.

Which step can be taken.

If you don't feel like you, please click 'Remove Bookshelf', turn left when you go out, and don't send it.

What a pleasant thing.

Why bother with you to the death.

I'm also a reader, I look for books every day, which book doesn't have poisonous spots?

The book I chased, Chicago 1990, the protagonist is still black-skinned, and I don't read it every day.

I also posted a post to encourage the author to come, for fear that he would be a eunuch.

I don't understand why some readers are so entangled, don't like the book they read, just abandon the book and leave, and post it is a waste of time.

If it's me, don't bother to bother.

He didn't say a word or left.

I think, I'm afraid that every author likes readers like me, and they don't look for trouble for others, and they also put themselves in a good mood.

Only since the book was issued, I haven't slept well, and I am stressed every day.

The first round of water testing, 53 into 10, the second round of water testing 10 into 4, there are still 3 rounds behind, and I don't know where I can go.

PK all the way to the new book period, I was worried and scared, and I was worried and scared, and I crossed the river with my eggs every day.

And then I was worried that the later copy would not be accepted by readers, and I would be sprayed, and I thought about the plot every day and wanted to write the wonderful points.

It's too hard.

I finally tested the water after 2 rounds, and I was worried that the great god would send too many books during the same period and would not be able to go to Sanjiang, and then I was worried that the first order would hit the street and be laughed at by my peers in the group.

In short, it's still cool to read, and writing books is not a human life.

Not to mention anything else, let you stick to it every day, type 4,000 words of nonsense a day, and persist in changing it all year round, I'm afraid few people can do it.

Accompanied by loneliness and pressure all the way, your status is humble, your peers pit you, your book friends spray you, the editor ignores you, you have no status at home, you don't dare to tell people that you are writing books when you go out, for fear of being laughed at.

The process of coding words is destined to be so pitiful.

It's really, hard.

(Answering some suggestions from book friends)

As for the setting that you have to drink every time to activate Drunken Fist, it is really possible to remove it in the later stage, probably in the second or third dungeon.

When this becomes an instinct, it can be removed.

The reason why I didn't go away in the early stage is because I quoted the setting of a game in it to strengthen everyone's impression, how to say it, it's similar to Saint Seiya has to come to a specific piece of music and picture before he makes a move, similar to the specific sound effect that sounded when Qiao Feng appeared.

This later stage will slowly fade and eventually disappear.

There is also the problem of the Song Dynasty's emphasis on literature and light on military force

I know this question, but the entry point of the protagonist is Wu Song, and his position is on the side of the Water Margin heroes, who are the Water Margin heroes? Everyone knows it.

Whether it's a rough brother, a martial artist, a gangster or a ruffian, in short, the protagonist's ass can't be crooked.

If you ask me to point out in the book that the protagonist is easily and looked down upon by civil officials, suppressed by the detainees, and spat on by the readers, then the book cannot be written.

I just gave Ximen Qinghui Kung Fu and found a reason, that is, a big family, let the children learn some martial arts from an early age, strengthen their bodies, and go out to walk in the future to defend themselves.

Otherwise, how to explain the martial arts of Ximen Qinghui?

Some readers also pointed out that the use of words and sentences is not in line with the context

I am grateful about this reader, mainly in the first chapter, because I glanced at it at the time, and it would indeed be more reasonable to change it as he pointed out.

But I still haven't changed it, first, I don't think it's a big problem, it doesn't hurt to change it or not, it's better to change it, and it's okay if you don't change it.

The second is the issue of energy, we can't ignore the past and the future, and maintaining stability and renewal is the top priority at present.

On the other hand, I tried my best to translate some of the languages and customs of the time into vernacular and modern and easy-to-understand words.

Jerky text, complicated etiquette, will affect everyone's reading experience, in the text, the vernacular prevails.

Some readers accused me of copying the original text

The conscience of heaven and earth, I did use a few sentences, such as some very classic words and paragraphs, such as Xiao Er's line to prevent Wu Song from going to Jingyanggang, as well as the sentence when Zhang Qing and Wu Song reported each other's names, and Ximenqing's statement that he boasted that he was Pan Donkey Deng Xiaoxian.

Why not use a good place?

Using a few lines doesn't count as plagiarism, right?

After all, the storyline, except for the second chapter, I have almost changed or fine-tuned it.

Why don't you write about Shuibo Liangshan?

The reason why I want to avoid Liangshan is that I am afraid that I will slow down the pace and get myself into trouble for no reason.

In layman's terms, it is too complicated inside, and I am afraid that the controversy will be too big and I will be sprayed.

In fact, now it seems that there is a way to solve this problem, which is better than rebellion and better than Zhao'an, that is, to find a mountain, just have a place to stay, develop obscenely, and not make trouble.

Don't rebel, don't recruit peace, occupy the mountain as the king, and find a place to stay, most of the Water Margin heroes actually think so.

(Let's talk about what I wrote about the Water Margin copy that I was not satisfied with)

The first one is the chapter that wrote Ximenqing (these Diao people are too hateful), and I personally feel that there is too much ink and ink, which slows down the pace a bit.

At that time, before the book was issued, a colleague gave me advice, saying that he hadn't seen the Water Margin and didn't know why the protagonist had to kill Ximenqing, so I asked me to write Ximenqing a little badly, so that there would be a reason to kill him.

I thought it was reasonable, so I took this suggestion.

Then, my real thoughts now are that I want to delete this chapter and rewrite it, but I have to update it every day, and I don't have the energy.

I didn't expect this question, but no readers sprayed me, fortunately.

(The author's next arrangement for the copy of the Water Margin)

In order to make the characters of the original book intersect with the protagonist a little more, I changed the timeline and space line of some of the stories that take place in the main line.

For example, the Happy Forest outside Yanggu County, in the original book, the Happy Forest is 108,000 miles away from Yanggu County, and it is not outside Yanggu County at all.

Despite the changes, my overall tone is respectful of the original.

Although the main line has changed, some small details are restored as much as possible.

For example, Ximen Qing met Pan Jinlian for the first time on Zishi Street, and asked Wang Po to be a matchmaker, for example, after Cao Jun fought the tiger, he became the capital of Yanggu County, such as some conversations between Cross Slope and Sun Erniang, etc.

Adaptation is not a matter of writing blindly, and respecting the original work is the first criterion.

Let everyone feel that although I have changed the main line and plot, these plots take place in the Water Margin world, and they are not abrupt, which is also reasonable.

At the same time, try to remove some awkward words and customs, and replace them with easy-to-understand vernacular texts, so as not to cause confusion and lag when reading.

Therefore, on the basis of the original flavor, some text optimizations have also been made.

If you want to be authentic, you have to substitute yourself into the world of Water Margin.

Don't let your words and deeds seem so abrupt and out of place.

At the moment, this is not very good.

(About the harem or not)

To be honest, the authors who can write the harem well are all old birds, masters, and gods who have life experience and have very good character portrayals.

I'm a newcomer to the street, but I don't have the strength and self-confidence.

In addition, I can't write emotional dramas, so my original plan was to let the protagonist mix up to the end.

If you don't write well, it's a burden to collect it, and if you're not careful, it will become a poisonous point.

Thinking about it later, it's not good to be too deliberate.

Anyway, when the rhythm arrives, take it.

Don't force, don't dodge, don't deliberately, that's probably it.

(What to write in the next copy)

The first copy should be over in 50-60 chapters, depending on the specific direction, I can only say an approximate idea for now.

I heard the old author say that changing copies will lead to a big drop in the follow-up, and I was scared for a while.

Hey, it's so hard.

I always choose popular public copies, but I'm worried that the chase will fall too hard when I change copies.

After discussing with many people, I also sent a single chapter to ask everyone's opinions (later this single chapter was deleted), and the second copy is basically to choose one of the two in A Chinese Ghost Story and the Three Kingdoms.

I have been thinking about A Chinese Ghost Story for a long time, and I thought I could write something new before I opened the book.

On the basis of borrowing the characters, backgrounds, and settings of this copy, I will carry out some original ideas on the premise of retaining the original work.

The node I chose was A Chinese Ghost Story 2 Human Dao.

Now the mountain spirits are very popular, and I want to rub the heat too.

In terms of emotional lines, it is to find Xiaoqian's reincarnation, and finally come to a cultivate, fight monsters and upgrade to be a good man.

Being a good man can be understood as pretending to be forced.

But I'm worried that the span of this copy is too large, that is, the power system is upgraded too quickly, and it is easy to collapse.

From the righteousness of the Water Margin to the ghost hunting and fighting monsters of A Chinese Ghost Story, I don't know if everyone is adapting to it.

The advantage of the Three Kingdoms is that it is famous enough, the power system is not upgraded much, and the styles are all ancient, which is very consistent.

But there's also a shortcoming.,This copy.,I didn't have much idea.,It's a temporary suggestion by many people.,And then I adopted it.,The information is still being checked.。

Either write the martial arts version of the Three Kingdoms, focusing on wild history, or write about the Shu Han and Wei Dynasty, focusing on military affairs.

At that time, Zhuge Liang will be old, Wei Yan will be a general, Liao Hua will be a pioneer, and Zhao Yun will still be alive, and he will have a good PK of three hundred rounds with Sima Yi, an old bird.

Why don't you write about the Three Kingdoms in the early stage?

Because of aesthetic fatigue, there are many people who write, and I am tired of reading it.

For a while, the history channel was all about the Three Kingdoms, as if it was seven or eight years ago.

However, there is one of the biggest problems with this copy, that is, because of its fame, if you are not careful, you will be sprayed.

When I was writing about Water Margin, I was sprayed into a sieve, and now, there is a psychological shadow.

One is a copy that has been conceived for a long time and has an idea, but the span is large, and the reader is worried that it will not be adapted, and the other is a copy with a small span and a similar style, but not much conceived.

What do you think?

If there is an opinion, I still have time to adjust.

Western science fiction and fantasy, I will write later (if there is a later stage of this book), but I dare not write in the early stage, the early stage is mainly in the oriental style, and I am also worried that the style will change too quickly and the reader will not be able to accept it.

(About the book friend group)

QQ group: 252667937

Yesterday, a single chapter was released to announce a book friend group, and more than a dozen readers were added at once, and I am very happy to come.

I poured water with everyone for a while.

But the enthusiasm of the readers is too high, and there are many questions, and many people are a little overwhelmed for a while.

Suddenly, 2 book friends quit the group.

I was a little blind.

Go back and look at the chat messages.

I found out that they were the ones who gave their opinions, but I ignored them, feeling that I was being left out, so I quit the group.

I'm here to say sorry to these two book friends.

I can't take care of everyone like a princess in KTV, it's my negligence.

In other words, the princesses are all one-on-one services.

After that, I tried not to talk about it as much as possible, and only poured water.

Don't add me QQ, don't talk to me privately if there's nothing to do, I'm afraid I'll be broken by you if I'm not careful.

A few days ago, there was an author who was hung up in Longkong because of the entanglement between him and readers.

I have palpitations.

I am also worried about affecting my creation.

In the end, everyone is welcome to come in and blow water and chat, the author Jun is a person who codes words, too lonely, too pitiful, I dare not read the book review, and sometimes I can't help but look at it secretly, and it took me a long time to adjust my mentality.

I'm tired, tired, annoyed, go to the book friend group to take a sneak look, and see a group of sand sculptures (not derogatory, especially cute) book friends are chatting happily, I think it's worth it.

All the effort seems to have paid off.

That's all for now.

There's a lot of incoherent nonsense, almost 6000 words.

Finally, I would like to thank the friends who vote every day, the friends who accompany me in the book friend group, the friends who have rewarded, and the friends who give me advice.

With you here, I'm not alone, thank you.

Good luck to all.

See you in the second copy, please don't leave me.

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