Today's recess exercise,There are a lot of students who have beaten chicken blood,The range of action is relatively large,I have to sigh,It's still a fool to be happy.,At the same time, I'm also very worried.,So many simple babies.,In case of being deducted points by a more serious inspector.,It's not good.,I hope the inspectors can uphold the principle of "don't compete with fools".,Let them go.。

Of course I wouldn't be as crazy as them, as can be seen from the fear of the "fools", if it were a normal day, I would have laughed at them unabashedly, laughing at them as others laughed at me!

Why is my mood so unbeautiful? Because of the recess exercise, which should have been our favorite physical education class, I can still look forward to a hearty snowball fight with Boss Yan, but now, there is nothing.

It was Xiao Zhou who dominated the physical education class, which made me even more disappointed, why didn't Xiao Zhang, who usually boasted of "Yushu Linfeng", dare not fight with the surname Zhou? Didn't he know how much the students enjoyed math lessons? (Don't shoot your guns, Chinese and math, do you choose one?) At least half a catty and eight taels)

Xiao Zhou held a stack of papers, and walked into the classroom with the steps of "Yushu Linfeng", I guess, the papers were written by the students, and the pace showed that Xiao Zhou was quite happy.

"This essay, on the whole, is not bad, much stronger than the last expository essay."

Seeing that Xiao Zhou's mood is beautiful, we are also relaxed, I think you have also experienced it when you were a student, the head teacher stared, and the whole class trembled.

"Send it first, I didn't judge the results this time, I only made annotations, you all take a look at it first."

At this time, the importance of the first row is reflected, if you don't recognize the whole class, you will be quite nervous, if you send the wrong paper under the teacher's gaze, and you can't find anyone even after wandering around for a long time, then you will be disgusted.

"Gu Yang, you read your first paragraph first."

Damn, take me as a model again, can't you find someone to sing against you? Why will I invite you to see you?

"Oh......"

After I got the paper, I wanted to read the comments first, so I could figure out Xiao Zhou's psychology, in case it was good, then I would give you more play and read it with some emotion.

As a result, I flipped through it twice, and there was not a single word of annotation, which made me speculate about a ghost......

"Don't read it, I didn't annotate you, you read the first two paragraphs first, so that everyone can listen to it."

Isn't that the first paragraph...... How did you change it to the first two paragraphs...... I'd better hurry up and read it, let me read the whole article in a while, it won't be beautiful.

"Every time in the dead of night, I began to dream, dreaming that above the magnificent sea, there is a naughty cloud, it wants to enjoy the bright moonlight alone, so it quietly floats to the moon, the gentle wind found the abnormality, and blows hard, not only blowing away the clouds, but also blowing out the stars, they strive to light up the night sky, blend with the color of the sea, and converge to create an artistic conception, this artistic conception, called romance."

"Stop, this is the first paragraph, where did you copy it?"

I don't understand what Xiao Zhou means, if you want to praise me, I will slap the bridge of my nose and say, "Lao Tzu wrote it himself", if it is to damage me, I will find a top bag.

After a moment's hesitation, he said, "I see my brother wrote such a paragraph." ”

"Okay, you read the second paragraph."

Finished? How much do you give a little bit to show it, big brother, so that my heart is even more empty......

"On the seaside, there is an old man who is leaning on the chair and smiling, the wrinkles on his cheeks are not converged, and he does not hide the vicissitudes of life after being destroyed by the years, but the sea does not care about these, but because of the old man's serenity and timidity, the law of the tides does not seem to be confirmed, no matter how turbulent it was, the coast at this time is very quiet, the old man is also very quiet, she looks into the distance, looks at the sparkling waves on the sea, and tells the children next to her a beautiful past."

Before the teacher could make a statement, there was a sparse applause in the class, and I was panicked, but now I was a little proud.

"What do you think of these two paragraphs?"

My classmates are talking about their thoughts, and they should all praise me.

Xiao Zhou made a "stop" gesture and said to everyone: "Let's not talk about what is written, what do you think he is talking about?" What do you want to express? ”

I thought to myself, Isn't this to me? What am I going to say, how will they know?

At this time, Haitao gave the most face and said: "Grandma wants to tell a story." ”

Suddenly, the class lost Xiao Zhou's control again.

After a short boil, Xiao Zhou said to me: "Narrative, you didn't write it like this, only the last sentence of the first two paragraphs meets the characteristics of narratives. ”

I thought, which one? I'll only have one full stop in the second paragraph, okay?

Xiao Zhou continued: "You can talk about the six elements of narrative. ”

I know this, but I was so damaged by Xiao Zhou that I lost my confidence, and only whispered: "Time, place, people, causes, processes, and results." ”

"Do you know the characteristics of the narrative, or the way it is expressed?"

I'm a little vague about this, so I'm quieter: "Narrate, describe......"

"Be louder!"

"Narrated, descriptive, lyrical, and...... And argumentative notes? ”

"What do you think you just read? Narrative? Here are the experiences of the characters? Or is there a process of development of things? ”

"No ......"

"Is that a description? The function of description is to portray the people, things, and things in the event more vividly and vividly, is yours? ”

"Not ......"

"And you're lyrical? Is it a discussion? Is it a description? There are so many anthropomorphic descriptions of scenery in front of you, don't you know that the fart is used? ”

I don't like to hear that, that's my finishing touch! In order not to have a low word count at the end, I deliberately wrote a bunch of nonsense in the front, what is this? It's the big picture! Did you ask me to write until the end and find that there was not enough word count to force it to be lyrical? (Don't learn from me when you write essays, I was just young and frivolous, in fact, Mao didn't understand)

"Your two paragraphs, if they are used in the article describing the sea, are okay, and they are used here, they are minus, and there will be no praise, do you know? Little master! ”

Ho~ Although there is a "little", this "young master" makes me feel beautiful when I hear it, and an irrepressible smile hangs on my face, thinking, it's over, the inner drama has been all seen......

"Sit down, have a snack in the future, write a narrative, write down the points you just said, and the score will not be low, use your brain more."

I can't listen to it at all, because Young Master Ben is not something that ordinary people like you can teach!

"Why does the teacher always take you under the knife?"

Because of Lan Yuxuan's words, it made me feel like I saw heaven, she finally stood on a united front with me, and fought against the evil Xiao Zhou for me!

"Yes, that slut."

"But you deserve it."

“……”

Lan Yuxuan's ridicule made me fall from heaven to the ground again in an instant, and all the beauty was shattered.

"What do you think I'm doing?"

"Don't look at your fun today, be careful to pull the list tomorrow."

Huh? I suddenly thought, Lan Yuxuan said so lively, what about what she wrote herself?

So, while she wasn't paying attention, I quickly snatched her volume, and while stopping her from snatching it, I read it, and it read: "The context is clear, the characters are distinct, and the final sentence sublimates the theme, which is generally very good, continue to maintain." ”

At this time, Xiao Zhou's voice came from the podium: "You two have been at the same table for so long, why don't you know how to study hard with others?" ”

“……”

I'll just ......