"Brother Hua, I said it directly, the logic of this script is very unreasonable, it seems that a bunch of clues have not been explained clearly, it seems to be a mess, intricate, and then it is similar to a bad movie, I can say, if you act according to this script, eighty percent will hit the street at the box office in the end."

Ye Feng organized the language and said everything in his heart.

Hearing this, Liu Hua was stunned.

Because he knew that what Ye Feng said was very pertinent, and these were all right.

When he was writing the script, he also encountered these problems.

This is a mistake that novices always make, that is, clues or something, all of which are not explained clearly, resulting in a very bad script in the end.

Thinking of this, Liu Hua gave Ye Feng a thumbs up and said, "Ye Feng, you are really amazing, you are worthy of being a person who has won the screenwriter award." ”

"Brother Hua, what are you talking about, I just know how to write, nothing else." Ye Feng said modestly.

"No, you're really powerful, Ye Feng, I have one more request, I hope you can grant me."

Liu Hua said after thinking for a long time.

He is not up to the job of this screenwriter, after all, it is the first time to write.

Besides, the screenwriting industry has a high threshold, and there is a specialization in the art industry.

Since he can't do it, he might as well let someone else try it.

And Ye Feng is reliable.

Immediately, Liu Hua said: "Ye Feng, or I'll leave this matter to you, okay?" ”

"Did you mean to let me write the script?"

Ye Feng asked.

"Yes, I can't write a script either, I'm ashamed to hear you mention it today, so it's better to give the script to someone like you who can write and rewrite it, what do you think?"

Liu Hua asked.

"Okay, Brother Hua, leave the script to me."

After Ye Feng pondered for a while, he agreed.

Liu Hua suddenly breathed a sigh of relief and said to Ye Feng: "Ye Feng, thank you, thank you for your hard work." ”

"Brother Hua, what are you talking about? That's what I'm supposed to do. ”

Ye Feng said disapprerovingly.

And this time, Liu Hua's impression of Ye Feng is getting better and better, and he has long regarded him as his brother.

"By the way, Ye Feng, how long will it take you to finish writing this script?"

Liu Hua asked.

"It's about a day or so." Ye Feng said with a smile.

"That's okay, it's not in a hurry anyway, you can take your time." Liu Hua said again.

"Okay, Brother Hua."

Ye Feng nodded.

After that, Ye Feng said goodbye to Liu Hua.

stayed in a five-star hotel arranged by Liu Hua for him.

Liu Hua arranged for him very well, about two thousand a day.

Ye Feng was very satisfied with this arrangement.

After that, Ye Feng called Liu Hua.

"Hey, Brother Hua, I may need some cleansing during the writing of the script, so I hope you don't come to me during this time, okay?"

"Of course, in this way, you write this time, I will ask someone to serve you three meals a day, so that you don't have to be distracted."

On the other end of the phone, Liu Hua said thoughtfully.

"Okay, then thank you, Brother Hua."

Ye Feng said gratefully.

"It's okay, that's what I'm supposed to do."

After a while, the two exchanged pleasantries and ended the call.

After Ye Feng hung up the phone, he began to write the script.

However, he still retained the original framework of the script.

Something new is constantly being added to this framework.

Make its own plot more reasonable.

During this period, Ye Feng also used the computer to check some relevant information, and constantly enriched some plots that needed attention.

That's it, after a busy day.

The script can be considered complete.

At this time, it was already five o'clock in the morning.

There was still an hour to go, and it was about to dawn.

After Ye Feng yawned, he immediately turned off the computer, hugged the quilt directly, and fell asleep.

He was so tired that he stayed up too late.

He clearly felt that his body's energy was constantly depleted.

Liu Hua was also very considerate of Ye Feng, knowing that he must be very tired during this period.

I didn't bother him until about six o'clock in the evening.

He estimated that the time should be almost up, and immediately went directly to the hotel to find Ye Feng.

Although he said that this matter was not urgent, it was actually quite urgent.

As soon as he arrived at the hotel, Liu Hua immediately knocked on Ye Feng's door.

After a while, Ye Feng came over to open the door with worried eyelids.

As soon as I saw Liu Hua, I didn't react a little.

When Liu Hua saw Ye Feng like this, he was a little ashamed and said, "Ye Feng, I didn't bother you, right?" ”

"No, no, Brother Hua, I was just eating, but I haven't woken up yet, you can come in first."

Ye Feng turned sideways and let Liu Hua walk in.

Liu Hua walked in.

Then I saw a pile of meals on the table.

Immediately asked, "How was the food?" Are you okay? Do you want me to have the staff bring you some more? ”

"Brother Hua, what are you talking about? It's nothing, I don't have much appetite, so I don't have to bother the staff, they work hard. ”

Ye Feng said with a smile.

Liu Hua didn't waste any time, and got down to business.

"Ye Feng, by the way, I want to ask how the script was changed?"

"I've done it all, for you, Brother Hua, you can take a look, if there is anything you are not satisfied with, you can bring it up, and I will make changes when the time comes."

Ye Feng took out a document from the drawer and handed it to Liu Hua.

Liu Hua took the script and read it carefully.

Ye Feng was eating on the side.

By the time he finished eating, Liu Hua hadn't finished reading it.

But from his expression, it can be seen that he is very satisfied with the script.

Ye Feng glanced at it, turned around and threw away the food.

After coming back.

glanced at Liu Hua and asked, "Brother Hua, how is it?" Have you finished reading the script? ”

Liu Hua's eyes were full of shock at this time, and after looking at Ye Feng, he was stunned for a moment.

It took half a ring before he reacted.

Then he smiled bitterly and said, "Ye Feng, I only know where your level is now?" This script of yours is so well written, I just watched it like this, and I watched it with relish, you can imagine how popular it is when this movie is made, compared to you, I am like a garbage, you are right, I am a bad movie. ”

Ye Feng didn't expect to give Liu Hua such a big stimulus.

immediately said: "Brother Hua, you can't say that, everyone has their own talent, just like your acting skills, I don't think I can surpass it, God is fair to everyone." ”

"No, Ye Feng, you are too modest, I think my acting skills are estimated to be better than you during this time, and in the future, I may not see it."

Liu Hua said with a wry smile again.

Ye Feng suddenly didn't know what to say.

Neither is comfort.

After all, in this case, he seems to be standing on a commanding height, and he will only put a lot of pressure on others.

Fortunately, Liu Hua didn't have too many entanglements on this.

Suddenly changed the topic.

We started talking about the script again.