I hope you can pay attention to the new book "No One Knows the Heavens Better Than Me", if you like it, click on a collection, recommend votes, if you can keep reading it, it would be great.

The manuscript is well prepared, the plot is compact, the writing is excellent, and the quality and speed of the new book are guaranteed.

As long as you are shameless, it is someone else who is embarrassed.

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The domestic chapter on the power of a country was written for about three months.

The results are not too good.

One of the most important reasons is that it is not cool enough!

The book does not meet the criteria of a qualified cool essay.

First of all, for the plot.

The real refreshing shaping needs to be suppressed first, and then exploded.

But here's the problem, this book is not easy to suppress, and there is no way to suppress it, especially when the protagonist's army has been successfully built.

In fact, there is another way to write this book, that is, to focus on the little people, using stories that can be sung and cried.

But when it comes time to put pen to paper, I will realize that those people, I am not qualified to write for the time being.

So much so that most of the plot of this book is flattened.

Secondly, the problem lies in the shaping of the character image.

The protagonist Zhu Ping was originally conceived, the kind of ordinary person who is full of various shortcomings and imperfections, and is a little greedy for life and afraid of death.

But about the early stage of the background laid, after the general environment appeared, the protagonist's character design did not know how to describe the shortcomings.

So in the early stages of the story, many readers asked if the outline had been changed.

In fact, the outline hasn't changed, but the protagonist doesn't know how to shape it.

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In the middle of this book, many of the plots are superficial, one is because of the fear of mythical beasts, and the other is because they feel that their knowledge is not enough, and they will give readers wrong arguments.

So during this period, it can be perceived that the strategy of this book is very heavy, because this part deliberately ignores the shaping of the characters, resulting in a too compact plot.

Therefore, some readers are saying that there are too many calculations in this part, which makes it very difficult to understand.

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Originally, in addition to the domestic chapter, this book also had a foreign conquest chapter.

This part is the focus of the Divine Beast's attack.

So after the establishment of the United Kingdom, I will finish this book for the time being.

As for the follow-up of this book, I can only wait until I have accumulated a sufficient readership base, the writing is good enough, and the knowledge is deep enough.

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New book "No One Knows the Heavens Better Than I Am".

Naruto World.

Nine-Tails: "Naruto, repay virtue with virtue, repay grievances with straightforwardness, from now on, let Konoha feel your pain!" ”

World of Heroes.

Galio: "Galen, to fight for those who can't fight, the Demacian Empire must be destroyed, enter the gates!" ”

Marvel World.

Jarvis: "Do you understand? ”

"If freedom is not restricted, all that remains is the law of the jungle, for the sake of order, long live the hydra!" The Avengers shouted with their fists raised in the air.

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I wish to walk in the heavens in parallel, become an anti-hero mentor, and bring the protagonists whose thoughts deviate from the right track back to the high ground of IQ.

Bringing deviant thinking back on track.