Chapter 418: Script
"Director James? What do you mean? ”
Ye Feng was a little excited in his heart, and immediately asked.
"I don't want to trick you, do you want to see if the role here is suitable for you? After all, you are so popular in the entertainment industry, right, it is not easy for everyone to become famous, I also survived step by step like this back then, and now that the Han market is so developed, this role is very suitable for you. ”
James said with a sincere face.
When Ye Feng heard this, he admired James more and more.
This is the real director.
Thinking of this, Ye Feng suddenly said gratefully: "Thank you, Director James, then please give me a little time, I'll take a good look at the script, and then make plans whether to act." ”
After all, although he is among the insiders, he can climb very quickly, and most people are far from having as much luck as him.
But he didn't say how to rely on luck to achieve today's status, and he just relied on the reputation of his TV series and movies.
So you have to be cautious about choosing a script or something, even if you are starring in a movie with a big director.
A bad script, he resolutely won't act.
Before, he was mainly giving James a face.
But James also recognized Ye Feng's attitude very much, and appreciated him more and more.
Half an hour passed.
Ye Feng finished reading the script, and finally breathed a sigh of relief.
James was very discerning, and immediately saw that Ye Feng's face was a little wrong.
He immediately asked, "Ye Feng, what's wrong?" What's wrong with this script? ”
He really hoped that Ye Feng could point out all the shortcomings in the script.
This is definitely beneficial to him, after all, Universal has invested nearly 400 million in this film.
If the film comes out at the end, the reputation is not good.
Then the company's direct loss will be greater than 400 million, then his reputation will be completely overturned, and it will eventually be finished.
This is the last thing he wants.
And to point out mistakes is obviously not enough in the face of these losses.
Ye Feng glanced at it and immediately shook his head: "Director James, there are many loopholes in this script, for example, why Brian Lee suddenly clashed with Dominic, you didn't explain this clearly, and his previous relationship with Dominic, you didn't explain it clearly, and the most important thing is why Brian Lee and Dominic fought for racing in the end, and you didn't give a detailed explanation, this script ...... Ay! ”
Ye Feng couldn't say any more.
In order to give James face, there were some ugly words, but in the end he didn't say them.
James didn't think so, but admired Ye Feng even more.
Asked, "What's wrong with this script?" It's okay, you said it, I knew there must be something wrong with the script, but I humbly accepted it. ”
"Director James, I said it directly, the logic of this script is very unreasonable, it seems to be a mess, intricate, similar to a bad movie, if you follow the performance of this script, eighty percent will hit the box office in the end."
Ye Feng didn't shy away from anything, and said everything in his heart.
Hearing this, James was immediately stunned.
When the screenwriter was writing the script, he also encountered these problems, but he didn't pay attention to it, and he didn't expect to cause such a big mistake.
This is a mistake that screenwriters always make, and the clues are not explained clearly, which leads to a very bad script in the end.
Thinking of this, James gave Ye Feng a thumbs up: "Ye Feng, you are really good, you are worthy of being a person who has won the screenwriter award." ”
"Director James, I just know how to write, and these screenwriters are actually not bad, but they are just a little careless."
Ye Feng said modestly.
"No, you're really powerful, Ye Feng, I have one more request, I hope you can grant me."
James said after thinking for a long time.
He felt that those screenwriters were completely incapable of doing the job of this screenwriter.
The so-called art industry has a specialization, since those people can't do it, it's better for really talented people to try it.
And Ye Feng is reliable.
Immediately, James said: "Ye Feng, or I'll leave this matter to you, okay?" ”
"Did you mean to let me write the script?"
Ye Feng asked.
"Yes, those people can't write the script, they will only delay the work, so it is better to give the script to someone like you who can write and rewrite it, what do you think?"
James asked, a little apprehensive.
"Okay, Director James, leave the script to me."
After Ye Feng pondered for a while, he agreed.
James suddenly breathed a sigh of relief and said to Ye Feng: "Ye Feng, thank you very much, thank you for your hard work." ”
"Director James, what are you talking about? That's what I'm supposed to do. ”
Ye Feng said disapprerovingly.
And this time, James's impression of Ye Feng is getting better and better.
"By the way, Ye Feng, how long will it take you to finish writing this script?"
James asked.
"It's about a day or so." Ye Feng said with a smile.
"Okay, you can take your time and don't rush." James said again.
"Okay, Director James."
Ye Feng nodded.
After that, Ye Feng said goodbye to James and lived in a five-star hotel.
Then during this time, Ye Feng began to write the script.
However, he still retains the original framework of the script, but constantly adds some new things to this framework.
Make its own plot more reasonable.
During this period, Ye Feng also used the computer to check some relevant information.
That's it, after a busy day.
The script can be considered complete.
After Ye Feng yawned, he immediately turned off the computer and went to sleep.
……
James knew he must have been tired during this time and didn't bother him.
Until about six o'clock in the evening.
He estimated that the time should be almost up, and immediately went to find Ye Feng.
As soon as he arrived at the hotel, James immediately knocked on Ye Feng's door.
After a while, Ye Feng came over and opened the door.
As soon as I saw James, I didn't react a little.
When James saw Ye Feng like this, he was a little ashamed and said, "Ye Feng, I didn't bother you, right?" ”
"No, no, Director James, I was just having dinner, you can come in first."
Ye Feng let James walk in.
James didn't waste any time, and got down to business.
"Ye Feng, by the way, I want to ask how the script was changed?"
"I've done it all, for you, Director James, you can take a look, if there is anything you are not satisfied with, you can bring it up, and I will revise it then."
Ye Feng took out a document from the drawer and handed it to James.
James took the script and read it carefully.
From his expression, it can be seen that he is very satisfied with the script.
Ye Feng glanced at James and asked, "Director James, how is it?" Have you finished reading the script? ”
James' eyes were full of shock at this time.
After glancing at Ye Feng, he was stunned for a moment.
It took half a ring before he reacted.
Then he applauded Ye Feng: "Ye Feng, your script is so well written, I read it with relish, and when this is made into a movie, I can predict how popular it will be." ”