Episode 1 Righteous Heroes Episode 1 Writing Summary
After writing the first episode, to summarize it, it can be regarded as reflecting on yourself.
Since the book was released on July 31, more than 6,000 words a day, there has been no interruption, and it has been 32 days, 93 chapters have been updated, and more than 210,000 words!
At this point, the story of this novel can be regarded as the beginning!
For the writing of this episode, I am personally quite satisfied!
The images of several main characters have been preliminarily sketched:
Long hair fluttering 'Chen Qiaoqiao'!
Senior sister of the police flower 'Yang Siru'!
Pure beautiful girl 'Liu Ruyin'!
and the actor 'Ke Fan', who has a golden finger to shuttle between the past and the present to crack the truth!
There are also supporting roles:
Full-time cook Wang Ronglu;
Yu Bixia, a woman who is independent in the workplace;
There is also the emotional tear between them from cheating, being cheated, to whether or not to divorce!
Also, Lu Yizhong, Yang Xiulian, Liu Kun, Jiang Yue, Zhu Qingqing, Lin Peipei, Jiang Peiyou, Li Jingyi, Fan Lizhu, Mu Xiaodie;
Xu Haoqiang, a successful person who plays with women;
PUA players Mo Feisi and Han Jiang;
and, Liu Ruyin's mother Lin Ruofen, who only showed one side;
Grandpa who only lives in the lines, etc.
Looking back, I felt insufficient:
First, when writing about emotional interactions, you may lose the coolness of pretending to be forced;
Especially after Liu Ruyin appeared, she came back from solving the case and interacted with Liu Ruyin's emotional scene.
Although I feel that the writing is very delicate, but when I look back later, I feel that it is a little longer, and the rhythm is a little stretched.
Second, it's the beginning.
The entry point is a little bland.
At the beginning, it just made the protagonist solve a small case, simply pretended to be a faint force, and then initially displayed the image of the protagonist.
But then I thought about it, this beginning is not as good as some other novels, at the beginning, he was dismissed from the marriage, slapped in the face, and let the feet wash his feet, there is so much emotional tension!
And it doesn't start until the third chapter that you start to enter the main plot, and you may not be able to catch the reader all at once!
Third, there are some characters, or flat images.
But a large novel like an online novel, and especially an urban pretending to be a forced article, inevitably has some tool man characters.
Just for a certain plot, you can't write everyone three-dimensionally.
It can only be said that there is no such skill for the time being!
Finally, the title of this episode is named after 'Righteous Man'.
If it is the end of the Korean drama-style picture, it should be the picture that is frozen in 'Xiao Yan, a little girl who has been redeemed and regained her courage, raises her face slightly and says Brother Righteous Hero'.
The first episode of "Justice Man", summarized here, it's almost over.
Tomorrow will start updating the second episode: "The First Edge".