"To tell the truth, what the state has shown to be related to cultivation is only the tip of the iceberg, and none of us knows what the real cultivation realm should look like. Of course, it is not excluded that some students who are hidden in the world are also monks, but I don't think there will be, after all, if you can cultivate immortals, who will come to gnaw on books and find your way through the college entrance examination, right? ”

Gou Haodong's favorability towards Teacher Luo has increased again, if this sentence hadn't been caught off guard, he would have recorded it for his parents to see, what kind of school he went to!

"If there are really students who cultivate immortals, then the teacher begs you to teach me a little bit, so that I can also feel the mysteries." Teacher Luo smiled: "Okay, let's get down to business, let's talk about it in general." ”

"These social problems are the country, we have to face, you need to stand in your point of view, find out which aspect of the problem is from the material, for its idea, and then use your insight and experience to raise questions, analyze the problem, and finally solve the problem." Mr. Luo did not make superfluous gestures or incendiary words, holding the microphone in his right hand and pointing his left hand at the position he was talking about on the screen, just like in class.

This is the earnest imparting of knowledge, not the "experts" who sell money everywhere.

Gou Haodong bit his pen and listened carefully to the teacher's explanation. It was undeniably the most serious class he had taken since high school.

"So it's a hole in the air, and the students below take out the school plans printed by the school, right?" Teacher Luo turned around and returned to the desk, took out a clipboard and connected it to the notebook: "Let's conduct a specific case analysis, the paper used in Qilu Province is a national college entrance examination paper, and we will start with the national college entrance examination paper!" ”

The whiteboard is no longer showing the video, but the teacher's notebook projection.

"We don't want to study the year if it's too long, the college entrance examination is a trend, and it will continue to change every year. I started five years ago......"

"Let's go to see five years ago, this is a comic question, through the analysis of comics to make up ideas, the picture is two children, one originally scored 100 points, this time the test scored 98 points, and was slapped by the parents; The other originally only scored 54 points, but this time he scored 60 points, and his face had kiss marks from his parents. What is this? ”

"If you're the one who wrote the question, what kind of social problem do you want to show? What do you think about the students? Teacher Luo paused and gave the students time to think: "In fact, it is not difficult to see that this is education. China's nine-year compulsory education and college entrance examination model is different from the Western education model, according to the simplest statement, it is difficult to enter the university door in China, and it is difficult to get out of the university door in the West. ”

Teacher Luo pushed his glasses: "Before I got on the plane, I asked the teacher to send me a few excellent essays by my classmates to get a feel for everyone's style and state. It's very good.,Really.,It's said that the education level in Kyoto is high or something.,These articles that the teacher gave me.,It's also a good place in Kyoto.。 In terms of style and grasp of narrative rhythm, it can be said to be a perfect score for high school level. ”

The students can't help but feel a little proud, although they are only praised by those few people, but they are honored.

"But ......"

"Whew-" Some students joked, knowing that there would be this sentence. Everyone had a good time, and then continued to pay attention to the questions that Mr. Luo said.

"The problem is that the intention is not worthy of the pen." Teacher Luo smiled.

There was silence in the classroom, this sentence really surprised the students, and the articles that could be taken out must be the best of the best and the best found by the teacher. If there is a problem with the idea, it will definitely not be taken out and scored highly. Everyone held their breath and waited for Mr. Luo's explanation.

"The idea is right, that is, it should be placed on education, the core idea is correct, and the starting point is the attitude of this parent towards the child. But ask students to think, what is education? What is the purpose of education? ”

"Learn!" Classmates who didn't get very good grades coaxed. The rest of the class giggled.

The squad leader slapped the table and turned his head to scan the class: "Think about it, don't make trouble, don't miss the rare opportunity." Only after thinking about it can you understand the teacher's next explanation. ”

Teacher Luo's voice on the whiteboard sounded again: "Do you feel like a tiger gnawing at the sky when you hear this question, and you can't get what to say?" That's right! At first glance, this question may sound simple, but it is too broad and abstract. Falling on the article is actually the same truth! ”

The students subconsciously nodded in agreement, but they only knew what it was, and they didn't know how to change it.

"The idea of an argumentative essay is to go from a small level to a big one, from a small level to a higher level. From the problem itself, the individual, to the country, to the world, rather than to explain the truth in its entirety. A real type of argumentative essay is an essay with humanistic care, and an essay that is filled with rhetoric and various famous quotes cannot be adapted to the college entrance examination essay in my eyes. ”

"At that time, there was a very controversial argumentative essay for the college entrance examination, I don't know if the students had read it, called "Living on a Tree".

A lot of people in the classroom said they knew it. Gou Haodong looked at Wang Hao curiously, and Wang Hao explained: "The first score of this essay is thirty-nine points, the subsequent score is forty-nine points, and the final arbitration is a full score. ”

Gou Haodong looked at Wang Hao in disbelief: "I don't read much and you are biased towards me, and the score difference is so much, and in the end, the arbitration is even higher than both?" ”

For the sake of fairness, an essay will be scored by two marking teachers, and the difference between the two is within three points, then the average number will be taken, if the score difference is greater than three, then it will be directly handed over to the arbitration teacher with higher level and deeper qualifications. There is the score of the arbitrator as the final criterion.

Originally, full-score essays are rare, and the full scores that have been arbitrated have attracted attention, and there has been a heated discussion in the society for a while, some people think that they are worthy of full points of encouragement, and some people feel that they are not worthy.

"Yes" Wang Hao nodded: "The radish and green vegetables have their own love, and it is estimated that they are eye-to-eye with the arbitration teacher Wang Ba on mung beans." Teacher Luo is going to speak, listen-"

"I think it's a high score!" Teacher Luo's voice was very firm: "This is my personal opinion, and I can only represent myself, this article does not reach the level of full scores." Because as I said earlier, an argumentative essay is about your thinking skills, not how many unfamiliar words you have! It is true that this student has read a lot and has a rich knowledge base, but the idea of this article is not clear, and it lacks logic and a combination of social issues. ”

"And to be honest, there are several errors in the use of these obscure words, and the author himself only knows a little about them, and writes them stubbornly."

"Students, the 21st century is now the information age! We must have a pattern, improve your horizons, and look at problems from a higher height. ”

Teacher Luo paused and concluded: "Let's not talk about this article, the benevolent will see the wise, and some people think that this candidate has a deep cultural heritage, so he should be encouraged to inspire more candidates to study and accumulate." For example, to formalize what I just said, our pattern. ”

"We went on to say that there is no first and no second, and different grading teachers have different preferences, so in order to ensure the score, it is recommended that students who are not good at argumentative essays use the routine, in fact, those who score will win the world!"

Teacher Luo continued to speak, but Gou Haodong began to wander.

In fact, he is a plan routine, is he bending his waist for just two points? The answer is no, he doesn't want to. The self-proclaimed literati naturally has his own pride, but now the question is whether to pursue the moon or sixpence.

In the face of the torrent of the college entrance examination, he is not even as good as an ant, and in the cultivation realm, he may at least go to the end with his own path, but in the college entrance examination, the consequence of being too individual is that he will fall into the name of Sun Shan.

When you're paying attention, time always flies quickly, and the lecture starts after the lunch break, and it doesn't take long for the lecture to end.

Mr. Luo still had to catch the evening flight, but he still didn't finish until seven o'clock.

"Goodbye, classmates, I wish you the title of the gold list in the college entrance examination in three months!"

Warm applause filled the entire teaching building, and Teacher Luo, who was in the auditorium, could hear it. The students expressed their respect for Mr. Luo's profound knowledge and gratitude for his teaching.

Teacher Zhao came to the classroom and clapped his hands to signal the students to be quiet: "How do you feel about this lecture?" ”

"Good!" "Learn a lot!" "This teacher is amazing."

"I have to admit that your teacher is not as good as him, and it is not only you who are learning this time, but also me." Mr. Zhao said with emotion: "People's vision and height are incomparable to our small county. In fact, teachers of all levels and subjects were sent out to study every year, that is, to observe the classroom of an excellent front-line teacher like Mr. Luo, or to listen to the lectures given by the college entrance examination questioners, and then come back and give feedback to other teachers, and everyone studied together and finally taught them to the students. ”

"But now it's clear that the way we chew and spit out to everyone is actually not as good as feeling it ourselves and internalizing our direct experience. Today was an experiment to invite teachers to give lectures, and the effect is very good, so after a while, there will be other teachers of different subjects invited from all over the country, and I hope that students can study seriously and gain more knowledge as they do today. Okay, you guys hurry up and go to self-study, I'm going to the fourth class, and I don't know if they can turn the sky around without me. Teacher Zhao left in a hurry, and Teacher Wang entered the classroom on his heels.

Teacher Wang smiled: "I heard that the students studied well today, and tomorrow they will relax, and it is time to take the 100-day oath." ”