It's another hasty testimonial, uh... Anyway, I'd like to say sorry to everyone_(:з"∠)_

Then let's talk about why this book is not good in the future, and the difficulty of writing this book.

1. First of all, the first and most fatal point is the sense of humility

A sense of humility is really important in this book.

The reason why everyone thinks the evening fragrance is good is that I have brought the humility of the protagonist to the extreme, and the various emotional resonances and contrasts that arise.

The humility of the protagonist is something important and important for this book.

But with the increase in the number of girls who have been attacked, there are more girls who are willing to give benefits to the protagonist, and this sense of humility is difficult to create.

To put it bluntly, there are two beautiful girls chasing the protagonist backwards, is it a licking dog? Doesn't count, right?

No matter how I write about the poor protagonist, but when I think that the protagonist has Xiaoyu and Wanxiang, it seems very contradictory to lay the humility of chasing other girls.

The solution to this problem is actually to add a buff to the girl that will lose memory.

It's a great way to fix it, but there are a lot of other problems with writing it that way.

2. Another question about the business line of this book is the text copyist.

The theme of copying the public is rotten in many books, especially copying songs and movies.

I think everyone came to read this book not specifically to read the copy, but to watch the licking of dogs and emotional dramas.

But another problem arises...

That is, every emotional release of the protagonist is achieved by copying.

Ren Ying - Copying the painting starry sky

Lin Wanxiang - copy the song

Bai Xiaoyu - the god of medicine who copied the movie

Zhao Kewei - variety show, copying many songs.

These copied literary works are all in order to make the protagonist jump from this identity as a licking dog to a medium that makes girls feel sorry and eager to get something.

But in doing so, the repetition of the routine cannot be avoided, which can be seen here from the only article.

After copying the song in the evening fragrance before, the effect of copying the song is much smaller.

This is where the emotional release at the end of the story is the most difficult.

directly led to the fact that when chasing Lin Wanqiu, I couldn't think of any way to make Lin Wanqiu really like the protagonist, eager and then hoping to get the protagonist.

Here, Lin Wanqiu's transformation is not only to make the character like this, but also to write for the reader to recognize.

Let the protagonist copy another song? Copying a movie? Copying variety shows? This will be much less effective.

3. There is also the problem of repetition of routines.

This book is essentially a brain text with only one routine, and there are many ways to write long.

As many readers have told me, slow down the pace, stuff some water into it, and write more branches.

It is undeniable that this is indeed the case in the current creative environment of online articles.

After all, the more words you have, the more money you make.

But tuberose Xiaoyu is even the only one, and the connection of each of these three chapters is very important.

It's so important that any of my chapters stuffing the side plot will make the whole story loose and less flavorful.

So I prefer a story that can be written well rather than a long story.

Therefore, the plots of the three articles are pushed very quickly, at least the evening fragrance chapter and the Xiaoyu chapter are absolutely no superfluous chapters.

4. Questions about the author's ability to create.

It is undeniable that my creative ability in the city is still a little worse.

If the city focuses on the shortcomings of the parents, as well as the shaping of supporting roles, many extended stories can be written.

For example, there are no supporting actors in this book at all, and there is no branch storyline about supporting characters.

It can only be said that there is too little life experience.

5. In short, this book leaves a lot to be desired, and I would like to thank the readers who have been with me until now.

The results of this book are actually quite good.

The first order was 8400, and now the average order can also have 7100.

In the back, I really worked hard to create the feeling of the front for everyone.

During that time on the shelves, I really... I was in a state of extreme anxiety.

But it was still the initial planning, coupled with the difficulty of writing the brain cave essay itself, and the reason why the urban essay creation was too weak and could not be done well.

In short, thank you all for your continued companionship.

6. The new book will be presented in the next few days, and this book will be merged into the large "Sister's Bride".

The new book is a bold and somewhat fatal attempt, a genre that no one has ever tried or few people have written at this stage.

It is a genre based on the worldview of my previous work, "Culture Invades Another World".

Urban readers may not like it a little, and it's very, very, very, very niche, but I still hope I can have fun writing...

Anyway, thank you for the third time to the readers who have been with you until now, and we will see you in the new book soon!