Chapter 662: Thesis Logic Second Update

Judging from the posture of the "fish man" in the ice cube, it should have been discovered by the old man after he had died for a while, because the outer ends of his limbs had been eaten by all kinds of fish, and only a slightly clumsy body was left at this time. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 ο½‰ο½Žο½†ο½

"They don't usually appear offshore, it's..."

Jeremy took a closer look, only to find that the fish-man was not only huge, but also had a much more vicious head than he had remembered. Several strange bone spurs protrude from the surface of its body, and it looks like it has an indescribable sense of aggression. This is completely inconsistent with the oceanographic research data of recent years - the fish-man has always been unaggressive in the eyes of Lasiman researchers, because they live in the open sea, and only a few sightings have been recorded by the long-distance fleet, and they are generally only about 1.4 meters in size. Therefore, Jeremy knew that the fish-man in front of him was probably completely different from those at all.

"It's estimated that more research ships will be sent to the open sea, and a few more mission bounties will be released recently... It's been an eventful time, and the border hasn't been quiet lately. ”

Jeremy rubbed his brows, and the old man turned his head with interest: "Border?

"It's not that I'm dissatisfied with Rasiman, Eskar has launched an active war against several countries next to him, and I don't know what madness he had. If you don't know it, there will be another big war..."

"Isn't that a good thing for us?"

"That being said, I always felt that the country of Eskar has been a bit out of control since the new king Talia came to the throne. It doesn't feel very good. ”

"Mad Dog..."

Jeremy's eyes narrowed.

On 8 September, Houdini's fleet had entered familiar waters and was expected to reach Rasiman in three days.

The sailors in the cabin were much more active than before, and it was not a comfortable thing for anyone to wander around the sea for more than a month, so the soldiers from Ivota were more excited than the sailors. The barbarian men shouted and wrestled shirtless, while the cavalrymen held long swords and gestured back and forth, venting their exuberant energy.

In the cabin, Sylvia was holding a cup of ice cream while skillfully touching the cards with one hand, and then "snapped" a button: "Self-drawing! Thirteen! Hahaha-"

"Ahhhhh

"My gold!"

Nephie, Akasha, and Mylensella all screamed to see if she was cheating, and then they all began to rummage through the gold coins next to her, muttering that Sylvia would pay for all the room and boardβ€”the latter patting her chest and reassuring herself.

"What do you want!Just look for the most expensive point!hahaha..."

Above the joyful cabin, Houdini was in the captain's room revising his paper on mutated deep-sea creatures, and Roddy pushed the door in, intending to talk to him about the arrangements after he went ashore, and when he saw the words under his quill pen, he pointed curiously: "What about deep-sea creatures?

"It's being revised, you see, it's time to give your opinion. ”

Houdini's words were actually polite, because he knew that Roddy had not written a paper. Or rather... The entire kingdom of Karen does not yet have a large-scale thesis system. The paper in the journal "Magic" was too superficial in his eyes, and Rasiman would definitely be sprayed like a dog.

Roddy was actually curious about how Raciman's paper was written. As an undergraduate graduate of the new century, he really read a lot of literature in order to complete his graduation thesis. Speaking of the undergraduate experience, there are not many professional content that I really remember after graduation, but the change in the way of thinking and logic is something that can really benefit people.

So after a brief reading of Houdini's paper, Roddy's conclusion is: although the content of this guy's writing is fine, the format of the expression is extremely confusing, and there are no intuitive charts, and after reading for a long time, I only feel that there is a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west, and there is no logical order of reading that allows people to quickly grasp the key points.

Judging from the fact that the "Magister" papers are still at this level, Roddy estimates that eighty percent of Rasiman's papers in the entire wizarding world also have similar problems on a large scale - the reason why they have not improved is probably because everyone is used to it.

"How?"

Houdini felt that in terms of professional knowledge, Roddy was completely blown out by himself. Therefore, when I ask this, I can't help but have a tone of waiting for praise. Luo Di naturally didn't find fault directly, nodded and said: "You have seen a lot more details than I have seen, these analyses have not been heard of before, but obviously have strong reference significance." Thinking about it, Rasiman has accumulated a lot of research on marine life, and in comparison, it is estimated that there is still a large gap in this area in the Karen Kingdom. ”

"After all, Rasiman has conquered more than a dozen small countries nearby, and now he has set his sights further, otherwise the current resources will definitely not be enough in the future. ”

This is naturally something to be proud of, but when he saw that Luo Di still had something to say, he was curious: "Is there something I don't understand?"

"It's not that I don't understand, what I'm thinking is, you will submit this paper for publication at that time, right?"

"Yes, Deep Blue, the journal responsible for marine life. I have written three papers in the past, and I am currently the most authoritative marine academic journal for Laciman. ”

Houdini said this with confidence, after all, these papers brought him a lot of "arcane points". But Roddy didn't ask anything more, but directly picked up the pen and drew a simple bar chart while reading his paper - all the data in Houdini's paper were directly listed, which made Roddy, a modern college student, dizzy to see, and now the chart is listed, and he suddenly feels refreshed.

This is followed by the logical order. Luo Di was born in science and engineering, and the structure of writing papers in the past was roughly "asking questions", "making hypotheses", "making plans", "doing experiments", "analyzing results", and "drawing conclusions". To put it bluntly, this kind of scientific investigation paper is to compare and analyze, so the experimental steps are omitted, but in order for the paper to be qualified, the eight words "simple and clear" are the prerequisites - this alone will not pass the Hudini pile of words.

All he did was rearrange the order of the paper. Of course, in order to honor Houdini's work, Roddy wrote an outline in a short overview on scratch paper, and a table of contents in front of it, indicating a clear structure like "1.1 Abnormal behavior" listed under "1. Research on Species of Alpha Shark Variations".

It only took two or three minutes for Roddy to finish the outline. Accompanied by two drawings drawn casually, Roddy handed them to Houdini and said, "In the Everta Research Department, I asked them to write everything in this format. I haven't changed the content because I think it's already good, but with a better formatting, it should read better? Of course, this is just my personal opinion. ”

Roddy could have done otherwise, but his behavior at the moment was more of an experiment... He wondered how much Gen Rasiman could accept with a simple change in the format of the paper. )