I read the book review area today, and I suddenly wanted to complain about two sentences.

First, I saw that some children's shoes said that this part of the plot is a bit messy.

It's just that the description of the two-line interactive advancement is messed up?

In general, the scene is generally involved, Tang Fang has a line, Bai Hao and others have a line, the current situation in Turanx is fermenting, and the dark tide in the West Lunbuir region is surging.

Is this messy? Some book friends think that I am writing the number of words in the water as soon as I write the worldview, and I don't read it seriously in the verbose, and then quickly turn to the later battle chapters, and then see the nouns or scenes and characters that I don't understand, and I don't bother to turn over the previous introduction and say that I scribbled, I am really speechless......

Second, some people think that there is too much waste of pen and ink in irrelevant supporting roles.

Is this plot over? Do you know that the two lines of Tang Fang and Bai Hao will be merged into one line? Do you have to design a plot that repeatedly escalates and slaps your face in a general upgrade novel before you can accept it? I think you can remember everyone, just like those book friends in the book friend group usually discuss in the group, they can remember every supporting role around the protagonist, I believe this is not a difficult thing for all book friends who read books seriously.

Supporting characters like Bai Hao and Roy, I am more than happy to portray them as flesh-and-blood people, a green leaf that can grow together with the flower of the protagonist and can see the texture. Instead of a cold name, a prop.

I'll admit that sometimes when your mind gets stuck, you'll have a chapter or two of fun in your daily life, but when it comes to the subplots that advance the plot, you'll eventually connect to the main line at that stage.

Third, the issue of concretization of the base.

Now that it is still in the stage of gaining momentum, and the rear is unstable and there is a lack of resources, does it make sense to make the base concrete?

All I can say is that when the plot arrives, it will naturally appear when it is time to appear.

There is already a lot of foreshadowing in the front, of course, it is very obscure, and you will know when the plot arrives in the future.

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Finally, a couple of digressions.

What I want to write is a story, a story based on the plot and characters, not a pure rhythm and cool text that pretends to be slapped in the face without brains and repeatedly pretends to be slapped in the face without brains.

It's not just a brainless thug who crushes and turns the whole world over, in my opinion, the protagonist in that kind of novel is more like a machine than a person. Don't you feel uncomfortable taking on that role? When the war scenes are over, how many episodes can you remember?

In short, I'm trying my best to build a better and more reasonable story and character IQ and world framework.

Of course, I can't decide whether you approve of it or not, I can just say with confidence that I have been working hard and have never slackened off. (To be continued......)