In this article, I have a lot of ideas, I am studying in a hurry, maybe I can't learn well, but what I can contribute is attitude.

I am absolutely convinced that many of our readers are very professional people.

I hope that when I write about more 'hardcore' places in the future, readers who have been with me along the way will be able to give me corrections at any time.

I will not defend myself, I will study carefully, read the material repeatedly, and strive for more rigorous writing.

After all, I've always felt that writing was a profession and at least maintained a professionalism.

But more professional, I hope you will lend a helping hand.

When I came back from dinner today, I read everyone's opinions, and made adjustments and wording in the three places with the most comments.

References, I don't post the URL here, write the name directly, and everyone will search for it.

The Story of Cancer and Immunity

Additional changes in the text:

Original: But unfortunately, before he could get the results, he got a terrible fact, after moving the mitochondria, cancer was produced.

But unfortunately, before he got the results, he got a terrible fact, after moving the mitochondria, cancer was produced. Because its strength will cause cells to replicate indefinitely, and these cells will not play the role of normal cells, but will also break and erode normal cells, which are cancer cells.

Original: Thus the first true complex cell was formed, and the engulfed archaea became organelles, the chloroplasts in plants, the mitochondria in our cells.

Thus the first true complex cell was formed, and the engulfed archaea became organelles, the chloroplasts in plants, the mitochondria in our cells. Of course, plants also have mitochondria in their organelles.

This sentence is purely because my expression is not rigorous enough.

Reference: A description of Dr. Sun Yueli's account of human aging. Because it's someone else's question that is answered directly, there is no title.

I won't explain the specifics in this chapter, but the changes are as follows.

Original: Moreover, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your lifespan from your mitochondria. When the mitochondria are shorter, the closer the human life is to the end, and on the contrary, it is still a fresh life. I mean, of course, in the absence of lesions.

Changer: Moreover, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your lifespan from your mitochondria. When the mitochondria are weakened, the closer the human life is, and on the contrary, it is still a fresh life. I mean, of course, in the absence of lesions.

This is the most rigorous expression.

After that, according to the structure of "Dark Moon Era", it is inevitable that more 'hardcore' descriptions will be involved.

Online articles are a special kind of publication situation, which requires the timeliness of updates and the quantity of updates.

In the daily updates, I try to be rigorous.

Actually, I also want to take it easy, put aside all the distractions and slow down the writing of "Dark Moon", but I also have a lot of burdens, and I dare not slow down.

This, if you have professional knowledge in some knowledge points, please try to help me as much as possible, more rigorous.

This is my original intention that I can't give up, even if it's an online article? There are also so many readers who go to see it, and there are many students in between.

The text carries the Tao, perhaps not because I want to say a profound truth, but to ensure that what is written in the text does not convey a wrong message to everyone, a wrong three views.

Here, thank you, "Dark Moon" has accompanied me all the way.

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