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Today, I saw a reader's opinion, although the words are not very good, but they are really true, I began to think about the setting of the whole text from this aspect, and I felt that this book was too depressing.

What this reader disputed was the plot of Hua Xiangrong and Yun Xuan turning against each other, and I wrote this at the beginning because I wanted to shape Hua Xiangrong's mentality at that time was already unstable. She was taken away by Yun Xuan at that time, and there was a part of it that said that Hua Xiangrong blamed herself for all the faults, and cleared Du Qiu's death with Yun Xuan along with her own grievances, and planned to bear the consequences herself.

This reader refers to Hua Xiangrong's behavior as Our Lady, and I discussed this with a friend of mine, and she even said that she saw the guilt of the victim in it.

Looking at it here, Hua Xiangrong's character design is indeed a little collapsed, because in Hua Xiangrong's personality, she has always been a person who is resolute and resolute, has clear grievances, and will take revenge, which is also why in the end she blackened for revenge, and even became a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals.

But I wrote like this at the time, just to show the pain in Hua Xiangrong's heart, she believed that Yun Xuan was true, and she was sincere to Yun Xuan, she really regarded this person as a friend, but in the end, in exchange for betrayal, and killed Du Qiu, she didn't think Yun Xuan was innocent, but Du Qiu's death, she was responsible.

It was because she mistrusted Yun Xuan and was defenseless against Yun Xuan that she fell for Yun Xuan's drug. At that time, Du Qiu could have run, but he turned back. If Du Qiu didn't look back at that time, the dead person would have been Hua Xiangrong.

Du Qiu is the first person to pay for her mistakes, the person who killed Du Qiu must be Yun Xuan, and the wrong person must also be Yun Xuan, Hua Xiangrong's mentality at that time was unstable, I wrote this matter in order to be able to describe her mood.

Hua Xiangrong can clear her grievances with Yun Xuan, because Yun Xuan used to be kind to her when she was in the barracks, but with Du Qiu's death, she couldn't clear them up.

In that part, many readers may feel very angry when they look at it, thinking that it is too cheap to let Yun Xuan go like this, and Hua Xiangrong's performance is too cowardly.

But the reality is, that's all she can do.

Yun Xuan is a person who can't die, not only because she promoted the development of the main plot, but also because she is the only daughter of the chief general of Yan Kingdom, the future princess of Yan Kingdom, and her status is noble. Hua Xiangrong stopped Liu Zheng from avenging her, and said a word, not wanting him to set himself on fire.

Social hierarchy is inferior, that's it, according to social reality, Yunxuan was born with her own halo, all of which are beyond the reach of countless people.

Hua Xiangrong could indeed finish off Yun Xuan with one knife at that time, she could, but she wouldn't.

If she kills Yun Xuan, then she will not live in peace in her life, Yun Mian can hold a high position of power and power, and the means are naturally not comparable to ordinary people, Yan Guo will find someone who killed Yun Xuan no matter what, even if she hunts her down for the rest of her life, she must avenge Yun Xuan.

What does an only daughter mean, Yun Mian only has this one daughter, he can't let Hua Xiangrong go, his methods are more direct than Wu Yuesong, Hua Xiangrong doesn't kill Yun Xuan, not because of her mother, but because she is selfish.

I don't know if it's appropriate for me to say this, but my heroine is really not a perfect heroine, she is not kind and righteous to the point of desperation, she is selfish, and she is also smart, so she can be blackened.

She is unwilling to make enemies with forces like Yan Guo, and she is not willing to hide in Tibet for the rest of her life.

Du Qiu died, and she took this responsibility herself, not because the victim was guilty, nor because she was too cowardly, but because this was the best adjustment for everyone.

No one can kill Yun Xuan, just like I said earlier, her status is noble, and it is difficult for ordinary people to even get close, let alone assassinate.

Ancient society was such a reality, all people were in the confinement of this social hierarchy of power, the law of the jungle, and no one could escape.

No matter who takes revenge on this, whether Hua Xiangrong or Du Qiu's family, whether they can kill Yun Xuan or not, their ending will not be too good, and they will even live in peace for the rest of their lives.

Because of reality, they can't help it, Yun Xuan won't die. I think that if you want to kill people without leaving any traces, and you are not afraid of people seeking revenge, this kind of thing can only be done by the male protagonist Xiao Zi.

However, the male protagonist and Yun Xuan have no grievances, he is also a man who will never do anything harmful to himself, he doesn't even know who Yun Xuan is, how could he kill Yun Xuan?

I can spoil Yun Xuan's ending here, this villain, this villain, she actually didn't die until the end.

Of course, I won't let her have a good time, but if it's not good, it's not good, she's just alive.

You just want to ask, what about Du Qiu's death, did he die in vain?

He did die in vain.

Yun Xuan is carrying more than one life, Du Qiu is not the only one, she has killed many people, but she is still alive and well.

My heroine has the aura of a heroine, but she is not a surreal heroine, what I want to describe is reality, but until now, I find that it is too realistic.

Because ancient society was like this, the feudal hierarchy restricted everyone, and those who rebelled against society did not have good results, and Yuan Chang was the only one who succeeded in this book.

Hua Xiangrong is in the part where she and Yun Xuan turn against each other, and I really don't write well. This place is hard to write and really hard to write, and I wrote those two chapters for almost four hours.

But if this reader hadn't asked this question, I might not have thought of it so much, and her mood was just an escape, escaping from the fact that she didn't dare to kill Yun Xuan. When she discusses this matter with the male protagonist later, she will re-examine this matter, and her mentality of blaming all the faults on herself.

She couldn't blame herself for all the faults, but she couldn't just feel at ease that Du Qiu's death had nothing to do with herself, she also blamed herself and felt guilty, but she also didn't kill Yun Xuan to avenge Du Qiu.

Killing Yun Xuan will not make her feel at ease like this, her situation will not be better, it will only be more difficult.

So, it's very depressing.

Because I can't go beyond the reality of ancient society to solve this matter, my heroine is also a person who is imprisoned by society, and she sees interests too clearly, so she won't kill Yunxuan.

Let's go back to Du Yu's family, they are the people of Yan Kingdom, because of such a manslaughter, they have a grudge against the top forces of Yan Kingdom, should they take revenge or not? How to get revenge? If you take revenge, the whole family is finished, and maybe the ancestral grave will be dug up, if you don't take revenge......

There will be pain and remorse for a lifetime, because it is their loved ones who have died.

In this way, the plot is actually full of contradictions and unfairness.

It does not meet the needs of readers, so that the bad guys finally have a result, people like Yunxuan are still alive at the end, although they are not alive well, but they are indeed alive.

Not only Yun Xuan, but also another person, I don't know the identity, it's not good to spoil it. They are all people who have done bad things, they are all people who have pushed the heroine into a desperate situation, and they are all covered with blood on their hands, but they are all alive, it's just that they don't live well.

It's just that this person is different, he is seeking power to do great things, he is a success, and he has obtained everything by stepping on a mountain of corpses and a sea of blood.

They are all alive.

It's so depressing.

I myself now re-conceive these plots, re-examine these settings, I feel that this article is a bit dark, the whole text is full of scheming, conspiracy, people who don't deserve to die are dead, the kindest people don't have a good result, and those who deserve retribution live to the end.

The people around Hua Xiangrong are paying for her mistakes, leaving her one after another, and in the end she became nothing, and there was a sentence in the introduction, Hua Xiangrong asked for nothing in this life, which is a tragedy in itself.

But this plot has brought a bad reading experience to many people, including that reader, I have deleted the most uncomfortable plot, how to change it, I don't know, I also know how Hua Xiangrong should treat Yun Xuan at that time, but as my friend said, she didn't beat her, it was too cheap for her.

She should indeed be slapped in the face, but because the heroine's own mentality is unstable, she doesn't know what to do, and I don't know what to do either.

Because she was selfish, she hated her own selfishness just as much, because I was incompetent, and I hated my own incompetence just as much.

This is the first book I've written, and I can't make it perfect, but I don't want it to have any principled problems, and a character like Yun Xuan, who didn't die until the end, is too dark and depressing, and there are three views.

It's really dark, those who should be damned are not dead, and those who don't are gone.

I have mentioned him many times before I have been chasing this book, and readers who see this place must have an impression of him. I found out that she abandoned the text, probably when she wrote about Hua Yujiang's part.

She mentioned it to me once before, and she felt that Hua Yujiang's attitude and reaction to Hua Xiangrong did not conform to his character and setting. I accepted this suggestion, but I still haven't changed the plot about Hua Yujiang. Because of his attitude towards Hua Xiangrong, saying that it does not conform is not compliant, but saying that it is compliant, it seems to be compliant.

Hua Yujiang is still decisive, how he treated others before, he is still the same, but he thinks differently about Hua, because Hua Xiangrong has become an accident in his life.

You can say that the heroine's aura is strong, or it can be said that the plot needs, or it can be said that the author wants him to do this, and he can't help it, these can all become the reasons why Hua Yujiang wants to be special to Hua, but in my heart, he wants to be special to Hua, and when he was Weifeng, he became Hua Xiangrong's subordinate and defeated.

Araocao said that Hua Yujiang was special to the heroine, and let her go several times, which was too inconsistent with Hua Yujiang's personality. So later, maybe she abandoned the text when she saw Hua Yujiang go back to save Hua Xiangrong in the palace of King Qi. Because Arakusa is an old reader and has high requirements for logic. This plot part has violated Hua Yujiang's character and brought an uncomfortable reading experience.

Personally, I think that Hua Yujiang's character design has not collapsed, and I don't know what other readers think.

In addition, there is another thunder point in the book, which is about the emotional drama between the heroine and others.

I can clearly point out here that Hua Xiangrong only has emotional scenes with Xiao Zirang, and Rong Xi only has emotional scenes with Yuan Chang, these are two main lines, which are different.

Hua Yujiang likes the heroine, Chu Zheng also likes the heroine, and some people think that they all have emotional scenes with the heroine, which is too thunderous.

Or, the heroine's aura is too strong, how can these men like her, and the plot is too poisonous.

It seems that the heroine has not reached the point of being loved by everyone. Hua Yujiang's scenes are very few in the whole text, he only has a few key scenes, Chu Zheng and Hua Xiangrong met when they were children, Chu Zheng (that is, Liu Zheng) decided to protect this girl when he was a child, protect her, whether he can get a response or not.

Yuan Chang belongs to tolerance, and the emotional drama between Yuan Chang and the heroine is mainly in the tolerance line, and there is almost no flower desire to accommodate the line. Those who have seen it carefully know that Yuan Chang just wanted to use Hua Xiangrong to do things for himself at the beginning, and used means to recruit her. I saw Xiao Zirang later, so I gave up.

You can see that Yuan Chang was a little disappointed when he finally found out that Hua Xiangrong didn't come to see him off, but in fact, the loss at that time was not because he liked it, but to a large extent he just regretted the loss of a talent.

I'll drain the thunder in this place, if you can't get rid of it, you still think it's very thundery......

Then I can't help it, the plot is too poisonous, don't watch it......

I don't want to lose readers, I want to keep every reader, but if our fate is really over, then there is nothing I can do, I will be sad for a while, and I will enter a new battle.

I don't know if this chapter is considered demining, but I think that if it is demining, few readers will see it, if you see it, then I thank you, please accept my thanks, thank you for always accompanying me to the present.

Thank you Mu Box Mu, vote for me and give me a reward, thank you for being high, give me a subscription and give me a review, I have to go to see when I wake up every day, whether Mu Box Mu has voted for me, and whether I have a comment on the other side, if you find that you don't, you will be very disappointed.

Thank you Feng Qingyang, many people say that you are my gold master, and I want me to hug your thighs quickly, I don't know if I am hugging it now, I originally wanted to add a more chapter for you, but because I have been chasing dramas recently, I stayed up late......

Thank you wandering bears, be sure to take good care of your illness.

Thank you for the company of Hashang Chuyang and Ran Xun.

I've thanked a whole bunch of people, and I don't know if you guys realized what I was trying to say.

I want to take it off the shelves.

This book, "Yanrong", I want to take it off the shelves.

Because the plot setting is unreasonable, because of poison and thunder, because of depression.

I've been thinking about this all afternoon, I want to give an explanation to my readers, and I don't want to give up just like that, but it seems that I'm depressed myself.

The people in this book, except for Yuan Chang, don't seem to have a good result, and those who rebel against society are eventually imprisoned by society, because of social reality, because of the grievances of predecessors, it is not over after thirty years, and the tragedy of this life has long been over.

I thought I had found the idea that this book was trying to convey, but now that I think about it, it seems that I have nothing to bring you except for depression.

I can't make any changes to the plot and premise of the book, because I've been thinking about it for three years, and it's hard and hard to overturn my idea for three years.

You can also understand that I don't want to change it.

Since I can't make these plots reasonable and conform to the mainstream of society, all I can do is give it up.

I apologize to you for the poison in the previous plot, and I ask you to forgive a newcomer for not writing well, and making you pay for it but bringing a bad reading experience.

My friend said that I don't care so much about other people's opinions when I write my own, but if this opinion has no effect on the book, then I won't care.

But this comment made me find a big problem, so I can't ignore it. I love this book so much that I want to write it well,

I may be going to break my promise, I said before that I won't make you regret liking this book if you like it, but now, it looks like I'm really going to apologize to you.

If you have any comments or suggestions for me...... Let's just say it here, I will seriously answer and have references.

I didn't know how to make this chapter a free chapter, because I suddenly realized that the public chapter was missing, and my previous volume was gone......

Subscribe to the comments of this chapter.,I'll return the coins to you.,I don't want you to waste money like this.,This,I'm sorry too.。

This afternoon, my mood is quite low, I don't want to code words, please forgive me, just use this chapter to replace it......

I'm so sorry.