Belated shelf testimonials
It's been on the shelves for a day before giving a testimonial, which is a bit of an afterthought.
Counting sent a total of seven chapters yesterday.,In fact, there aren't many first orders.,The results are very average.。
Someone comforted me, saying that you are a transition chapter after the high tide and tide, which is normal. Some friends bluntly said that what I wrote recently was a bit wordy, and it dragged on a lot more than the first part.
I thought about it, and indeed, the plot is a little slower than before.
On the one hand, I want to make the layout bigger, the characters more delicate, and the setting more rigorous, and on the other hand, I want to have more passionate emotional descriptions.
In this way, the article gives people the feeling of being all-encompassing and the plot dragging. Well, since you don't like it, I'll get back on track in the future and make the main story a little faster.
Finally, thank you to the friends who have supported me in the past two days, and of course, those who have subscribed, I won't write anything too sensational, I just want to say, "Thank you." "I almost forgot about my editor-in-charge, Blu-ray Boss.
PS: There will be almost 10,000 words today, but wait for the evening, by the way, the heroine will appear in the next two days.