Entering a new volume, the feedback is not good, and after thinking about it, Yu also has some conclusions.

Yu strictly follows the outline, the main plot is not deviated, and the context is very clear, which is no problem in this regard.

The reason for this,

First, some readers don't like the plot of the different balls.

This book has more than three million words written, and it is basically what happened on Earth, but from this volume, the protagonist enters a different sphere and the environment changes.

Switching on the map and changing the environment caused some friends to not adapt. And the entry point of the plot is not very good, it should not start with the atmosphere of "flat push" in the three northern provinces, but should directly enter those powerful, untouched areas, enrich the alien species, the world at the same time, and lay out all the foreshadowing that should be.

With the upgrading of the quality of star skills, these are inevitable products, so when they see that Xiaopi is still ruined in the different ball, some book friends may have a sense of disparity in their hearts, and feel that the imaginary setback has not come, and the different ball should not be like this? Then again, the orb is indeed scary, but it also depends on who is coming......

Jiang Xiao is obviously the kind of person who is a scholar wherever he puts it, unlike the pseudo-scholar who ranked second in the class of the high school in the small county town, he is a scholar in the high school of the small county town, and he is also a scholar in the Imperial Capital University......

Second, perhaps because in the previous chapter, Yu concentrated on writing and improving star skills in a few days. Some readers don't like the chapters on upgrading the quality of star skills, after all, most of the qualitative changes of star skills are in the "platinum" and "diamond" qualities, and the quality of the candle moon is promoted, there is no qualitative change, only quantitative change.

That's a good thing to change, after all... Most of the star skills have already graduated~

Third, Yu has been trying to maintain the style, as much as possible to write relaxed and joyful, I thought that everyone should feel relaxed and happy to read, but some readers are not very satisfied.

The protagonist's skin should be no problem, and book friends just watched the little poisonous milk skin all the way, after all, this is the only "main line" of the book. If you don't want to read it, you will scold a few sentences, you will have left a long time ago, and Yu has long been used to it.

So, it should be the companion who has a problem.

The role of the blind girl is not likable, and it can be seen from the data of the refills on the page that it may be better if Jiang Xiao's teammates are replaced by Erwei or Xia Yan at this time.

This is how to write online articles, with real-time feedback from book friends and real-time improvement by authors. For the problems summarized above, the education association strives to correct it.

This book has written 3.65 million words so far, and the book has already entered the late stage, so it is impossible to "lose its temperament when it gets old", so it will pay more attention, tighten the strings, hold on, write the later stage, and strive to improve the quality of the article and close the end of the book on the basis of ensuring that the style remains unchanged.

In books, there are highs and lows, and there are excitement and dullness.

Belch... How to say it, Yuhui will adjust as soon as possible, thank you to the book friends who still don't give up in the trough period (scratch your head)

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So, three watches tomorrow? (￣.￣)