Chapter 211: First Submission (3)
Qin Ye took a deep breath: "Sure? ”
Gu Qing laughed, with an indescribable look of confidence: "Lord Qin, it's not me who boasts. Do you know how government reports are done? It was a word-for-word pick, and ambiguous words had to be replaced with beautiful synonyms. No matter how rigorous an academic paper is, it will never surpass the government's speech, right? ”
Qin Ye let out a long sigh of relief. The boulder fell in his heart, and then he rubbed his temples, and his thoughts began to fly.
There are generals under his command, and he is not panicked. He really felt the benefits at the moment. However, this is only a "text", and if Xindifu wants to rise in the forest of the world's underworld, it is not enough to write alone.
Only with a hard fist can you speak. In the case that all the famous generals of China have ascended to heaven with Jizo, the remnant soul of Oda Nobunaga, and the opportunity for the underworld to take off, he will never let it go!
In the next few days, Lin Han and Su Feng came to look for him, and they all saw the Do Not Disturb sign on the door. Except for the occasional appearance in the cafeteria in order not to arouse the suspicion of the school, Qin spent almost all of his nights in the underworld.
I have to say that Gu Qing is a real talent. The unit he was in was destined to have heard and written too many various reports, up to the national level, down to the county level, and in the past few days with Gu Qing, the other party broke up the entire paper again, listened to Qin Ye talk about his logical thinking, and then arranged it again.
Every paragraph, every sentence, will be added or deleted a little bit, but just a few words, but Qin Ye feels that this sentence tastes different.
How so...... If his previous papers were concatenated with non-academic terms, there are even some places where he doesn't know how to be rigorous, and uses the vernacular of direct facts. After the revision, I still see rigor, but more integrity and professionalism.
It's a kind of reading fluency and comfort, the words are still those words, but the experience is completely different. The whole article is sublimating at a speed that is visible to the naked eye, and Qin Ye is becoming more and more confident in the publication of the Cultivation Weekly.
Day after day, Qin Ye and Gu Qing went all out to tackle the fortifications, arguing many times...... When he finally typed the last sentence in the early hours of the fourth day, both of them let out a long sigh of relief.
"It's old...... it's old" Gu Qing rubbed his temples self-deprecatingly: "The three-thousand-word paper took five days, and it was definitely done in the previous two days." ”
Qin Ye didn't answer, but looked deeply at the paper in front of him, the central meaning had not changed, but now there were only three feelings after reading the whole article.
Rigorous, precise wording, and rigorous logic.
"Mr. Gu." He looked at Gu Qing deeply: "How sure do you think you are of this article?" ”
"As long as they're not blind, ten out of ten will be published!" Gu Qing replied categorically.
Qin Ye took a deep breath, clenched his fists lightly, and said in a low voice, "I mean...... Exclusive edition. ”
Gu Qing's eyes moved slightly, and he didn't answer directly: "Lord Qin, if you have a single version, the quality of this paper is absolutely enough." But the issue of the independent version involves too many aspects. ”
"You should know that all newspapers in China are for politics, I don't know what the political background of the cultivation weekly you are talking about, if there is a task from above, such as: this issue we want to distribute a certain theme and promote a certain point of view, and it is impossible for you to write a single edition."
"Furthermore, there are the editor-in-chief's likes and dislikes, and this is the reason why I have revised some of the sharper wording in your paper. Sharp wording can certainly resonate with some people. But it may also cause disgust among some people. If the editor who is reviewing the manuscript happens to be on the side of the disgust...... We don't have to bet on this risk, we just need to make sure that we can publish it. ”
"For four days, we've avoided all possibilities of being clicked, changed it to the point where it's comparable to a press release, and done so much," he said solemnly...... If political service is excluded, I believe that there is at least an eighty percent chance that this paper will meet the requirements of the original edition! ”
Qin Ye let out a long sigh of relief, took the paper and stood up: "Borrow your auspicious words, if it is feasible, then ...... At the end of June, I will show you the results of your efforts. ”
Turning the Yama seal, he soon appeared in the dormitory. He took a shower to make himself look refreshed and groomed. I printed the paper again, put it in my bag, and rushed to the professor's office without stopping.
Li Tao was the only one in the office, and after he knocked on the door and got a response, he immediately pushed open the door and walked in, and solemnly placed the information bag on the table: "Please Professor Tao axe." ”
It's strange, even if he gets Gu Qing's affirmation, he is still very nervous at the moment.
Perhaps, people are like that.
When the outcome of an event does not appear, no one can say that it is safe.
"Done?" Tao Ran was reading the newspaper and was taken aback when he heard this, he glanced at the mobile phone next to him in disbelief, and then looked at Qin Ye: "Twenty days? ”
Qin Ye nodded.
Tao Ran didn't take it immediately, but said meaningfully: "Xiao Qin, the birth of a paper is a water mill, and the cultivation weekly has a very high vision and a very good taste. Even if there are two principals, there are not many papers published on it. Twenty days to see ...... You...... Do you want to review it again? ”
Just twenty days.
Even college students' papers are not so fast! Not to mention pure academic papers that are piled up over time!
I'm so anxious...... He sighed secretly in his heart, he knew very well that the selected tutors of the First Repair University wanted to make achievements, especially a discerning tutor like Qin Ye, who could get the first place in the open class at the beginning of the semester, his opinion was definitely the foundation of a good paper!
However, the so-called good paper is short in a quarter. Twenty days? I'm afraid that after writing it, I didn't go into it and came to myself immediately, right?
"We've checked it many times." Qin Ye said sincerely: "We already feel that we can't change it, so we ask for your guidance." ”
Tao Ran didn't speak again, put on his glasses, and waved lightly, and the information bag floated into his hand.
It is useless to say more.
He was also young, so he knew very well that there were some things that he didn't know if he had done them to know that he was wrong, and once his thesis himself thought that it could not be modified, so he confidently submitted it to his supervisor, and as a result, he was criticized for blood. After calming down and scrutinizing word by word, I realized how many places I could clearly see, but I missed it because I was anxious.
The best persuasion is action, since Qin Ye insisted, he used action to tell these new mentors that knowledge really depends on time. I can't eat hot tofu in a hurry.
The room fell silent, and Tao Ran unfolded the thin paper, skipping the title directly, and read it carefully.
ClickClick...... It was as if the sound of the clock could be heard, however, just after five seconds, he softly "Huh? "Yes. Then, he raised his head and glanced at Qin Ye.
This glance was very complicated, so complicated that Qin Ye, an old man, couldn't taste it. It just feels inexplicable.
Hey? Why does this old man think so much of this official? Could it be that he was shocked by the beauty of the prosperous age of the official? If you don't speak, you have a attitude......
Tao Ran didn't speak, his face was like a stone carving, unchanged. From beginning to end, 3,000 words can be read in just ten minutes. And then......
He looked at it again.
This time, I looked more carefully than before, and after reading it, I cast an unclear look at it again. Only then did he knock on the table, and his voice was a little hoarse: "This paper...... What did you write? ”
Qin Ye nodded solemnly.
Tao Ran still didn't speak, but calmly raised his chin: "I'll think about it again, you go back first." ”
…… This old man is not authentic...... Qin Ye was extremely disgusted in his heart, what he hated the most was to go back and wait for the notice, do you know how much psychological shadow this will cause to the tutor?
However, there was no place to reason, and after several expectant eyes were ignored by Tao Ran, he could only sneak out of the door with his tail between his legs.
Boom...... Tao Ran sat on the chair and closed his eyes to rest, and the door closed softly. He just sat quietly, for ten seconds, for fifteen seconds...... Twenty seconds later, he suddenly opened his eyes, jumped up at an impermanent speed, and then rushed to the door, and immediately locked the door.
Then, like lightning, he rushed back, spread out the papers in front of him, and looked at them one by one for the third time!
"This ...... How is this possible! After another ten minutes, he put down his paper and pushed his reading glasses: "This, this is simply unscientific!" ”
"Oh...... By the way, we ourselves are the biggest unscientific ...... No! This is not a metaphysics! ”
His voice was even more hoarse than just now, and it wasn't at all that Taishan collapsed in front of him without being surprised, which was directly smashed stupid by the landslide. Recalling that he wanted to instruct Qin Ye on how to write a dissertation before, his old face was swollen and painful! This is the reason why he immediately drove Qin Ye away.
Are you kidding me?
This is like a tabula rasa number, and suddenly take out a handful of orange martial arts seconds and seconds of air, and recharge Xinyue 13, right?
This paper made him right?
With such a rigorous wording, tight structure, and rigorous logic, he couldn't write such a paper!
"Phew......" he pushed his glasses in disbelief, now that no one was watching anymore, he could let himself go, but ...... But what the hell is this Nima! Is this the day of the paper? You can't even fly!
He picked up a piece of paper tremblingly, flicked it gently, touched it like a baby, and his voice was fluttering: "Perfect! Preciseness! The wording is precise, and the arguments are in one go! Looking at this paper, it actually ...... Actually gave me a feeling of enjoyment? ”
"This is made by three novice mentors...... You're telling me it's a paper from three novice tutors? Even the reports of national, provincial and ministerial organs are nothing more than that! These three boys are hanging, right? ”
Tao Ran didn't know that this was really from the handwriting of a provincial and ministerial-level cadre.
Since it's all plug-ins, why should you be reasonable?
Suddenly, as if he remembered something, he grabbed his mobile phone and opened Momo, found an ID whose avatar was a fish, took several deep breaths, and took several deep breaths until the rosy on his face completely subsided, then his heart beat wildly, and his fingers typed calmly.
"Academician Yu, hello, I am Tao Ran, a professor in the Department of Practical Studies of First University, and your former student. He is also a professor in Qin Ye's department. I have a very interesting paper here, and I would like you to take a look at it. ”
That's it...... The relationship between Xiao Qinzi and Academician Yu seems to be good, such an old and spicy penmanship, such a concise choice of words and sentences, is it Academician Yu's handwriting?
In the academic world, most people are a younger brother in front of Academician Yu, and his current mood just wants to pounce and grab Academician Yu's thigh: Teacher! You look me in the eye and speak! Did you help my student cheat?
Euphemistic...... We want to be tactful...... This paper was sent over, and Academician Yu probably knew what it meant.
I can't praise my wit!