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There was a mess in my head, I didn't know how to write, and I inked hundreds of words in two hours.

The recent chapters should have collapsed, maybe the plot is dragging on, staying on a map for too long, I'm thinking about it better, reducing some unnecessary descriptions, simplifying the language, and combining the content I conceived into two chapters in one chapter. There will definitely be a lot of bugs in this way, but it is defined as a cool article, it should be based on cool, Lao Wang is going to four or five million, it seems that there are two million words at most. In fact, there are many details described, and you don't care about it(╥_╥).

The biggest failure of this book is that the pace is too slow, and one hundred and fifty chapters should actually be a novice village.

The first book, because of the bad results in the front, was subscribed to less than ten people on the shelves, and almost no one read it, after all, it was the first time, and I didn't want to give up, so I insisted on writing it.

Because there are no grades, I don't want to write long, the rhythm is flying fast, but I didn't expect it to become a slightly good cool article later, and it took off once.

The second book, with a little writing foundation, all want to add some detailed descriptions, the author's background is insufficient, and he can't grasp the essence of detailed descriptions, so it becomes a rhythm, and a large number of readers are lost.

As a result, it collapsed, resulting in no writing in the back, eunuchs.

The third book, that is, this one, was originally intended to write a book about military hegemony, not Gao Wu's personal strength.

The previous setting, the Holy Martial Realm, the nuclear weapon of the transcendent saint country, is the strongest in this book.

Therefore, the grandmaster is strong, and the description is very powerful, even the generals, national teachers and the like are set as supreme grandmasters, and the congenital powerhouses are all awesome.

After all, the personal strength is too strong, and the soldiers will be reduced to cannon fodder, turning into a duel between cultivators, and the battle for hegemony Wen Lao Wang himself thinks that it has lost its meaning.

Careful readers, you should have found a bug, I said earlier that Dongfang Long is very awesome and has killed a lot of supreme grandmasters.

In the end, he wrote that he didn't know how many Holy Martial Realms had died in his hands.

That's because the power setting suddenly became higher.

The idea of setting is only in this map (the map is drawn), the protagonist rises from Shaoyang City, eats away at the Jade Dragon Marquis step by step, and then sweeps through the countries one by one.

It is mainly a military war, and the military struggles ahead are described in as much detail as possible.

I also went to see the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the Great Qin Empire to feel the atmosphere of war.

However, because of this, the reader just can't stand it, and it feels very rhythmic, and there is no cool point.

Lao Wang was also desperate for a while and planned to give up the book.

In the end, after listening to some opinions, I began to speed up the pace, and the force became higher and higher, and finally the whole map that was originally set for the book was forced to become a novice village.

Writing like this, the situation really improved, there were more and more readers, and the subscriptions took off for a while.

Therefore, the problem that Lao Wang is facing now is that his thinking is completely in conflict with the previous setting.

I think about how to end this novice village.

Therefore, when I wrote that this map was coming to an end, it was a little difficult to write, which led to the delay in adding the promised additions.

Sometimes in order to update, I have to blindly open some copies to forcibly update, and I write the plot of one or two sheets, and I drag three or four chapters to write, which is really just for the update.

I'm going to revert to the previous premise and come up with a new way of thinking.

During this time, I said sorry, and Lao Wang tried his best to change his thinking.

It's much better to get to the next map, because everything is a new beginning, and there are no conflicts in setting and thinking.

If readers have any suggestions, you can leave a message, Lao Wang does not have the peerless talent of other people's writing, so he can only rely on accumulating experience little by little.