Closing remarks
I'm not really good at writing testimonials or anything like that, so I'll just say whatever comes to my mind.
There is no short story option, and I personally prefer short works, so it will probably not be very long to write later. This book is a short and medium-length work, and if you don't add testimonials, it may have just reached more than 390,000 points. So I don't think it's necessary to put it on the shelves.
But it's definitely not because it's short, and it's not finished, the ending is all with the development of the plot, and I'm more satisfied with the later chapters, because the previous foreshadowing is unraveled at the last moment, and the rhythm is fast and very cool.
This book has been written since November last year, and because I usually have less free time, it has been intermittent and dragged on for a long time.
In the process of writing, I experienced the winter in the north, so most of the scenes in the novel are winter scenes.
In fact, I prefer to write about rainy days, because the plots in the rain are more pathetic, so many of the last chapters are basically descriptions related to rain.
This book is a double space-time intersection, and I don't know what kind of writing this is, but I quite like to write it this way.
Because of the short story, or the lack of skills, the characters in the text don't feel particularly distinct, anyway, there are a lot of shortcomings, and I can only use this as an excuse for the first book written in my life.
There is a lot of foreshadowing in this book, and if the reader does not read it continuously, it is easy to forget some of the content in the front when you see the back.
There is absolutely no confusion in the logic of this book, and I am still relatively confident in this regard.
The foreshadowing of the early description is relatively long, and it takes some process to spread out the truth step by step, so there is almost nothing cool to talk about.
There are many dialogues in this book, and there are few descriptions of the physical appearance of the characters, but they still have some characteristics.
I don't really like to describe the appearance in detail, I prefer this kind of secret in my heart, to imagine the woman and him in the book, it is more fun.
In this book, Yuan Huaxing portrays a character who is a very simple, kind-hearted, and scheming high school student.
Of course, her simplicity is also related to the environment of that era, unlike now, primary school students have more eyes than her.
It is inevitable that she can be easily deceived by prisoners, after all, she has been targeted by bad people for thousands of years, and she can't escape, and how can she know that there is such a big conspiracy and unbelievable truth in the world.
Of course, the entry point for the bad guys to use her is also very accurate, the first time she likes someone, I think anyone knows that feeling, and it is not too much to be willing to pay everything, so it is inevitable that Prisoner B will use Chen Xiao to coerce him.
Chen Xiao, due to fate, her life has always been arranged in the hands of those who know the truth, and she can't help herself everywhere.
can be regarded as a tragic character who is delayed by truth and fate, as well as time periods.
If they hadn't met Yuanhuaxing, they wouldn't have had feelings for each other, maybe their fates might have been different, but their ending was only a matter of time.
As written in the Void Realm document, the Yang and Yin must stay together, which implies that they must be connected by this cause and effect, and why they must be together, in fact, there is a big conspiracy, if a new book is opened, it will be explained in that book.
So no matter what, the ending of the yin and yang people is almost doomed.
Some people say that they should communicate more with each other, but in fact, they can't really communicate.
One is on a secret mission, and the other is the object of surveillance on this mission.
And because of the feelings, and they are all the first loves in life, Chen Xiao worries too much, so it leads to a lot of mistakes, and it is destined to be such an ending.
Prisoner B, the fake Xu Junfang, a person who is too fanatical about immortality, this obsession has made him unable to distinguish what a conscience is.
It's because he's a person like him who doesn't even need family and friendship that he doesn't care about the fact that he becomes a monster.
As long as he can live forever, he will not hesitate, and it just so happens that this kind of person is smart but is mistaken by cleverness, reaps the consequences, and finally becomes an ordinary person.
His feelings for his senior brother Xu Junfang, readers can let them imagine, in fact, they can write about pure love.
Shi Yande, the person who bears the most secrets, the person closest to the truth, either exposes the truth or creates the truth.
He tried his best to control the situation and hide the truth, but he still couldn't do it thoroughly.
However, his reincarnation experience, after removing the drawbacks, is still quite interesting.
Yuanyou and Luo Baifan, someone gave them a group of cp, I think the group is okay, but the picture is a little unbearable to look at directly, hahaha.
Su Yi and Xu Tielai, this pair, are the two people who were tricked by fate.
Someone asked me why Xu Tielai used the Yin Stone for Su Yi in the end.
I'll explain it here.
The fake Xu Junfang is Prisoner B, he is in the room, he must have murderous intentions, and he wants to kill all the people who will interfere with the plan.
Xu Tielai knew that she and Su Yi would definitely not be able to escape, and she guessed that if Su Yi was arrested, then Prisoner B's plan would be exposed, and Yuanyou would also know that with Prisoner B's character, Yuanyou would definitely be killed.
The method of killing the Yin Worm is roughly to let the Shadow Worm be eaten by the Zombie, or to melt the Shadow Worm Stone into a Zombie.
But the big stiff will become a big stiff after eating the yin stiff, lu, at that time, only Yuanhuaxing could kill, so Xu Tielai guessed that Xu Junfang would definitely give her the Yin Jie stone, let her become a big stiff, eat the ordinary Su Yi, and kill the Yuan family members who had no magic weapons in the chamber.
The Beard Room has the effect of lowering spells, so Prisoner B thinks that Yuanyou is powerful, and he can't defeat the big beard in the Beard Room.
Xu Tielai herself is a yin person, she only has to turn Su Yi into a yin person, no matter who she eats first when she becomes a big zombie, she will eventually become a monster, so although they are all dead, it will also bring a lot of trouble to prisoner Yi.
Xu Tielai just doesn't want to be wiped out like this, she is actually a kind of revenge, she may have followed the prisoner B for a few years, but she didn't learn anything good, and she also half-used Su Yi.
Aunt Wan, who she is hinted at in the novel, she has an unusual relationship with Shi Yan, a confidant.
Yan Junji and Shijia also have their master Xue Heng.
These three people still revolve around the fate of the Yin people.
Xue Heng is the same as Shi Yanchu is a reincarnated Yin person, but he is not as lucky as Shi Yanchu who was reincarnated in the Yuan family and can melt into the blood of Yangyao, so his fate is more miserable, resulting in him slowly becoming a villain.
I don't know if he will be reincarnated again after his death, whether he will be the same as Prisoner B, or so unscrupulous, after all, he knows some secrets of the antidote.
Shijia is a very powerful and potential yin person, and he is very strong in the attainment of using talismans, but he is also a person who has been delayed by the temptation of immortality, but fortunately he has repented in the end, but whether he can go on the right path is also a suspense.
Finally, at the end of the finale, why did the unfamiliar name Gu Yu appear, this is a foreshadowing.
Of course, there are several foreshadowings in the text, all of which are related to the second book, provided that I have time to write it.
These characters have their own life trajectories, and the stories of these characters are a drop in the ocean in the big cloud map.
In this book, of course, the most reluctant are Yuan Huaxing and Chen Xiao.
I wrote the story logically, so I knew it would end like this.
Sometimes I think of them suddenly, and my heart will really become sour.
Over time, in the end, I couldn't bear to write.
The ending is not BE, it's in between.
You must know that whether it is fate or growth, if you are realistic, it is actually far more cruel than this ending.
Growth without a price is not real growth.
Although the monsters in this book are born of alienated human beings, the substances that cause them to mutate, in the description and some foreshadowing, have actually been hinted at, are not products on the earth.
This kind of extraterrestrial civilization may have descended on the earth long before human beings were born. (This is in line with the Cthulhu Mythos system)
He also took advantage of human beings' desire for immortality to create a lot of desires.
As for why they are using human beings and what purpose they want to achieve, who is fighting against this seemingly evil side, and is the party that resists restraint really helping human beings?
How can humans easily know these ancient secrets and conspiracies.
I'm sorry, it's a bit big.
Many of the horror stories in the article are adapted from what I have seen and heard in reality.
There is also a special note, feeding cats really can't be mixed with chicken liver steamed buns, between the time period written is in 1997, at that time our country's pet industry has not been very well developed, so you can't buy cat food.
Feeding cats and dogs should be fed scientifically, so that they are not easy to get sick.
Next, I'm going to share some of the songs I heard while writing certain chapters.
A lyric in Zhang Zihao's "Title" is especially suitable for Yuan Huaxing to give to the fake Xu Junfang.
"Make good use of innocent eyes and caring tones, so that I can't escape the cruelty of the ending."
In the chapters of camping exercises, I have been listening to Chen Li's "Emptiness".
Writing the story of Shi Yan's cliffs on rainy nights two thousand years ago, Prison B, and Xu Junfang, I listened to Ashin's "One Eye for Life".
When I was writing the final ending, Yuan Huaxing was imprisoned for a day, and I listened to it
Tian Fuzhen's "Everything" and Nazha's "The End of Time"
These songs can mobilize emotions and inspiration.
I won't be verbose, but of course I still hope that more people will see this story with their hearts.
Here, I would like to sincerely thank the book friends and people who read this book and reviewed the book, it is because of you that I have the motivation to finish it.
Spring and summer fruits are Xiaoman, my first reader, and it is all because of your breath that I did not die halfway.
The sister who made waves and people talked a lot, Mo Mengdong, thank you for your support all the way, I am really pleased to read the article seriously, and thank you for the reward.
Xiao Jiu of "The World Says I Love Chang'an", her text can make me have a weird smile on my face every time, everyone has the opportunity to take a look, not only funny.
Chen Qing Mengzhu of "Qizhong Building", his story contains many elements, especially the fight scenes are very exciting, but what I like to watch the most is Lin Xiao and Ye Wuxin.
"Killing Emperor Sword" is unambiguous, the characters in this book are very distinct, not procrastinating, and I can't help but look down.
"Emperor Shao's Cold Fairy Wife" Manquns, this book is a lot cool, the language is concise and to the point, the meaning expressed is very clear, and there is a gladiatorial arena in it, hehe!
What kind of koi fish is "The General's Army", the writing is very good, and those who like to watch the conspiracy can take a look.
"The Princess is Poisoned Again" is very Shushu, there is a chapter, the kelp soup I drank, I was about to vomit when I looked at it.
The nine-tailed fox in "Road to Chang'an" is also a cat, and his younger brother is a very hard-working person, and the 10,000-word update is really strong.
Iwaide would like to thank you very much for the above, after all, my posts here are all thanks to you.
and Yu Liangda, who can read my articles, and praise and encourage me in the group, which also gives me a lot of motivation.
There are also a few bigwigs who also know my article and give a little affirmation.
Lord Gardenia, Shen Ji, (old driver) killed Geren, Mo Hui, Gelu, idler Lao Jiu, Qingli Fengfeng, birds, Quanda, Dream Sorrow, Wuye Qingzuka, Xi Xiaonai, Ding Da, Hanmei Shocking Snow, I don't want to be invincible, Miao Shi Sanren, Qinghuan Emperor, don't laugh at me crazy, the dog who took the wrong medicine, and Sister Jiuqiu, she is very good, and the QQ chat is also good.
There are a lot of people (brain-burning), not a little bit of name, but it doesn't mean I don't remember you, thank you for checking in the circle from time to time, everyone is working hard for their dreams, but it's actually quite tiring in Zongheng.
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There are also some big guys who have already entered the East Factory (haha, let's take a seat by themselves.) )
In short, thank you for your attention.
Finally, I hope you will remember the original intention of writing and encourage you!
Every day is too busy, and I can't open new books after that, it all depends on the time.
It seems a bit perfunctory, so be it!
There will be a period later.