Chapter 640: The Dawn of Tsukasa City. Wrapping up the tidbits
(It's a bit verbose, most of them are complaints and feelings)
Ah, that's hard to say (drink a glass of water first).
It was supposed to be a good hand, but it ended up being played poorly.
The plot of "Dawn of Tsukasa Castle" will come to an end of "incompleteness" at this point.
Why is it mutilated?
Although the theater set has filled a lot of holes, there are still a large number of dark holes that have not been filled. There are too many of these pits, and I'm afraid it's hard to say a thousand more chapters.
(The original design was more than 1,000 chapters, and there were nine characters before and after who didn't have a chance to appear.) )
In the setting at the beginning, Fengyu was the male protagonist, but I don't know how, and when it was released, the male protagonist was replaced by Kaiye?
The original set world view is very large, and it tells this world view from the different perspectives of the 27 protagonists. But now it seems that the worldview that is truly independent in the sense of the word, no, it should be said that there are only a few plot views here?
The mountain foal is one; Dou Dong and Chen Zhan Lin are one; Qingtang Meteorite is one; Xie Shenghai is one; Miyato is a ...... And then, gone???
Ah, indeed, it's gone.
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There are a lot of characters, so I'll just pick a few important ones to talk about.
『Kaiye』
It turned out that I was thinking about 27 protagonists, but some of them didn't appear at the end (and didn't cut).
Kaiye originally thought that he was not the protagonist. It's just that he has more plots and experiences than others, and the emotions of the characters are richer, which is more obvious among the 27 people.
But now? There is no scum left in the collapse (wry smile).
As for the blood-colored demon warriors who have appeared many times in the plot, I believe that they have been hastily ended in the finale and explained that they have seen it, so they can only fill the hole like this.
Hiss...... There is no better idea (good sloppy).
Ah, but the hole has been filled, hooray! (Stuck in an endless loop...) )
Cut plot:
Breaking into the Hurricane Valley camp alone, he first took refuge in pretence, endured humiliation, and finally avenged his personal vendetta and fled in style.
On the way to escape, under some coincidence, he evolved the second-order blood groan form of the Scarlet Warframe.
Wait a minute......
『Yun Yanxi』
Yun Yanxi, originally called Chi Xi, and then directly changed its name to Yanxi in the later plot, and the surname "Yun" is not called much.
Anyway...... I'll admit, this character was completely blank in terms of the original design!
(To put it bluntly, there is no outline ~ cover your face)
Yanxi doesn't have any background and experience, and even the plot line is vague, and she writes it directly when she thinks of it. said that it was the heroine, but in fact, it was a failure to create.
Cut plot:
The original design of the Dawning Crystal is the strongest crystal, and it also has the opposite of light and darkness.
It is the final boss of the finale.
『Mountain Pony』
The plot line is also cut, and there is nothing left.
In the original plot, there was an explanation of why he wanted to grab the Eye of the Desert, and in the battle with Yao Lie and Yuxin, there were a lot of scenes.
Yao Lie had a second-order at that time, and Yuxin had already appeared, but none of them had been able to beat the second-order black gold form that Shanju had appeared at that time.
Not only did he destroy the sand scorpion organization, but the boss he actually killed behind was an unknown creature. Sand Sea Scorpion (based on the Sand Stone Fort boss after tomorrow, but the setting here is very powerful), not Yu Xin.
Confession: It collapsed at the beginning. 19th Floor Literature
『Morning Forest』
originally did not have his plot line, let alone the creation of his character.
Blue armor spar, blue armor spar, originally evolved from the blue assault armor that was on after tomorrow. At first, the transformation on the outline was called Jiuyou, but later I felt that the name was a bit strange, so I changed it to Chen Zhanlin.
The plot is only a few short chapters to explain, and it just wants the blue armored warriors to show their edge...... Whew, however, the plot is messed up.
『Doudong』
In the original design, the strongest transformer.
(A lot of tidbits have been said in the Doudong chapter, so let's talk about the cut plot here)
Cut plot:
Masterstroke:
The World Tree Organization sent security robots to Hill City to alleviate the xenomorph crisis. However, the security robot was later controlled by a different species and went berserk, and was finally solved by Dou Dong and Chen Zhanlin at the same time.
Wait a minute......
Diffusion:
The Origins of Hesl; Adel. Garrat and Rand left the camp at Mount Guming, first fighting Hesle. But then they ran away, and they had no choice but to continue chasing.
(This is the scene of the later suburban pursuit battle)
"Afterimage"
Why is there an afterimage here, instead of the Yuan Neng warrior Song Beibei?
So far, I feel that although I hope that the chapter of Snow Mountain is short, it is still one of the best plots created in all the chapters, but unfortunately it was temporarily interrupted.
Because at that time, the number of words reached 300,000, and I really couldn't write. At that time, I wanted to end it, after all, there was no achievement (the later Qingtang Meteorite chapter can be regarded as a rescue, and the plot feels like nothing wrong, and it can be regarded as a very successful success.) )。
Eh, it seems a little bit wrong, how about it?
Titicaca (coughing twice), Titicaca (continuing to cough), and the afterimage, which was originally the male protagonist of "Hope Snow Mountain".
The background of Song Beibei's character is very well shaped (off topic again), and the original design relied on her background to make the afterimage become a Yuan Neng warrior in the follow-up that was not written. Ice Warrior.
(Ice and Snow Crystal→ initially: Extremely cold and ice explosion form, which can be switched freely, but it is not shown in the plot, which is a pity.) )
Cut plot:
Ren Xiang was poisoned, Ren Xiang and the afterimage went to find the antidote;
Song Beibei woke up suddenly, was controlled by the subconscious, and almost strangled Wu Xiaoxuan to death, but fortunately, the two came back in time;
From the top of the Hope Snow Mountain, a huge experimental factory was discovered, and Xiaoqiang and Ah Qi met by chance, and several people cooperated to break into the interior to check;
There were Wehrmacht fighters inside, but they had become infected, and several of them were fighting hard;
There is a mysterious laboratory in the factory (which is difficult to explain here), a space that resembles a mirror world, and several people have no intention of breaking into;
……
Discovery of signal radiation towers.
Song Beibei fights against the entity "Dark Extreme Cold Warrior" (her own shadow);
Remnant and the others dismantle the signal tower while stopping the unknown creatures. the attack of the Death Wings (with sacrifice);
Due to the defeat of his dark side, Song Beibei was beaten and dismantled. The "Dark Extreme Cold Warrior" threw her off the cliff, and the afterimage desperately tried to save her (at that time, there was already a tacit understanding and straightforward feelings). But Song Beibei's form has gradually disappeared, and she will never exist in this world (died ten years ago). In the end, it was not Song Beibei's hand that was held, only the ice and snow spar remained.
Perhaps because of the emotion, the afterimage did not die at the moment of falling off the cliff, but relied on the ice and snow spar to directly evolve the strongest form - Era Frost.
(What happened later is naturally understood)
Q: Why bother with "Hope Snow Mountain"?
Answer: Ah...... It's a simple pity. But who cares! You tell me?