This is the end of the first story, do you have any opinions and opinions? Was the ending rushed?

For example, the location, the character introduction, the character of the protagonist, the construction of the world background (each country), etc., is there anything that you don't understand?

Because this story was written while looking at the map and looking up the characters, the article can't be put on the map, so I'm worried that what I write is unclear, which will affect the experience too much.

When I write an article, I will be overly immersed, and being too immersed in my own world will lead to narcissism, which will greatly affect the quality of the article, so, I hope you will not hesitate to teach Oh, the next story is written by Queen Guo in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, and the background construction has ("Romance of the Three Kingdoms" + "Luoshen" + "Classic of Mountains and Seas" + historical facts + a little personal imagination), this is a world with ghosts, monks, and ancient immortals...... Finally, do you have any advice for bringing children?

My little nephew is going to drive me crazy! It's been a few days since I changed the text, and when I sleep at night, the muscle memory is all about taking him o(╥_╥)o, help

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