I discussed with you before that the second copy originally scheduled would be a historical overhead imperial examination text, but the author wants to fine-tune it here, that is, postpone this historical overhead copy.

Why?

Because the results of the first copy are not good, to sum up, it should be a matter of style, Lao Bailiu causes the rhythm to be too slow, which contradicts the style of fast passage.

In addition, the selected copy is original, and the aura that the copy should have is missing.

The last book "I am a big man in the film and television world", there are 4500 collections before 110,000 words, and the real collection of this book is currently estimated to be about 2500.

If there is a problem, we will change it, the pace is too slow, we will speed up the pace.

The quality of this book is obviously better than the previous one, but the results are not as good as the rhythm and style.

So the choice of the second copy is important.

This is a fast-paced original copy of the prison break genre.

The background is borrowed from an old French movie "Papillon", with a Douban score of 8.7 points, an old movie 12 years ago, this is the most classic prison escape movie I have ever seen.

How classic is it?

In this way, I watched this movie 12 years ago, and now I still remember the plot in it, and it is the best in my personal prison escape or prison theme.

Because it is a foreign background, in order to strengthen the sense of substitution, I put the background in South Asia, the protagonists and supporting characters of the story are all from the Celestial Empire, and the rhythm will be very fast, probably written in 80,000 words (the first copy was written 120,000).

Although the background is the background of Papillon, the part of the magic change has reached 80%, and it can be regarded as an original new copy, as for the effect, I don't know the bottom of my heart, try it first, anyway, the results are so happy, and it won't be worse than now.

Only one prison or prison escape theme dungeon will be selected, and prison storms and the like can only be postponed indefinitely.

The approximate content of the original movie is: two people were caught serving their sentences on an island and sentenced to 10+ years, the island is far from the mainland, surrounded by a vast sea, and there are sharks in the sea.

The actor Kong Wu is powerful, unwilling to be lonely, and often takes care of the supporting actor who is bullied, the supporting actor is handsome and often bullied by his cellmates, but the family was quite rich before he came in.

The actor then lures the supporting actor into escaping from prison with him.

escaped from prison for the first time, was caught, the actor was whipped and exposed to the sun for three days, the supporting actor made money, and was extorted by the prison guards and was exempted from punishment.

Half a year later, the injury healed, and the actor escaped from prison for the second time, this time he acted alone, but found that he had no transportation at the beach, and he couldn't cross the sea, and he didn't dare to try shark beach, he was almost starved to death, was caught, and was locked up for 3 years, almost going crazy.

After the injury, the actor is covered with scars, his hair is gray, his body was dragged down during his confinement, and he is facing him with a lifetime imprisonment, he decided to escape from prison for the third time, and if he doesn't succeed, he will be directly executed by prison, this is his last chance.

Surprisingly, the supporting actor decided to follow him this time.

When the two arrived at the beach, they jumped directly into the shark beach, and finally were washed to the shore by the waves, and succeeded.

The content will be greatly modified, and the main line will remain the same, making the plot more compact and faster-paced.

The name of the second copy is "The Third Prison Break".

The reality part is probably over with a few chapters, and the outline of the script is everything, but the details need to be further improved.

At present, 120,000 words, the recommendation of the starting point has been broken, today there is a small recommendation of QQ Book City in the background, it is better than nothing, this book will be streaked until 200,000 words are on the shelves, this process will test the author's mentality very much, the results are destined to be bad after the shelves, I can't afford to eat, and I have to spend a lot of energy on this book, and I have to overcome the difficulties in life and insist on writing, and the process will be extremely painful.

Only you have given me the motivation to continue writing, which is no longer just for food, for grades, but also for a test of myself.

Let's see if the author, in this line, can clear the customs.

To put it mildly, I entered the online literature circle in February 2019, from budding to hitting the street, I have been cutting and opening new books, but I still can't see hope, but I really don't want to cut the book.

A pack of cheap cigarettes a day, a seven-yuan fried rice, and I have to do it.

Encourage together, those who work hard will always have gains.