The book friend comments blocked during the eleventh period were all released, and in the face of some sand sculpture book reviews, I laughed while watching, you successfully teased me out of bed, and I hurried up to write an extra chapter.

Ahem,I found a lot of old drivers who borrowed chapter reviews to drive.,The author Jun is very simple.,Although I don't understand what car you drive.,But I secretly learned a lot of knowledge points.。

Please call me next time you drive, I really want to learn.

Here I would like to focus on praising the old driver who commented on Chapter 60 and Chapter 7, the young man is very knowledgeable, like a profound scholar.

There is also a three-good student Pikachu who is rewarded with pocket money, don't steal your mother's mobile phone to reward was discovered, mixed doubles, understand.

Thank you for your comments and opinions.

I corrected all the typos pointed out by enthusiastic book friends, and read all the comments that were raised.

As for the fact that the first copy is too long, I actually know that it is impossible for the subsequent copies to exceed 80,000 words (the first copy is 120,000 words).

As for why I chose to write original copy, can I say I regret it now?

The previous book I wrote Xiaobailiu, an unoriginal copy, but hung up, so I wanted to try it, or change it, this book was written by the original copy of the old Bailiu, and the results were even worse, and I didn't even get a strong score, why do many enthusiastic peers say that I can have 1000 averages?

Are you sure you didn't look at me handsomely and deliberately fooled me?

The original copy is not hot, which directly leads to the poor data of this book, and the failure to test the water and push the promotion, I collected 110,000 words and 4500 in my last book, and this book is currently 150,000 words, and the real collection is estimated to be between 3-4000, one is worse than the other, what can I do, I have to grit my teeth and continue to write with tears in my eyes.

I forgot to say that the first copy is the original urban entertainment, and the second copy is the original prison escape, or the wilderness escape, and there is an original historical imperial examination essay in the back, plus an original Xianxia Xiuzhen text (this copy will burn a little), anyway, the results are like this, completely open your mind and let yourself fly.

In the first copy, Xiaobai and Jinsha's couple CP, I originally planned to write it carefully, write a little deeper, but when I saw a book friend saying that the first copy was too long and I wanted to abandon the pit, I was so scared that I trembled and almost lost half of my body, resulting in excretory dysfunction, so it ended hastily.

As for the last emotional scene between Xiaobai and Yang Qian, it was not handled well, because there are update tasks every day, and there is not so much time to dive in to ponder it, and the author Jun has not saved the manuscript, this is the point.

Anyway, there are not so many ifs、But。

Ahem, let me say it again, if I had to update 2,000 words a day, or have tens of thousands of words in the manuscript, I would handle a lot of details better.

Some flaws, everyone tolerate, poison points and typos, welcome to point out, if there is a mistake, change it, this is my attitude.

In addition, ask for recommendation votes, what do those book friends who comment positively, but don't vote think? Do you want to prostitute yourself for nothing after you put it on the shelf?

Let my data look better, and when 200,000 words are put on the shelf, can I find an editor to push it on the shelf? The data is too poor, I have the cheekiness to ask for it, and the editor won't give it.

The name of the people involves officialdom, I don't dare to write, I'm afraid of thunder, don't forget that there are several peers who are always staring at me, planning to kill me, thank you 4 crowdfunding for giving me 1,000 yuan 20,005 pure collection of a treasure package, I will pull you out from time to time to whip the corpse to show gratitude.

I haven't given up this copy of Prison Fengyun yet.,I've revised it a few times before.,The effect is not ideal.,People in the book friend group say it's not good-looking.,I can only put it first.,I'll continue to think about it.。

Who does the protagonist choose to possess the identity of the past? How many scenes does Ah Zheng and Brother Long have, will they steal the protagonist's scene? There are too few scenes, and it is not possible to write the excitement of these two protagonists, these are all problems.

I have a bold idea, I want the protagonist to directly possess the ghost, that is, the chief of the security section, the villain in the original book, and then get all the prison bosses together to have a family party, play mahjong and brag, by the way, pull a batch, knock a batch, let them obey and obey, those who follow me get rich, and those who don't follow me squat in a small black house, does this routine work?

I've written 20,000 words for this copy, and I was going to use it as the first copy, but the 20,000 words of the manuscript are all invalid.

Don't say much, I just hope that there are fewer trivial things in real life, so that I can finish this book with peace of mind, in fact, I really want to write the legend of the White Snake, I was moved to tears by the origin of the White Snake.

By the way, some peers praise my writing is good, come, praise me two sentences, rest assured to praise, after all, the strength is here, the old fight in the street, just ask if you are afraid?

Pee, sleep, make a wish before going to bed, I want 200 first orders, so that I can get 1000 yuan in manuscript fees a month, a lot of money, the first step to becoming a billionaire starts here.