Chapter 75: Letter from Home
"Girl! The five girls have sent a letter to their families! ”
Li Jiangwei and Qinshu listened to Li Yue's happy shout, and they couldn't help themselves with excitement.
"Give it to me!"
The letter was packed in a simple envelope with a red frame on a white background, and the red frame left the signature of her sister Li Jiangwei.
Li Jiangwei quickly scanned the contents of the letter, and her smile became more and more gentle.
"It's finally at the border of Chizhou."
Qin Shu said a little melancholy: "Chizhou is much colder than Kunzhou." ”
After the Gushan Mountains in Chizhou, even if you go to the north, the climate will be drier and colder. Li Jiangwei suddenly regretted that she didn't let her sister bring two more thick clothes.
The letter also mentions many interesting things. For example, I picked up a big white goose on the road, which was very beautiful and well-behaved. And in the teahouse along the edge of Chizhou, I heard many interesting stories, the most famous of which is the passage in "Xidan Swordsman".
Due to space limitations, Li Jiangyun did not tell Li Jiangwei the story completely. It is only mentioned that she used the name of one of the swordsmen in "Xidan Swordsman" as the name of the big white goose. Since then, the big white goose has a majestic name - Jianzang.
When Li Jiangwei read this, she burst out laughing.
Seeing that her sister was fine, she was relieved.
After reading the letter, Li Jiangwei put the letter away and found a small box with a lock to put it away. Then I packed up the outline of the novel of "Overseas Lost" and packed it into my bag.
Now Li Jiangwei is writing on orders, and Chu Yongyi volunteered to intercede with Wu Peiwen, hoping to reduce some homework as appropriate. However, his proposal was rejected indifferently by Wu Peiwen. Just one sentence: "How to achieve a good work without a foundation?" "Convince Chu Yongyi.
I had to finish my homework and write a manuscript again, and Li Jiangwei was busy all of a sudden. Fortunately, Wu Peiwen took care of Li Jiangwei's foundation, and the homework assigned was simple.
While Chu Yongqing and Zhou Songming were writing strategies, Li Jiangwei was completing the small poems arranged by Wu Peiwen. In addition to the scriptures and histories that the three of them read together in class, Wu Peiwen asked Li Jiangwei to read "Sound Rhythm Enlightenment" and "Ancient Literature Guanzhi" in private.
After another day of class, the three of them saluted Wu Peiwen.
Zhou Songming and Chu Yongqing left Wu Peiwen together to talk about homework and current affairs, while Li Jiangwei took her manuscript to the side courtyard.
The pen, ink, paper, and inkstone that have been prepared in the house, and Zheng Gonggong, who is next to Chu Yongyi, is also in the house.
"Your Highness will be here later, Miss Li will write first."
With such a stranger by her side, Li Jiangwei is very unaccustomed. She read the outline for a long time, but still didn't say a word.
Chu Yongyi was afraid of disturbing Li Jiangwei's writing, so she tiptoed into the house and quietly slipped to Li Jiangwei's side. Looking at the blank paper on the table, Yu Yongyi couldn't help frowning.
I had doubts, but I still didn't speak.
After another quarter of an hour, Li Jiangwei suddenly raised her head. Only then did she find Chu Yongyi's figure out of the corner of her eye, and she was so frightened that she got up and saluted.
"Got a problem again?"
Li Jiangwei nodded abruptly and whispered: "I didn't have this paragraph when I conceived the outline, but when the article is written here, I need to add this content......" She sighed again: "When I wrote this, I suddenly had no idea." ”
"If the story is written naturally, why don't you have an idea?"
Li Jiangwei thought about it carefully for a while, and after sorting out the messy thoughts in her mind for a while, she said, "I can see what they did when I close my eyes. But this plot is very sluggish when it comes to writing......"
Li Jiangwei was afraid that Chu Yongyi would not understand, so she continued: "I'm afraid that this paragraph is written abruptly, and the connection between the top and bottom is not good......"
"Is there an outline and a pretext?"
Li Jiangwei handed over the completed manuscript and the written outline.
Yu Yongyi discovers that there is a new character to appear in this section. He went back and read the above again, and there really was a need to arrange a character here.
When a new character appears, if you don't have a good personality, you will be so embarrassed that you can't put pen to paper.
"For the sake of the new character?" Yu Yongyi asked bluntly. His inquiry was answered with a nod from Li Jiangwei.
"I don't know how to write it. I feel that this person has other roles in the future, if the writing is too thin...... Not good......"
Looking at Li Jiangwei's frowning and thoughtful appearance, Yu Yongyi smiled lightly.
"I'll think for you, and you can tell me what you've already thought about."
The two discussed this plot back and forth, and Li Jiangwei, who was still a little vague about this plot, suddenly became clear. She smiled and thanked Yu Yongyi, swiped the ink, and continued to write.
Yu Yongyi smiled slightly, gently picked up the outline, and read it from beginning to end.
The outline is not well written, and there are quite a few empty spaces in each sentence. It's messy, but it's a lot of attention to the relationship between the top and bottom. Only then did Yu Yongyi know that many of the foreshadowings had been planted in the previous article, but he didn't realize it.
When the sun was setting in the west and the light in the room was weakening, Li Jiangwei stopped writing. After she moved her wrists and neck, she found that Yu Yongyi did not leave, but stood in front of the window and looked into the distance.
"Your Highness." Li Jiangwei called softly: "I will hand in the manuscript on time, don't be embarrassed to wait on the side." ”
"I've learned a lot today." Yu Yongyi looked calm and said: "If you hadn't read your outline, your intentions in the article wouldn't have even been discovered by me, who has read it two or three times." ”
Li Jiangwei smiled and asked, "Is this a compliment?" ”
"Yes."
"What's the point? I just want to make this story a good one. ”
Seeing that the light in the room was fading, I continued to write for fear of damaging my eyes. Yu Yongyi proposed: "Continue to go to the Zhuyin Pavilion with me today?" We still need to get the charter out as soon as possible. If you don't want to, I'll find another story. ”
"I thought about it later, and it was okay to adapt."
Yu Yongyi smiled and said, "Then you have to go with me to the Zhuyin Pavilion." ”
In order not to embarrass Li Jiangwei, two days ago, Yu Yongyi specially communicated with An Yuanbo's Mansion through Zhen Yongqing's way. Now that Li Jiangwei has returned late, the people in An Yuanbo's Mansion don't dare to say anything more.
Without the burden of her family, Li Jiangwei seemed much more easy-going when dining at the Zhuyin Restaurant than a few days ago.
"The book for storytelling, is Yi Gongzi planning to let me write it?"
"It's important that you're busy." The serious matter mentioned here refers to the follow-up manuscript, "The book used in storytelling, I plan to let Mr. Lao, a famous person in Beijing, write it." He has been reading for half his life, and he also knows how to read and write, so it must be very wonderful for him to write. ”
Li Jiangwei had never heard of this Mr. Lao, but Yu Yongyi admired him very much, so she was relieved.
"Can I take a look at the notebook after it's written?"
"That's what I was going to do. I also want to introduce Mr. Lao to you when the time comes, if you feel that the content of this book is lacking, you can go directly to Mr. Lao. ”