62 pieces of feedback
1. I have been writing for so long and I think there should be a feedback, so I asked the question.
2. I originally wanted to write a ...... Suspense, yes, suspense, the first half of the overall outline of the book is a flashback, little by little to discover the events of the Holy Night, until the end is all revealed.
3. But obviously this method is not suitable for online writing, so I changed it, and a lot of foreshadowing has to wait a long time, but it is in advance.
4. But I still like to write a strange sense of suspense and let everyone guess each other.
5. This is a very hellish phenomenon, I write very coolly, everyone reads it very confused, and thinks I am a fool.
6. Of course, some people say that they are pretentious, and the foreshadowing is too long.
7. It's hard to reconcile.
8. There is no way for people to compromise with the market, so I try to control it as much as possible.
9. The protagonist is not a traverser, this is for everyone to affirm, mainly, I think the worldview of this book is relatively rigorous, it is a closed circle, so the traverser will not appear in this particularly inconsistent setting, the protagonist is a real indigenous.
10. In fact, this worldview is more ...... than everyone thinks. Huge and complex.
11. There may be some sections of "correction", "literary youth" and "stinky objects".
12. In fact, many of the setting words are not just memes, it has its own role, but it has not been written yet, such as the name of the protagonist.
13. Actually, I don't want to write anything complicated, but I can't help it.
14. Because I have to read it several times when I write it, and when I send it out again, the whole person is already numb, and sometimes I can't find the wrong words, it's up to you, generally speaking, I will change it immediately.
15. If you can't change it, the chapter is locked.
16. I'll have to find an editor, but I added the editor and said a total of two sentences.
17. You may not believe it, but after the internal submission of this book was passed, my previous editor was transferred, and at that time, ...... I just feel confused.
18. People sometimes can't understand the speculation about the portion...... In fact, this is for this effect, because the drama in the next volume is for the roll call.
19. But it is clear that this way of writing is very rigid and goes against the mainstream.
20. But I just can't control these hands.
21. Here I am more envious of authors with a fan base.
22. Because it is an online serial, there is not much time for me to carve articles every day, not to mention that this book is mainly based on stories, so it is inevitable that there will be some chaotic rhythms.
23. In terms of setting, everyone also said that there are a lot of shadows of ACG works, but in fact, most of the settings of this book are out of the one in my stillborn womb, and after changing the modern setting to the magic wind, it has become like this, which is quite emotional.
24. Actually, I still want to write the book in the stillborn womb, and I avenge it.
25. Maybe I'll rewrite it next time.
26. I think the Legend of Sword Wind is a good thing, and everyone should check it out.
27. Actually, there are no Cthulhu elements in this book, to be precise, there are Cthulhu-like ...... Thriller style?
28. Isn't it fragrant to write something original about him?
29. The main feeling is that if you write this kind of preconceived setting, you feel that you are confined to the rules.
30. The points that everyone has doubts are actually explained, but it is not yet time to show them.
31. Actually, I have read book reviews, after all, there are logical loopholes in some articles that I will not be aware of, and it is all up to you.
32. Crowdfunding to write a book.
33. Some strange settings are not explained, in fact, there are special dramas in the later stage.
34. The main reason is that I think it's too stupid to list the settings in dozens of chapters.
35. To a certain extent, I think this kind of "mysterious, non-human, and stream-of-consciousness throughout" is more like Cthulhu's "indescribable" style.
36. After all, now that the ancient gods are all over the place, everyone knows that the weak ship is gone, and there is no indescribable feeling at all.
37. Of course there will be people who say, "What a harpy wrote, bad reviews." ”
38. I can't help it, I can't control these hands.
39. In fact, the origin of everything in this book is inspired by an SCP project.
40. It's not too much to downgrade the two or five boys who ran away from the Foundation.
41. The recent dramas feel a little dragged, mainly adding new dramas, and the insertion is a bit blunt.
42. Some people say that the stylistic gap between the first half and the second half of the book is a bit big at present.
43. It's mainly personal habits, I like that the beginning of the story is a fast-paced story, everything that can be shown is shown, and then the story is told slowly.
44. This book is not exactly steampunk, it is at the crossroads of an era, the end of steam, the rise of electricity, after all, Tesla is out.
45. It's no problem for you to understand this book as a history of the development of the Magic Transformation World Technology Tree.
46. On the other hand, this book is a science fiction story.
47. For example, change erosion to spokes?
48. It's just a fantasy, don't delve into it so much.
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50. At present, it is stable at about 4500.
51. In fact, the update of this book is mainly based on the rhythm of the play, for example, if the play is more important, it will end in a big chapter.
52. I can't split 4500 into two, it's so inhuman.
53. Plus more mainly watch the rhythm of the drama.
54. This is a cool article, a cool article written by myself.
55. Thank you here for your readers, although this book is still a street, at least it is fatter in the street.
56. To tell the truth, it's quite powerful, and the books of the same period as me are basically boiled to death.
57. Look up to the sky and laugh.
58. With a lot of support, maybe with everyone's efforts, I'll go to work on game dramas?
59. A game factory I really yearn for has recruited screenwriters, give it a chance.
60. Thank you again.
61. Knock knock.
62. By the way, the group number is 707415581.
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