Listen to my port
Brother Pao, I flew back to Sichuan on the morning of the 31st, and in order to keep everyone from waiting for the future, I uploaded all the manuscripts regularly.
I was busy with some things in my hometown, and I used my mobile phone to read everyone's comments during the break. I'm sorry, but I don't have a real name registration, so I can't interact with you in the comment area.
I can only talk to you about it in one article.
First of all, let's take a look at the "green" question that everyone reacted to the most, which many people think is very poisonous.
Let me first state that my book is a multi-heroine, but it is definitely not a stallion text. Like those previous plane flows, a few women are accepted when wearing a plane, the female supporting role of the Dragon Babu is also accepted, the female supporting role of relying on the dragon slayer is also accepted, and the female protagonist in "Transformers" is also accepted, and all of them are brought to the real world.
I just want to complain, isn't the protagonist afraid of these women fighting? Just a "who to sleep with at night" is a big question, doesn't the protagonist sleep at night? Or is he a tentacle monster with 8 JJs!?
The most dangerous thing is the identity of those characters in the plot.
If I bring Su Youpeng's version of Zhao Min to reality, won't she doubt her identity when she sees Jia Jingwen's advertisements and the like?
and I arranged "Master" and "Creation of Kanto" later, do the "Shi Niang" and "Xian'er" in it have to be brought to reality? Aren't they afraid that they will have identity problems after seeing Song Jia? What I wrote was an engineer's crossing, not the story of Li Lixiong, the young master of the Yin'an Group!!
The tea soup girl in "Master", if she saw Medina, what kind of scene would she have?
One or two are okay, and suddenly there are ten or eight more plot characters, exactly the same as real stars, how much turmoil will there be in the modern era when there are cameras everywhere and everyone is a photographer?!
After the turmoil, do you have to deal with the authorities?
As soon as you write like this, you will be involved in politics, and this book may have to be 404...
In my opinion, the best way to do this is to have a stand-in in place of yourself and leave on your own. Anyway, I didn't think about coming back...
This idea came from a previous book of iron and blood, the protagonist went to primitive society, but was worried about the modern family, so the alien cloned himself, and let the clone take on the family responsibilities for the protagonist in modern times...
There will be a reversal in the back of me, and many people still scold.
There will be a special reward for the protagonist to cross the 12 planes arranged for the protagonist after the end of "Sadness Flows into a River", which is an ambush, and only one person understands it...
I'm not afraid of spoilers, so I'll explain it to you. I plan to let the actor who plays the heroine have more memories of the protagonist after crossing over, and then fall in love with the male protagonist, just like in "Infinite Starts with Dragon Knight".
That is, let Zhang Ruonan have some more memories of Gu Senxiang, and then go to Rongcheng to find Qiao Guoqiang, and then Qiao Guoqiang started business in order to be worthy of this celebrity girlfriend.
In this way, you can open a real-world branch.
Since so many people are not satisfied, then I will change it, it just so happens that the editor and I can't write stars, and my later thoughts will probably have to be changed. Let's just change it now.
Who made you Party A, you are Dad!
Some people also think that the "poison point" is that the protagonist is a big guy in the movie, and he is a part-time worker in the real world, and he is indignant about this.
In fact, this is very easy to explain, you only see people as big guys, but you don't see how busy people are!
When you're the boss, you don't have time off.
The protagonist is a boss in the film and television world, which does not mean that he likes to be a rout, but more to complete the task...
When the guy "Shark Zen Master" was live, there were generally three ways for writers to write about the protagonist: "write about yourself", "write about the person you want to be", and "write about the person that others have written"
I chose to write about myself. My own character is a little adventurous in the wealth that is, this kind of thing,
Anyway, you've been reading the book for at least a few years, right?
That kind of dragon arrogant Ye Liangchen who kills the whole family at every turn is not tired of it? The kind of thing of being looked down upon for buying a house, buying a car, or buying clothes, and then throwing money in the face, and then sleeping with other salesmen?
Each author has something they are good at and what they are not good at.
Old snake, I can't write about doctors, I can't write about the entertainment industry, I can't write about sports, and I can't write about the second dimension.
I can write about history, geography, military affairs, and things related to feng shui, engineering, and navigation.
I'm also not very good at writing emotional dramas.
To be honest, "Sadness Flows Into a River" is already the best emotional drama I have ever written.
If you think it's good-looking, reward the two sons, and make the old snake happy. If you don't think it's good-looking, you can criticize it or give some suggestions.
As for the "October Siege", the Republic of China is a pit and cannot be involved.
That's it...
Old snake me, sometimes a little paranoid or obsessive-compulsive. In "Tang Detective 2", when I wrote 3 chapters on calculating the deflection force, I spent all my time on calculations.
In my opinion, in addition to updating the online article on time, an online writer should also check the information carefully. At least there should be no such low-level mistakes as "the Anglo-French army defeated the Qing army with a Mauser gun and then burned the Summer Palace" or "the Desert Eagle is the standard pistol of the Israeli army".
I really like to read people's comments, and many times I get a kind of satisfaction from being recognized
At the same time, I also ask everyone to comment as much as possible when commenting.
Another book of mine has a very interesting review, where the hero and heroine call each other "honey", which means "baby", "sweetheart" and "darling" in English.
Then someone commented on me: "Ha Ri Ha Han dog! ”
Hehe~
Finally, let's talk about the old snake.
There will be some content in Chapter 17 of "Earth Heroes", which is a bit intersecting with my emotional experience, which was mentioned earlier in the world of "Sadness".
Then, I do have a cousin who flies on land airlines.
I did do the cost and inspection work, but it was only a few years ago.
The cases I wrote about in the book were all fictitious on the basis of reality...
Because of the cost work, I was too impressed, so I may have the protagonist in the future who is the cost officer, haha.
Also, thanks to a few readers for their advice on Japanese. I learned Japanese more than ten years ago, and I learned Russian nine years ago, and now I have almost forgotten it.
As for Uyghur, I learned some when I was a police officer, but I threw it away. Right now, I'll say a few words about the "barbarian saxock (I'm a policeman)" used by the police
The translation of a few sentences in the book was done with the help of my sister.
That's all, the old snake flew to Urumqi at night on the 6th, and began to update and revise the book on the 7th.