Recently, more than one friend has reported that they can't understand it, and I have read my book several times today and found a problem.

There are too many dialogues, the plot advances slowly, and the things I want to express are not well expressed for various reasons (including the relationship between my level and some of my water words), but it makes the content seem cumbersome and boring.

......

I don't want that, I don't want my book to become boring and make people lose the desire to read.

So I decided to spend a few days reorganizing my thinking, now that I know my shortcomings, I can't make such mistakes again.

I believe that people make progress in correcting their own shortcomings again and again, come on!

I hope you will continue to give me comments in the future, thank you.

(Two chapters are currently owed.) ）

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