Thank you very much for reading the book I wrote, although I know not many people, but it doesn't matter, it's just the first novel, I wrote it not only to exercise my writing ability, but also to share some of my brains with you.

I believe that I will write better and better, and if there is something that is not logical, you must tell me, so that I can improve, Mo Mo Da~

I recently summarized a few bad points that I wrote:

1: The use of the first person makes it difficult for readers to have a sense of immersion due to their lack of writing skills.

2: The writing is not concise enough, and I always want to write in detail but I am afraid of spreading out the foreshadowing, which leads to a lot of water.

3: The character structure is not handled well, and the people who should be brilliant are not written, and it feels not vivid.

4：。。 Can't think of it.

But I will continue to work hard, and this article is definitely not pitiful, and it will definitely be written.

And the most important thing is:I'm not going to be able to do it today.,Update normally tomorrow.,Although I'm on vacation today.,But I've been working at home.,There's a party in a while.,I don't know what time I get home.。。

I don't have a few collections.,I hope I don't drop the collection.,Love you.,Mo Mo Mo ~

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