After returning home, Tang Mingyao took the magazine in his hand and looked at it in detail.

The revised version of "Martial Arts Story", both in terms of overall design and paper quality, is a grade higher than "Hot Wind".

The 32-page magazine is half as small as the original, but much thicker, and now has about 150 pages.

Holding it in his hand, it gives people the feeling that it is no longer the original indecent periodical, but has a solid sense of heaviness, which is a bit similar to the martial arts version of "Ancient Legends" that Tang Mingyao came into contact with in his previous life.

He shook it and said, "That's right, it's like a serious magazine, the previous one was simply a copycat version of Hong Kong Island Dog Weekly." ”

Not surprisingly, the revised "Martial Arts Story" is going to be popular.

Looks alone speak for themselves.

After reading the whole, let's look at the content.

On the cover, the font size is unequal and irregularly distributed with the names of four martial arts novels, "Rainy Night Flowers", "Acacia Introduction", "Whose Jade Flute Secretly Flies", "Helan Baixue", ...... It's all a little green-looking name.

This is popular in this era.

Only Tang Mingyao's novel "Martial Arts Supreme", the name looks simple and domineering.

The four words occupy almost one-fifth of the area on the cover, and they almost steal the limelight more than the words "martial arts story".

Under the name, there is also a subtitle - the new masterpiece of the train king, subverting your martial arts world!

There are four more inconspicuous small words on the side: long serialization.

Proper first push position.

Flipping through the cover, I read it in the table of contents, three short stories, two novellas, and one long serial.

After reading other novels roughly, although there are already shadows of new-school martial arts, the traces of old-school martial arts are still very heavy, at least in his eyes, there is nothing new.

Of course, the writing is very good, and the plot settings of the two stories are also very meticulous, and the works above the level are not as innovative as Tang Mingyao may not be able to beat these people.

After all, he has only been practicing pen for less than a year, and although the progress is still quite large, it is difficult to say that he can fight over the accumulation of others for several years or decades.

Turn to your own novel.

You only need to look at a few rows of text, and you will find that compared with the previous novels, the whole style is different.

At the beginning, Lin Feng, the protagonist who has practiced martial arts for many years but has achieved nothing, is fishing by the river, and suddenly receives a notice from a little girl from a neighbor's house that his adoptive father was injured at the entrance of the village, and he is dying, and he can't survive.

The protagonist hurried to the entrance of the village, and on the way was stopped by the son of the village tyrant, a tall and strong young man, humiliated, and was framed for stealing five taels of silver. The tall and strong young man threatened that he would not pay today, and he would go to his house early tomorrow morning to collect debts.

The protagonist came to the entrance of the village with a heavy heart, and saw his adoptive father for the last time, and the adoptive father pulled out a ring from the wound on his back and gave it to him, saying: "This ring originally belonged to him Lin Feng, when he adopted him, he was greedy and took it, and now it is returned to its original owner." ”

The adoptive father also warned Lin Feng that this ring was likely to involve a big secret, which had caused a bloody storm in the rivers and lakes, and must not be let anyone know.

After saying that, the adoptive father died of anger.

Lin Feng disposed of the body with his wounds, and found another letter of war on his adoptive father: I want to take revenge, and three years later, I will come to the highest peak of the county to fight!

His flame of vengeance was stirred up.

After burying his adoptive father that night, Lin Feng studied the ring at home, and was suddenly empowered by the true qi gushing out of the ring, from a beginner in martial arts, he entered the door overnight and became a little master in the village.

Early the next morning, a tall and strong boy came to collect his debts.

After a verbal cannon, Tang Mingyao wrote the first classic face-slapping plot in the book.

The tall and strong boy made a move.

Onlookers: The protagonist is definitely going to die now.

The protagonist takes it easily.

Tall young man: You actually took it, and let you see my trick again.

Onlookers: Nani, the protagonist is next, but he will die in the next move!

The protagonist takes it again with ease.

Tall and strong boy: I underestimated you, and even forced me to use a trick, and you are proud enough.

Passerby: I didn't expect the protagonist to force out the villain's trick, which is amazing.

Protagonist: You've hit me so many times, and it's been me.

Boom, the two collided head-on.

Tall boy, lose!

Passers-by were shocked again.

The tall boy cried and said that he wanted to go home to find his father.

Well, the father of the tall and strong boy is the most powerful master in the village, a warrior who has encountered bottlenecks for many years in the early days of the day after tomorrow, and has been rampant in the village for many years, bullying other villagers, and the tigers in the mountains and the crocodiles in the water, collectively known as the three evils in the village.

According to the strength of the protagonist Lin Feng at this time, it is still a little worse than that village tyrant, and if he is found, the protagonist will definitely lose.

So the protagonist turned out some of the prescriptions that his adoptive father left at home, went up the mountain to fight tigers, collected tiger bones, tiger gall, and tiger whips, and boiled tonic to strengthen muscles and bones.

On the mountain, he encounters a woman in distress (the kind whose hidden identity is a peerless master, but now she has lost all her martial arts), and the protagonist kindly rescues her and heals her in the mountain, and has a slightly ambiguous (harmonious) plot with her.

Well, the plot in the mountains is probably more than 10,000 words, and the twists and turns will not be detailed.

In short, the protagonist not only formed a good relationship with an important female character in the future, but also improved his martial arts, and also got additional battle cards.

By the time the protagonist came out of the mountain, his cultivation was completely different from the past, and he decided to take the initiative to come to the door to solve the village tyrant.

But as soon as he entered the village, he felt a strange atmosphere in the village, and the villagers looked at him with sympathy.

He hurried home and found that his house had been burned, and a big yellow dog that had been left to guard the door had been dead for a long time, and his body was on the edge of the rubble, and it had already stinked.

It turned out that the village tyrant heard that his son was beaten, and he was so angry that he wanted to come to the door to trouble the protagonist, but the protagonist was not at home and disappeared for many days, so the village tyrant vented his anger on his house and dog.

Lin Feng killed the village tyrant's house in a rage, and in a round of taunts, mouth cannons, hands, suppression, temporary explosions, and defeats into victories, he beat the village tyrant to half of his body, and he couldn't take care of himself from then on.

However, the village tyrant does not admit defeat, pointing to the protagonist and saying: His fellow brother will come to the village in three days, originally to hunt tigers, but now that the tiger has been killed by the protagonist, they will definitely not give up. And their sect is the most united, for the sake of a country junior, they can also kill the whole family, and they will definitely avenge him!

This issue of serialization came to an abrupt end.

The details of martial arts training and battles in the plot occupy a lot of space, so by now, more than 50,000 words have been written in the full text.

Tang Mingyao finished reading it himself, thinking that I am still quite capable of water, more than 50,000 words, in other novellas, I can already write a complete story, and in my own place, it is only the beginning.

But the plot is still quite burning, and it successfully mobilizes the atmosphere, and even I am excited to see it, especially when the protagonist comes back from the mountains and finds that his home has been destroyed, the dog has been killed, and the part that hits the village tyrant's house is the small high (harmony) tide of the whole text.

He put down the magazine, and suddenly felt the urge to go online.

"What kind of comments will you have on the Internet about my novel?"