Jin Wei's family conditions are not very good, and he doesn't seem to be surfing the Internet often, so Tang Mingyao wants to reply to some reading opinions, but it is still very troublesome.

He took out the letter and wrote:

I've finished reading the novel, this beginning is great, don't worry about submitting it, you will definitely be able to win! As a reader, I think these flaws, if you can improve them, it will read more smoothly.

First, the system of force is not clear enough. Before the protagonist's first breakthrough, the early force system should be introduced clearly, because when I read the book and saw this, although I knew that the protagonist had improved, but how much he had improved, there was no clear standard, and it was confusing to read......

The second point is that the senior sister is not very likable. Her personality is too gentle, and even a little cowardly, which is not in line with the temperament of the royal sister. A gentle to cowardly elder sister who is not charismatic enough......

Point 3......

made six or seven small suggestions, and from a reader's point of view, Tang Mingyao pointed out the places that he thought were flawed one by one.

After all, if others ask for advice so sincerely, he can't be perfunctory.

After writing, I sent it back to Jin Wei along with the manuscript.

Because the manuscript was handwritten, Jin Wei did not send a photocopy, this should be his only original manuscript, and if he didn't send it back, Jin Wei didn't even have a target for revision.

In other words, this kid is really simple enough, and he is not afraid that Tang Mingyao is greedy for the beginning of his novel.

The manuscript was sent by Luo Wenxi with him, this girl made a fuss, was pressed back by her mother, and now it is back to normal, and at noon is the same as before, waiting for him at the school gate to have lunch together.

During the meal, Tang Mingyao asked, "How are you feeling these two days?" Is reading better than before? ”

Luo Wenxi shook his head: "It makes no difference." Anyway, I'll just learn like this, it's not good or bad, let's read until I graduate from junior high school. Maybe when I'll open my mind and catch up with you all of a sudden? ”

Tang Mingyao shook his head, knowing that this girl's heart knot had not yet been untied.

She stubbornly has a belief in her heart, that is, she must catch up with him, and if she can't catch up, she feels like she is going to die.

This made Tang Mingyao curious, why is this happening?

He said: "I found that your father and your mother, the two of them have very different earning powers, your father earns much more money than your mother, your mother enjoys all day long, she is not embarrassed at all, and she does not shout every day to catch up with your father." But when you come to you, why do you have to catch up with me? Your fear of being abandoned is a bit deep-rooted, was it that you were abandoned when you were a child, and there is a psychological shadow? ”

Luo Wenxi said: "I don't know, maybe my mother has to tell me everything very clearly, which makes me feel that I am superfluous at home." ”

"Is there any other reason?"

Luo Wenxi shook his head: "No." ”

Unable to ask anything, he couldn't continue the discussion, so Tang Mingyao stopped talking about this topic.

When they parted after eating, Luo Wenxi suddenly said mysteriously: "In two days, the school will have a literary and artistic performance, and our class will organize a show, and I will go to you when the time comes." ”

Tang Mingyao said: "What are you looking for me for? This kind of theatrical performance is all performed in the playground, isn't there a performance stage on the side of the football field? I'll go see it and cheer you on when the time comes. ”

"Anyway, I just want to go to you, if you don't agree, forget if you don't agree."

Tang Mingyao thought about it, it seems that there is nothing that he can't agree with, he is now the school's sweetheart, and the principal has to provide for it, and he meets his girlfriend at school, even if he is discovered by Lao Guo, there will be no problem.

So he nodded in agreement.

Two days later, it was the day of the art show.

Tang Mingyao was in the classroom for the last class, and after the class, he was ready to move his chair to the playground to participate in the opening of the art show.

Suddenly, he heard a commotion from the students in the front row of the classroom, and even the teacher was interrupted from speaking.

"What's the matter?"

"There's a beautiful girl from outside the classroom, I've never seen it before."

"How beautiful can it be? Wonder is the daughter of ignorance. ”

"You can see it at a glance."

Tang Mingyao sat in his seat and heard the whispers of his classmates in front of him.

He remembered what his girlfriend told him two days ago that he was going to come to the classroom to find him, and thought to himself that the beautiful girl outside the door would not be Luo Wenxi, right?

Although the girl is very beautiful, she didn't cause a commotion wherever she went before, at most others took a few more looks, did these classmates in the class take the wrong medicine?

Or maybe it's not Rowan Creek outside, but some other, more beautiful girl?

I turned my head and looked out the window, but the location was not good, and I couldn't see it.

I am a little impetuous, and I want to see if the people outside are my girlfriends.

The commotion in the classroom was getting bigger and bigger, and the teacher couldn't continue the class, so he suspended the lecture, opened the classroom door and said to the people outside: "Classmate, are you looking for someone?" ”

"Yes. Teacher, you can go to class first, I'll just wait for you to get out of class. ”

"Could you please go to the other side of the hallway? You're standing here, influencing our class. ”

The girl's voice replied crisply, "Okay." ”

When Tang Mingyao heard this voice, he knew that it was indeed Luo Wenxi outside.

I was thinking that she would obediently wait in the corridor, but who knew that half of the figure suddenly poked into the door of the classroom, wearing a princess dress in a costume, with stage makeup on her face, and her hair also styled, dressed like a princess in a fairy tale, which was much more exaggerated than the first time she appeared at the door of the experimental class last year.

This......

No wonder.

Walking around in a performance costume on stage, you will definitely be watched.

This girl must have done it on purpose.

I saw Luo Wenxi flash at the door of the classroom, show his face in front of the whole class, and soon disappeared.

Tang Mingyao glanced at it and felt quite amazed.

As for the rest of the class, not to mention, one by one, as if they had taken stimulants, the discussion buzzed and filled the entire classroom, and it was impossible to suppress it at all.

The teacher lifted a stone to shoot himself in the foot, and in a fit of anger, he shouted loudly: "Quiet! ”

shouted a few times, and finally barely suppressed it, but the excitement on the faces of the students was overflowing, and whoever came to see it knew that it was unrealistic to continue the class in this state, so the teacher simply stopped lecturing and said directly: "Self-study." ”

Sit on the podium and do your own thing.

The audience turned a deaf ear to each other, and he turned a deaf ear.

Tang Mingyao couldn't sit still, went on stage and asked the teacher for a leave, and when he went out, he saw Luo Wenxi holding his skirt and standing far away in the corridor, slim.

There was wind in the corridor, which blew her hair lightly, and in an instant she was like a goddess descending to earth.

Tang Mingyao walked up to her, looked at her carefully, and said, "You said you wanted to come to see me, and you were dressed like this." ”

"yes, isn't it pretty?"

"Pretty, but a little too exaggerated."

"I'm going to participate in a performance soon, if I don't put on makeup and change clothes in advance, it will be too late later." Luo Wenxi raised his chin, "But I came to you, actually, on purpose." I'm going to let the people in your class know that you have a particularly beautiful girlfriend. So if a girl wants to write you a love letter, when they think of me, they will be so inferior that they dare not chase you. ”