When Tang Mingyao came the next day, Jiangnan had already arrived.

This serious brother graduated from the Department of Chemistry of Peking University and is now studying for a doctorate in the United States, and writing is probably just a small hobby outside his serious career.

I have to say that the opportunities in life are really peculiar.

For this little hobby, Jiang Nan probably didn't expect that ten years later he would be at the top of the list of domestic writers.

Tang Mingyao actually wanted to tell him, brother, don't go to study for a doctorate, that's delaying your talent, you won't need it after graduation anyway, so let's concentrate on creation.

Of course, he just thought about it, and didn't say it.

All the members of the Kyushu creative team gathered, at this time everyone had no contradictions, and there was no burden after becoming famous, all of them were full of energy to make the "project" of Kyushu bigger and stronger, and it was the most energetic time.

The refinement of the background setting, the combing of the story line, and the doubts and difficulties in everyone's creation were all raised one by one at the party, and then discussed with each other and began to solve them.

The stories that have been written or halfway written will also be taken out for others to observe, or for all members to "review", and some storylines that violate the unified setting will usually be pointed out and then modified.

Tang Mingyao's "Kyushu Death Note" is the same.

When he came today, he took his notebook with him, and when it was his turn to speak, he copied several copies of the document and distributed them to everyone, each of whom read it on his own laptop.

A group of people watched it for several hours, and after reading it, they gave their opinions on the work.

Jin He first said: "I knew his outline before, and now when I look at the text, there is basically no deviation, and the writing is also very smooth, which is his consistent style, and I don't think there is anything that needs to be changed." ”

Blister sighed with satisfaction: "I can be regarded as enjoying the treatment of using power for personal gain, and I am too satisfied to see the work of the train king one step ahead of the average reader." Well, I don't think there's anything to change. ”

"I think there are some things that can be handled better to fit into the context. Overall, this is a good story, but the details are not enough to highlight the theme of Kyushu, such as this protagonist [Yu], where has he been in Kyushu? What celebrities have you seen? When he became famous all over the world, what were his praiseworthy achievements? These are not very detailed in the book, and some places are even brushed off, and I think it could be written in more detail to better reflect his death in the end. Pan Haitian gave his opinion next to him.

As a result, as soon as he finished speaking, he immediately attracted rebuttals from several other people.

Jin He said: "The theme of this story is not to highlight personal brilliance, but I think this point is just right so far, if you write too deliberately, there will be a trace of deliberate carving, not beautiful!" ”

Jiang Nan and others also joined the discussion.

After arguing for a while, the public said that the public was reasonable, and the mother said that the mother was reasonable, but there was no result.

This is a normal phenomenon, and when the works of several other people were brought out before, it also caused a lot of controversy. Everyone's inner world is different, and the opinions given are different, so you have to learn to distinguish them.

Tang Mingyao kept all the points mentioned by everyone in mind. It makes sense, he is ready to go back and make appropriate adjustments, and if he thinks it is wrong, he will naturally not listen. But no matter how you adjust it, the overall tone of the story has been set, and this will not be changed again.

The meeting lasted two days.

On the third day, everyone left the venue and went back to their cities.

Because everyone has their own main business, like Jiang Nan is still studying for a doctorate, this time he rushed back on the weekend, and at the beginning of the new week, he had to go back to his laboratory and study papers.

Tang Mingyao returned to school and prepared for the final exam for a few days.

After the exam, he did not rush home, but stayed at school. He doesn't plan to go back this summer because someone important will be here.

After waiting for a few days, he picked up his girlfriend at the airport who he hadn't seen in months.

It is said that the eighteenth change in women's college, after going to high school, Luo Wenxi's changes gradually became obvious.

I used to look like a girl with bright eyes and bright teeth, but this time I haven't seen her for half a year, and I feel a few years older. Especially after taking Huang Zhong's errand, she often dealt with all kinds of clothes, and she gradually developed her own style in dressing.

When the two met, their eyes were full of joy of reunion after a long absence.

Although there are calls and text messages every day, which are basically uninterrupted, the feeling in my heart is completely different when I see a real person.

Tang Mingyao took the girl into his arms, sniffed the smell of her hair, and said, "Well, that's right, it's you." When I saw you just now, I was a little afraid to recognize you. ”

"What?"

The girl has not had such intimate actions for a long time, and her words are a little ashamed.

However, she did not resist her boyfriend's intimacy, and let him hug her in public, and after a while, she couldn't control the emotions in her heart, and took the initiative to wrap her arm around Tang Mingyao's neck.

"It's just that I saw a beautiful girl, even more beautiful than the Luo Wenxi I knew, and I didn't dare to recognize her. It wasn't until I smelled you that I could confirm that it was really you! ”

Luo Wenxi was puzzled: "Didn't we talk about the video last weekend, how could we not know each other?" ”

Tang Mingyao said: "How can the video be compared with the real person? Real people are a hundred times more beautiful than videos! ”

"Oily and slippery." Luo Wenxi was tired of being in his arms like a cat, "I found that you are usually quite serious, and you rarely joke in front of my parents, my mother and everyone else, only in front of me, you like to talk with flowers, and you love to tease me." ”

"Because you mean something different to me."

"What you mean by this is different, is it specifically to ridicule me and bully me?" After being intimate for a few minutes, Luo Wenxi pushed him away: "Hurry up, hurry up, there are so many people here, when are you going to hug him?" I haven't eaten on the plane. I order you, now, find me a restaurant at once, or I'll faint to you!" ”

Tang Mingyao got the decree and hurriedly took action.

He dragged his luggage, held his girlfriend's hand with one hand, couldn't wait to go to school to eat, and directly found a fast food restaurant at the airport to solve the problem of eating first.

Luo Wenxi doesn't like to take planes, every time he sits, he is very reluctant, and he can't eat anything on the plane.

Tang Mingyao felt a little sorry for her, so he ordered a bunch of things when he ordered, and sat and watched her eat.

"You eat it too." Luo Wenxi said with chopsticks.

"I'll just see you eat."

"Do you raise me like a pig? So much, how can I eat it alone! ”

"If you can't finish eating, you'll have ...... left"

Luo Wenxi glared at him angrily: "I order you to eat!" ”

So Tang Mingyao obediently picked up the chopsticks and ate them.

It's not that I'm afraid of my girlfriend, men are physically better than women, and there is no fear at all. Men who are afraid of women, the first is a waste of their own worthlessness, and the second is a man who loves his woman from the bottom of his bones.

Tang Mingyao felt that he was neither.

He just spoils his girlfriend, and there is no element of fear.

After eating, the two took a taxi back to school, Tang Mingyao opened a hotel room outside the school for the girl to live in, and he naturally would not go back to the dormitory.

"Husband, I'm going to stay in the capital for a summer vacation, and I've been staying in a hotel, isn't it a bit too luxurious?" After settling down briefly, Luo Wenxi looked at the hotel room and asked.

Tang Mingyao thought for a while and said, "Yes, although there is no shortage of this money, it is better to save it if it can be saved, it is better to ...... Let's rent a house outside? ”