"Tang Mingyao, do you want to go part-time outside school to distribute flyers on weekends?"

"Don't go!"

"Thirty yuan a day, the number of places is limited, and it is a rare opportunity to make extra money......"

"You think I need to make extra money?"

"Also, you're a pervert, and you're still studying, so you're more profitable than my dad. That...... The class organized several girls to go together, and you don't go either? ”

"I'm the one who has a girlfriend."

"Grass! I shouldn't have called you, just stay in the dormitory. ”

Xu Ang burst into a foul mouth, boom! Closed the door and left.

Tang Mingyao checked the latest episode, clicked on the written manuscript to save, put on his laptop, and went downstairs with his computer bag.

He's going to find Senior Sister He Ning today.

During the recess yesterday, he chatted with his senior sister about the latest progress, He Ning expressed full curiosity about what he could write this book, and it happened that Tang Mingyao also wanted to ask if the handling of the key plot was professional enough, so there was today's meeting.

The meeting point is on the second floor of the graduate student cafeteria.

When he arrived at the place, he didn't wait for a few minutes, and He Ning appeared on time.

A plain semi-long jacket with decent trousers, to be honest, not young and lively enough, but it matches her identity.

"Senior sister is here, sit down."

"Don't talk nonsense, take out the manuscript first and I'll take a look."

"Computer, you wait a minute."

As he spoke, he took out his notebook, turned it on, clicked on the document, and then changed the screen to another direction, so that the senior sister could see it more clearly.

"Is it okay, now I use a computer for writing, and I don't need a pen?"

"The computer is convenient, just delete and change the text directly when modifying, and it is troublesome to use a pen. And after becoming proficient in typing, it is much faster than handwriting. ”

"I'm outdated."

He Ning laughed to himself and quickly skimmed through the content.

She read the book very quickly, dragging the progress bar on the right side with the mouse, dragging it down after two seconds, and dragging it down again after two seconds, but in more than half an hour, she saw the latest plot, and she finished reading more than 100,000 words.

"Your book is very different......"

She raised her head unfinished and sighed: "Youth, the main line is not the love and love of boys and girls, but the struggle and reconciliation with the family, which is completely different from most of the same kind on the market. ”

"There is no disease-free moaning, it makes people feel very fulfilling, the later episode, under the design of two boys, the heroine confided in her father and was heard by her father, a middle-aged man who was angry, sitting in the corner and crying silently, this paragraph is very touching."

"Also, when it comes to family themes, they are generally very heavy, but you write very positively throughout the whole article, although the teenagers have family problems, but sunshine is still the main theme ......of life, which makes the reader feel very warm in his heart."

"All in all, it's a very good one, and it's very meaningful."

Tang Mingyao nodded in disgrace and said thank you, and then asked: "Senior sister, give me some advice, I don't just write about this book for youth, it involves the key plot of the psychology major, do you think there is anything wrong?" ”

"It's all good. You're a spiritual person, and you don't see anything wrong with you. Why, you're not confident in yourself? ”

"It's not that you're not confident, it's that you write something yourself, and it's hard to find a problem when you're in the game, and you might be able to give useful advice from a bystander's perspective."

"My advice is to finish the rest carefully. Keep it up! ”

This is equivalent to not saying it, Tang Mingyao feels that it has come in vain.

Fortunately, in the subsequent exchange, as the details of the conversation became more and more, He Ning finally said some of her opinions, such as how to deal with the psychological aspects of some details more smoothly on the existing basis.

It's not that she was hiding it before and deliberately didn't say it.

But there are some things that must be talked about in detail in order to find the problem.

It's like a girl who puts on makeup and asks someone if the painting looks good, and everyone looks at it uniformly, it's very good-looking, and I can't give any advice, but if a girl asks you how you look at my eyeshadow, they will say, oh, it's lighter......

A truth.

Tang Mingyao kept all the details mentioned in the chat in mind, and while confirming it, he pondered it to see if it really needed to be modified.

After chatting for more than two hours, when it was time to eat, Tang Mingyao returned to the bedroom alone after inviting his senior sister to lunch.

"Your letter!"

Roommate Yang Zhiwei pointed to his desk.

There are a lot of letters in the school, and they are usually distributed to each department by the communication room, then to the class, and then to each recipient by the class cadre. Of course, this is only a small part of the time, and most of the time, you have to get it yourself.

Tang Mingyao enjoyed the occasional treatment, took the letter, and when he saw the familiar handwriting on it, he smiled.

The letter paper is colored, with a faint fragrance, and when I open it, I look up and do not write the title, but write a title in the middle of the first line.

[You are my third lover]

Then look down, it's a short story full of romance.

The story tells the story of a couple who are punished by the gods and depend on each other for three lives, but cannot be together.

In the first life, one of them was a monk and the other was a wind chime on the eaves of the temple, and they stayed together for a lifetime, but they didn't know each other;

In the second life, one is a scholar, and the other is a tree in front of the cold door;

In the third life, both of them became human beings, but they never got together by mistake.

finally survived to the fourth life, and the two who had suffered a lot met in the rain, awakened the memories of the first three lives, and finally became a family.

The atmosphere of the story is portrayed very well, I don't know where Luo Wenxi copied it from.

And in addition to this story, the girl did not write any other words in the whole letter, and she was as casual as Tang Mingyao when she wrote the letter.

He smiled, picked up his phone and sent a text message: "I received the letter a few days ago, and I also read the story." Touched ing......"

Soon received a reply: "Yes, how did you move?" ”

"Do you mean that even if you can't be with me for three lifetimes, you won't give up in the fourth life?"

"Guess it yourself."

"I think that's what it is. In addition, the more you write, the better it looks, compliment! ”

"Humph!"

"Don't you think it's a waste of a one-word text message? Send a few more words. ”

"I just like to post a word, you don't care."

After chatting for a while, Luo Wenxi asked the matter: "I'm almost done with my manuscript, I've already drawn almost thirty pieces of the story in the first volume, can I submit it?" ”

"So fast? You can vote, you don't have to vote after all the drawings are finished. ”

"Where do you think I should vote?"

"There don't seem to be a few decent comic magazines in China, and there are a little famous ones such as "Comics King" and "Juvenile Comics", so I'll go to people in the industry to inquire about it, and then decide which one to vote for."

Luo Wenxi: "Mm-hmm. Do I need to use a pen name for my submission? What should I choose as a pen name? ”

Tang Mingyao replied with a wicked taste: "It's called [Tang Mingyao's Little Fan Girl]." ”