Chapter 120: Discussion of Writing Skills (Revised Edition)

QQ soon rang out.

Tang Mingyao passed the verification, chatted a few words, and determined that it was He Jinhe himself.

Why is he saying today: Idol, I've finished writing this novel, and I haven't found you in the forum, can you give some advice? I don't think there's anything left to be said.

Tang Mingyao said modestly: It's good, your writing is better than mine, and the idea of the novel is higher than mine, so I can't put forward any opinions. But there is one suggestion, your book is of high quality, you can find a publisher to submit it to try, maybe it can be published.

Where is it now: Thank you idol, I will sort out the manuscript and submit it for publication when I turn around.

Tang Mingyao said: Don't call me an idol, you graduated from college this year, you are older than me, call me an idol again, and I will kneel.

Where is it now: I just graduated in the summer, and I work as a planner in a game company, writing some game dialogues, writing some game backgrounds, etc. By the way, how old are you this year? Even if you're younger than me, you're an idol, and I enjoy reading your novels, and I feel like I'm having a hearty feeling.

Tang Mingyao: I'm 18 years old.

Where is it now: ......

It took about a minute before he replied again: You're lying, aren't you?

Tang Mingyao: Age is not important, don't mention this. In other words, since you have read my novel, do you have any comments for me? I write by myself, and there is no one around me to discuss, and sometimes it is easy to fall into self-esteem, and I have long wanted to find someone to discuss writing, but I can be regarded as finding you.

Where is it now: Zhenti? Then I really mentioned it. I think I like the idea of your first "Legend of Modern Jianghu", but you lost the heroine Zhou Jia in the first part, and she didn't appear in the second and third parts, I think you forgot about it, right?

Tang Mingyao: ......

Jin He went on to say: There is also the book "Martial Arts Supreme" that is now serialized, although it is very hot-blooded, and I am very happy to watch, but this novel does not have a sense of heaviness, the characters in it are relatively naïve, and the plot is a bit like a fight between elementary school students, which does not look so real. I think you can write a little more deeply next time, and don't be so retarded.

Tang Mingyao: ......

the chicken, this guy is really ruthless in giving advice.

But what can he say?

He asked someone to mention it himself, and now that they have brought it up, he can't be angry and say that you are talking nonsense.

And people do get to the point, in his novels, there are such and such problems, there are many problems, and there is still a big gap from maturity.

Next, the two chatted about each other's novels for a while, and also discussed the techniques of creation, and then talked about the development of domestic novels.

After chatting, both of them were relatively satisfied.

Tang Mingyao felt that he had found a fellow believer.

Since his rebirth, his creations have been done by himself, and although he has made great progress, there are also situations where no one communicates, and sometimes he feels lonely when he writes.

Today's discussion with Jin He gave him a new enthusiasm and more confidence in his writing path.

For a period of time after that, Tang Mingyao often went online to have some creative discussions with Jin He, and occasionally this buddy would pull him into an Internet chat room to chat with other literary young people who mingled in the forum, and he also met some authors who would become famous in the future.

In the process of contact with these people, Tang Mingyao gained a lot.

Because of everyone's collision of inspirations, some new ideas will pop up in the chat from time to time, which will become his spiritual food - these ideas, compared with those ideas more than ten years later, are not necessarily outdated and cliché.

There is also a discussion of writing skills, which not only improve the technique, but also stimulate the enthusiasm for creation, all of which have indescribable benefits for long-term writing.

Of course, Tang Mingyao still feels in private that many people have some literary youth, and he is still slightly different from them, but Wen Qingqi is actually a common problem of young people who pride themselves on literary youth in this era, and it is understandable, and he doesn't really care about these in his heart.

Chatting, water forums, reading, writing......

Unknowingly, two weeks passed, and on this day, Tang Mingyao turned on the computer and received an email in the mailbox.

"Hello train king, I am Wang Dong, the editor of the martial arts edition of "Ancient Legends", and I sincerely invite you to write a manuscript, and the relevant requirements are as follows...... If you are interested in submitting a manuscript to our company, the editorial department will give a remuneration ranging from 120 to 180 yuan/1,000 words depending on the quality of the manuscript. Hope to get your reply, my QQ number is ******. ——Editorial Department of the Martial Arts Edition of "Ancient Legends"

Tang Mingyao looked at it.

It's only been a long time, November has just ended, and just a month after the martial arts version of "Ancient Legends" was born, this wall foot has already dug into his head.

And this magazine is really generous enough, the price starts at 120 yuan, which is much more generous than "Martial Arts Story".

To be honest, he was a little impressed.

It's just that now he still has a manuscript in his hand that has not been finished, "Martial Arts Supreme" has been serialized for 400,000 words, he has 200,000 manuscripts in his hand, and recently wrote another 50,000 words, and there are about 350,000 words left before the end.

He had to finish it before he could think about writing a new work.

It should be soon, though.

Speed up a bit, at most two months, you can finish this book in your hand, and then it's time to consider a new book, and the martial arts version of "Ancient Legends" is a good choice.

added this QQ edited by Wang Dong, Tang Mingyao chatted with him on the Internet, expressing his attitude, the other party regretted it, expressed his expectations for his new work, and repeatedly emphasized that the price would not be low.

This is the rhythm of throwing money at it!

Tang Mingyao despised the inhumanity of the trench, and on the other hand, he felt that even if he smashed me with money, the more he smashed, the better.

It's December, and the weather is starting to get colder.

Everyone put on thick winter coats and began to spend the winter.

The decoration of the two branches of the "High School Entrance Examination Champion Learning and Living Hall" is in full swing, and this time it took a little longer because both sides started construction at the same time.

It took more than a month to finally complete the project.

After Tang Mingyao finished the decoration, he went to the two stores to take a look.

The second branch of my aunt's house, the store is slightly smaller, and the layout follows Tang Mingyao's store, and the decoration of the two stores is almost identical.

After the renovation is completed, it looks both atmospheric and bright, and because it is located next to the central square, there is a large flow of people, and it is foreseeable that high investment will soon have high returns.

After the renovation was completed, his father Tang Hui went to the provincial capital to buy goods non-stop, and a day later, he came back and was busy distributing goods.

Two days later, the two stores chose the same day and opened on the same day.

In the sound of firecrackers, the trendy decoration attracted the flow of people around, and some people who had visited Tang Mingyao's store at the entrance of No. 1 Middle School before, saw that the same store appeared in these places, and they were also curious to go in to have a look, so on the first day of opening, the business of both stores was very hot.

At night, the second branch earned more than 800 yuan a day.

The three-branch store in the central square, at the end of the day, the profit reached more than 2,100 yuan, which shocked everyone's attention!

This number is something that no one expected before the store opened.

Based on experience, the income from the first day of business should be one-third of the average monthly income.

In other words, the average monthly income of my aunt's shop in the future should reach more than 2,000 yuan.

And the store in the central square that Luo Ma is in charge of, but actually belongs to Luo Wenxi, and the monthly income is likely to be as high as 6,000 yuan!

After Tang Mingyao heard about it, he had only one thought in his heart: ask for help, my girlfriend is getting richer and richer, much faster than me to make money, ask how to catch up with her and surpass her, online, etc., it's very urgent.