The short story that was written in the first step of my life is also a work that can mark the end, and it is worth remembering, and it took a week.

In the closing speech that I had written a long time ago, I mentioned my father's sentence "Where am I going to wait for you, Sasha?" I felt very inexplicably touched, and then I wrote 12 shortly after, and I was in a state of confusion at that time, like being between reality and illusion, and my mother's exhausted thinking speed was about the same, right? When I wrote about standing on the edge of the cliff and looking at the scene below, I also had an indescribable touch, and my eyes were hot, but I didn't want to cry. Write to Sasha's tears, and take a break for a while before continuing to write! (at least 5 minutes)

There's still something to say.,It's been prepared a long time ago.,I'll leave it in that testimonial~ Now I can't seem to remember why I wrote that.,First of all, I was excited.,And then it seems that I started to write something about the plot inexplicably.。

(Today, I actually felt very tired and didn't want to write.,Holding the outline and forcing myself to write it.,It turned out to be really written.,So it's not a problem that the plot is difficult to write at all, but the author himself has a problem?) QAQ）

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"Write the closing speech first"

This is the end of the story, 20,000 words, it is in line with the length of the short story in mind, and there is nothing wrong with itself, but I am very moved to see many people investing in this book, and I always feel that it is not enough.

Seeing the final ending, there seems to be a hint of hint of it, but it is clear that what was supposed to be done is not over yet. The reason is that the author himself likes the open-ended ending, leaving a lot of blank space, and it seems that a possibility can be pieced together from various small details, and then put together, there seems to be another possibility (such as the chat between Jojo and Shengsheng in the end, and the father's disembarkation, here are two possibilities); Another reason is that this whole story is indeed dreamed of, and the dream is the end here, and when I wake up, I think about it, and I think it's good to end here.

Ah, of course, it's not all dreams, but also the combing and details of the author himself, join me to explain what I'm explaining, X! (This author's dream is really good-looking)

There are some additions to the original, such as more detailed portrayals of the mother and various characters, including the fur coat that is reluctant to take off, and Richard, who eats the grilled sausage...... Naturally, there is also a little saint who freezes ice! However, I would like to mention that there are some connections with the ideas of the text, so if you can know this information, it will be more interesting to watch.

1. At the end of the third stanza, the Holy Saint breaks Jojo's hand, and then Jojo speaks on behalf of the Holy Saint in his heart. In fact, the reference here is more obviously inclined to the identity of the saint in the text. From the following text, we can know the shocking identity of my mother, a warrior of the human race, and an angel who lives in the world, and the saint is an angel in the world in the text. Qiao Qiao knows about Shengsheng, but he doesn't know about his mother, so about "when to tell" actually refers to the fact that Shengsheng is an angel, of course he thinks it's very exciting~

2. At the end, Qiao Qiao said "If it were you", in fact, it was only here when the outline was made, and the story of the butcher and the knife was added when sorting out the outline that was written in a hurry. This is because when I was half-asleep and half-awake, my heart said that my mother ran so heavily that if it was a saint, she would have run away a long time ago. In the text, the Holy Saint will be disguised, so it was later found that the old mother couldn't run away with all her might, and even had a picture in my mind of the Holy Saint jumping into someone else's car and pretending to be a civilian to escape smoothly - but obviously it won't be that simple.

3. There is no role of the mother in the text at all, and there may be a little mention of the content about the mother in the "Hidden Yuan Era" that will be written (probably in the next life), and there are Qiaoqiao in both stories, but the mother and the saint only appear in one book, so in fact, these are two people who will never be able to meet.

So on the basis of the third point,And then connect the title "Jojo's Dream",And connect with this nonsense official fandom,The author thinks it's very interesting.-Since when has it been a dream? Is it that Jojo fell asleep in the second section, and the rest is all dreams, is he just an ordinary big boy living an ordinary little life, or is it all a dream from the beginning?

Unclear and unclear, unclear and unclear, the author's style hahaha, stream of consciousness! Stream of consciousness! But if you don't think about it, the author feels that this is still a complete story, and that is the best.

In addition, there are some small easter eggs, such as the sentence of the immortal master's lecture in the fourth section of Qiaoqiao's dream, which was actually heard from the VX chicken soup released by the elderly, well, I didn't continue to write, and I was hurriedly woken up by the ice.

There's also that fragmentary description.,Actually, it seems to be because of uh.,It's a long time ago that I posted in the post bar.,A paragraph is equivalent to the first floor.。 And then I wanted to be lazy.,I just want to finish the story and go back to catch up with the serial...... Ahem, there is also a feeling that such an unsmooth narrative has a good effect on the theme of expressing the word "dream", and without this reason, I will not allow myself to be lazy. (But from the perspective of self-creation, I really like this kind of multi-perspective fragmentary storytelling, and it saves effort to just throw out ideas.) ）

After the whole short story, one of the most memorable scenes is actually my father on the Tower of Babel, leaning over and asking, "Where am I going to wait for you, Sasha?" "The father who talks the least seems to have some memorable points. There are also some "slimy" ones, such as the huge contrast of my mother, Qiaoqiao's guidance, and the theme of putting down, these are all inconspicuous background cloths, but they just seep inside! Well!

In addition, for example, what exactly is in Dad's box, what kind of war happened between Mom and the Giants as a warrior of the Terran race, and how the leg of the impotent and furious is broken, the above content will not be spicy! (It's nice to have a short story)

Because I see that the investment seems to be over, there are points and so on, so after taking time to catch insects, I will finish the book quickly. x.x is inexplicably a little distressed, and the next time I write a short story, I will continue to think of a title that will not be repeated. (Leave a giant pit next time!) During the Spring Festival, I would probably like to start writing a little short story that I wanted to write before. ）

If you're not lazy, you'll rearrange the version.,Now to be honest, it's quite messy.,The chapters are also directly numbered (look at what people can do!) ）。 It's also important to find an opportunity to change the profile.,Cake is drawn here first~.

------------------------The above was written before the end.,I shouldn't be too lazy to change it after that.,After all, it's all one thousand sixteen.,It's quite nagging.。 If you still want to brag about it, go to the comment area.