White?

Gu Qiaoqiao thought secretly, she didn't seem to know who this person was, but she nodded weakly, "Then I'll see ...... now."

It was a Sunday afternoon, Gu Tianfeng didn't have to go to work, and he was eager to know what thoughts and opinions his daughter had after watching it.

I wanted to stare at my daughter, but I felt that it would affect my daughter's normality, so I left the study, but observed my daughter's expression at the door.

Then I felt as if I had returned to the moment before the birth of the child, nervous and nervous......

stood stupidly at the door for a while, and when he found that his daughter's expression was becoming more and more focused, he hurriedly left quietly with a trace of anticipation.

I saw my wife busy cutting potatoes in the kitchen and hurriedly walking over, and recently my daughter-in-law was busy with work in the field and had to take care of the family, and he was patronizing and writing, and ignored her.

He took a bench and sat down, took the potatoes in his daughter-in-law's hand and the knife that specially peeled the potatoes, and asked softly, "Why do you peel so many potatoes?" ”

"Qiaoqiao wants to eat steamed dumplings with potato flour, and it just so happens that there are oil shuttles at home, so I use sauerkraut and oil shuttle to make dumpling fillings, and we will eat steamed dumplings at night."

Gu Tianfeng was described by his daughter-in-law like this, and he felt that his saliva was about to come out, obviously he had just finished eating.

He smiled heavily, "Then I'll help you." ”

"You don't write anymore?"

"Let's not write it yet, let Qiaoqiao take a look, I'm a little bottomless in my heart."

Lian Yuhong said firmly, "There is no bottom, what you write must be the best!" ”

Gu Tianfeng glanced at his daughter-in-law, "Why don't you look good?" ”

Lian Yuhong's face was a little red, and she said angrily, "Can you blame me for this, don't I understand it......"

"I have taught you literacy over the years, and your education level has reached the level of graduating from primary school, and it is no problem to read, but you are not happy to read."

Gu Tianfeng pointed it out unceremoniously.

Even Yuhong glanced at her man obliquely, "It's not my fault, it's all those words, as soon as I see them together, I have a headache." ”

"Strong words...... Gu Tianfeng said with a chuckle.

But Gu Qiaoqiao was quickly attracted by the content of the book, and when he saw it, he saw that the sun was about to set.

I was looking at it vigorously, and I turned the next page, and it was gone......

Gu Qiaoqiao was anxious, stood up and ran towards the east house.

At this time, Gu Tianfeng was helping to make dumplings, and when he saw his daughter come out, his eyes lit up all of a sudden.

Gu Qiaoqiao came to Gu Tianfeng's side and said urgently, "Dad, what about later, was Bai Qi and Machishang together, did you win that battle, what is the stake, who killed Machishang's father, King Changle is too bad, ah, ah, Bai Qi is too good to Machishang, in that era, he is simply a peerless good man......"

A series of questions crackled out of Gu Qiaoqiao's mouth like fried beans.

With every word, the corners of Gu Tianfeng's mouth opened a little, and then his face was full of smiles.

No need to ask.

I haven't moved for an afternoon, and now I can't wait to know what the following looks like, and I know that his book is okay.

"I didn't write it there, Jojo, how did Dad write?" Gu Tianfeng still asked.

"Dad, you've written so well." Gu Qiaoqiao hugged Gu Tianfeng's arm and praised sincerely, "Dad, you are really amazing, I am very proud to have a father like you." ”

And even Yuhong neatly put the big steamed dumplings into the cage drawer, covered the pot, and then Gu Qianqian also came out of the house, smiling and helping her mother to light the fire.

But no one bothered Gu Tianfeng and Gu Qiaoqiao.

Gu Tianfeng was also very happy when he was recognized by his daughter, and asked, "Can you tell me how you feel?" ”

Gu Qiaoqiao flipped through the book and said seriously, "Your writing skills are extremely profound, the text is simple and gorgeous, the language is concise but attractive, the history and wild history are perfectly integrated, the plot is interlocking, the story is ups and downs, and the images of the characters in the book are vividly ...... on the paper."

Gu Tianfeng's eyes narrowed with joy, and he asked as if he didn't believe it, "Is it really as good as you say?" ”

"Well, better than I said." Gu Qiaoqiao continued, "Dad, I have a suggestion......

"What advice?" Gu Tianfeng asked excitedly.

"Don't write half of it for the time being, first copy the written one again with manuscript paper, and then submit it directly to the ancient and modern legends, where the books are all serialized, and your style is also very suitable."

Strike while the iron is hot.

Gu Qiaoqiao deeply felt that his father's books on weekdays were not in vain.

Moreover, this book is really well written.

As a person who has watched so many stories and movies and TV series, she can't stop watching it, and she is eager to know the plot behind.

Therefore, you must let your father finish this book, and you must not give up halfway.

Moreover, Gu Qiaoqiao believes that this book is an instant hit.

You don't need to modify it.

Because my father has been a Chinese teacher for more than 20 years, he has not been in vain.

Gu Tianfeng, under the praise and encouragement of his daughter, almost fluttered.

Fortunately, Lian Yuhong's steamed dumplings came out of the pot, and she shouted that the father and daughter who were talking non-stop hurry up to eat.

This steamed dumpling with potato flour is best eaten hot.

Only then did he interrupt the words of the chattering two people, and at this time, Gu Zishu smelled the smell and ran back from the courtyard outside.

The family sat around the kang table and ate deliciously.

During the meal, Gu Qiaoqiao couldn't help but ask about the plot behind, and Gu Tianfeng naturally told his eldest daughter happily.

Gu Qiaoqiao felt that such an ending seemed to be very in line with the characteristics of this era.

But it also has a new twist.

Gu Qiaoqiao was very satisfied.

It was as if I saw a new star in the literary world slowly rising on the opposite side.

Then he giggled and almost choked himself.

Then, Lian Yuhong didn't let the two of them eat while talking.

When Gu Qiaoqiao handed a bowl of steamed dumplings to Chang Qing to eat, he still had a smile on his face.

And Chang Qing looked at Sister Qiao Qiao, who was smiling under the moonlight, and felt in her heart that Sister Qiao Qiao was afraid that she was not a fairy in the sky.

Gu Qiaoqiao said a few words to Chang Qing, and then left with the empty bowl, Chang Qing watched Gu Qiaoqiao enter the house all the time, and then walked towards the firewood room where he slept.

The college entrance examination will be coming soon.

This time, he not only wants to be the first in the city, but also the first in the province.

After dinner, Gu Tianfeng was full of motivation, although he didn't know if the magazine would pass it, but when he thought of his daughter's encouragement and the situation at home, he felt that no matter whether it worked or not, he needed to give it a try.

Otherwise, it's a closed door.

Now everyone in the Gu family seems to be busy.

And Gu Qiaoqiao's grandmother's family is also busy, but they all see beautiful hope in their busyness.

dLook and come