Around the pitch black, a table lamp suddenly lit up.

I saw a large notebook and a signature pen on the mahogany desk.

Hao Huan was thinking, this big book may be the script of "Soul Night", right?

And here......

He looked around!

Little dark house?

Is this putting me in a small dark room specifically for me to change the script?

Hao Huan found himself in a narrow room with no doors or windows and black walls all around.

This scene is quite scary!

I thought this was on the set, but I didn't expect it to be a small black house where I didn't see a single yarn except myself.

Perhaps, this is because the script has to be revised before the on-set experience can be carried out?

And then the set was shot according to the content of the revised script? In the end, the movie is finished, and if the system feels that there is no problem, then it can be cleared. If it doesn't work, 2 million losers will be deducted, and then continue to revise the script in the small black room until the script is passed?

Hao Huan had a headache......

Fortunately, 40 million yuan was transferred to Pamela before this, and 40 million lost value was obtained.

And the script is not so easy to change! Moreover, judging from the arrangement of the system, he can only refine and improve the storyline of the script, and cannot modify it significantly.

It's even more difficult!

After all, not everyone's style and ideas are the same!

Hao Huan pulled a chair and sat down, he took the signature pen on the script, opened the first page of the script and began to carefully and seriously study the content of the script.

A moment later.

Hao Huan frowned!

How does the story style of this script feel a little similar to "Happy Ghost"?

It seems to belong to the nonsensical comedy style!

He also admires the idea of integrating the comedy style into thriller and horror movies, this kind of idea, I am afraid that few screenwriters and directors dare to try.

"Happy Ghost" is not yet a thriller and horror movie, but a pure comedy movie.

But "Night of the Soul" is different!

The movie itself is a horror and thriller movie, but some of the storylines are infused with humorous and nonsensical plots.

After reading the script, Hao Huan felt a little at a loss.

Because comedy is not the style he is good at. In terms of suspense and thriller, he can try to refine the story content and try to improve the main content of the script according to the requirements of the system.

But he is a little stretched to perfection in the refinement of the comedy plot, mainly because he doesn't know how to change it. If it is deleted, I am afraid it will not pass the review of the system, after all, comedy is also the main ingredient of this movie.

What's more, the comedy plot occupies a lot of space in the movie script, and if you have to change it, it will really affect the whole body.

Hao Huan thought back to the on-set experience of "Happy Ghost", and saw if he could burst out with a little inspiration and improve the comedy plot in the script of "Soul Night" to be more humorous and exciting.

A long time has passed......

Hao Huan didn't know how long he had been in the small black room.

He took the pen and revised the script, sometimes satisfied, sometimes shaking his head and thinking that it would not work.

After a long time, he put down the pen and sighed: "Try it first!" After all, I don't know what the system's audit criteria are! ”

Script submission, scene transitions.

The little dark house disappears, and the real on-set experience begins!

"Night of the Soul" started filming.

Hao Huan watched the whole shooting process at the scene, and was shocked by the system's amazing skills!

What the hell are these people doing?

Could it be that this is a scene and character generated by the system's intelligence?

Otherwise, why would they make this film according to their own well-polished script?

With all kinds of doubts and a trace of expectation and apprehension, when the film is finished and announced.

The system prompt sounded ruthlessly: "This score is 81 points, the script revision and improvement failed, and 2 million losers will be deducted, please make persistent efforts." ”

The scene changed, and Hao Huan was imprisoned in the small black room again!

"81 points is considered a failure, which means that the script score must be at least 90 points to pass this special experience?"

Hao Huan frowned, so what was the rating of the original script? Am I getting worse and worse, or am I getting better and better?

He decided to spend 2 million yuan to find out!

The original script is submitted directly!

The movie began to be filmed step by step until it was completed, and then the system prompt sounded: "This score is 78 points, the script has failed to be revised and improved, and 2 million losers will be deducted, please make persistent efforts." ”

OK!

The original script scored 78 points, and my revised script scored 82 points, indicating that my revised and improved plot added 4 points to the script!

Although he wasted 2 million losers, Hao Huan didn't feel distressed, because he was sure that he didn't change the script, and he didn't change it worse and worse!

This news gave him the confidence to continue to revise and improve the script!

"The revised script only has 82 points, is it because the plot is not rigorous enough and not perfect enough?"

Hao Huan looked at the script he had changed with earnestness.

"Maybe it should be revised here!"

Li's wife suddenly took a red dress and put it on before jumping off the building, which is a bit unreasonable here, because she is going to kill people, so it is impossible to hide a red dress on her body!

Since the system requires the improvement of the script, it is better to deal with this kind of place that will be complained about more rigorously.

"If you change it here, the plot drawn out later will also change the details, so that the two characters of the Li family and his wife will have to be further improved in the original setting."

According to the original script and the footage seen at the shooting site, Hao Huan thought about it carefully, the two characters of the Li couple did seem a little abrupt in the movie, and their appearance and the plot of forcing the security guard to jump off the building, now thinking about it, Hao Huan feels that it is indeed not very good.

"In this way, the security plot is not rigorous enough, and the supporting characters seem to be a bit serious!"

Hao Huan suddenly frowned after revising for a moment! This is really a hair that affects the whole body! This section of the plot has been modified, it is indeed rigorous, and it has become a lot more thrilling, but the later plot is a little deviated, so it has to be modified to correspond to the previous plot!

"In this way, it is not easy to arrange the plot of Li Fu accidentally falling from the building and Li Woman wanting to jump off the building to commit suicide!"

Three hours later.

Hao Huan finally finished this plot, Li Fu still accidentally fell off the building and died, and Li's wife still wanted to commit suicide by jumping off the building, and then attempted suicide and wanted to shoot herself, and finally the actor threw out a flying knife to stop her from committing suicide, but the flying knife exploded her dog's head and successfully sent her on Huangquan Road.

This is the black humor plot in the original script, Hao Huan knows that he can't cut this nonsensical plot of black humor, otherwise the movie will become a pure thriller movie, and there is no trace of the cost of a comedy movie.

In this way, I am afraid that the script score given by the system will only be lower!

So, he couldn't change the script drastically. can only pick out some faults from the original script, and then refine and improve it, so that the content of the story will become more rigorous, so that when the movie is released, it will be frantically complained by the audience because of a certain plot.

And this is probably the system's review standard for him to revise and improve the script!

"Finished!"

The revised script of "Night of the Soul" was submitted for the third time.

The film is once again filmed mechanically, but the shooting process is different every time, because every time the details of the script change, so the details of the shooting will also change.

When the third time is finished!

The system prompted: "This time the score is 87 points, the script has failed to be modified and improved, and 2 million losers will be deducted, please make persistent efforts." ”

Hao Huan's face darkened, this time he had been in the small black house for a long time! He memorized the whole script backwards, and he tried his best to improve and revise everything he thought was not rigorous and exciting enough, but this time the script could not pass the review!

87 min......

If 90 points can really pass, then I have to make the content of the script three points more exciting.

"How long?"

Hao Huan muttered to himself. The script has been submitted three times, except for the second time is the original script, which means that he has been locked in a small dark room and revised the script twice.

The first time, it took him at least two days to refine the revisions.

This time, when the score of 87 was just announced, he didn't eat or drink, and was locked up in a small black room for nearly ten days!

Fortunately, this is experiencing the system life.

Otherwise, if he did this in reality, Hao Huan felt that he might be driven crazy!

The most defeated thing is that once only, the system will deduct 2 million loser value, but these three times, 6 million will be deducted directly!

Hemp and wheat husks......

The system is deliberately cheating, right?

How do I feel that the 40 million losers are worth it, and it won't let me leave the little black house if it is not deducted?

Next, Hao Huan, who changed the script to the point that the hairline was about to move up, submitted the fourth script.

After waiting on the set for the movie to finish, he nervously waited for the verdict of the system!

"This score is 86 points, the script revision and improvement failed, and the 2 million loser value will be deducted, please make persistent efforts."

"I'm a fairy board of your system!"

Hao Huan couldn't help but scold, the score of the third time he changed the script was 87, and this time it was only 86!

So, the more I changed, the more I went back?

He found a problem, probably because he modified the nonsensical plot of black humor, so the rating was low.

He calmed down and thought back to the sets of shots he had noticed while shooting on set.

The thriller plot has been made up perfectly, and there is nothing more to say, so the only thing that can add points next is the comedy plot.

If I had perfected the comedy plot better, maybe this rating would have gone up, and then I would have been able to leave this damn little dark room!

Hao Huan decided to experiment again, although black humor is not his style, and those funny nonsensical plots are not his favorite style, but if you want to become a top director, you can't be limited to just one theme and one style!

Perhaps, this is the reason and advice for the system to lock me up in a small dark room to change the script!

Suspenseful thriller movies can also perfectly integrate comedy themes! In addition to comedy, other themes can also be integrated, such as sci-fi, such as love!

Hao Huan thought of a movie called "Human Ghost Love" that he had seen in the system mall earlier, which may be a suspense thriller movie that integrates the theme of love.

And now, he wants to successfully leave the little black house and let the script be recognized by the system. Then he can only make the comedy theme perfectly integrated with the thriller theme, so that the audience can be surprised and laughed!

The front shouted that the baby was scared to death, and the back shouted that the baby died of laughter!

Perhaps, this is really a success?

He took a deep breath, threw away all distractions, picked up his pen, and continued to revise and refine the script.

This time, he had a clear direction.

Human beings are the most capable creatures of learning, and comedy may not be his field of expertise, but he can learn and think about what kind of plot people will laugh at, and think about the nonsensical humor in the original script, what they rely on to amuse the audience.

I don't know how long I was locked up in the small black room, Hao Huan submitted the script for the fifth time, and his face was expressionless, with no expectations, and no impatience.

Finally, the system prompted: "This score is 89 points, the script revision and improvement failed, and the 2 million loser value will be deducted, please make persistent efforts." ”

"It's not close!"

Hao Huan continued to write hard in the small black room!

Sixth Submission of Scripts......

"This score is 90 points, the script revision and improvement fails, and 2 million losers are deducted, please make persistent efforts."

was locked up in a small black room again, Hao Huan almost couldn't help scolding!

"Can't pass 90 points? Why don't you ask me to write a 100-point script? ”

He's going crazy, how can he play like this? The 12 million loser value is gone, plus the 8 million loser value for unlocking "Soul Night", it cost a full 20 million loser value!

"The last time, if I can't pass more than 90 points, I'll be in a hurry!"

Hao Huan continued to rack his brains to improve the content of the script of "Night of the Soul".

He didn't know how many days he had been locked up in the little dark room, only that he felt like a year now.

A few days later, the script was submitted for the seventh time.

The film was shot on the seventh set according to the content of the script.

Hao Huan was beside the director, looking at the groups of shots taken by the camera, and he couldn't find any fault in the storyline.

When the original script was filmed, he still had a lot to complain about. The plot is not rigorous, the character reduces the IQ, etc., these are the key points to lower the score of the script, now, these problems have been modified, and the last score has reached 90 points, this time he feels better than the last time, if he can't pass the test, he can only say that the system is pit his loser value!

The time of the on-set experience passed day by day, and finally ushered in a tense and desperate finale moment.

Immediately afterwards, the headache-inducing system prompt sounded: "This score is 93 points, the script has been successfully modified and improved, and the viewing permission of the script will be automatically unlocked." ”

Hao Huan gritted his teeth and said: "This script is really backwards!" Who still doesn't know your viewing rights! ”

I finally don't have to be locked up in a small black room!

I can finally get out of this place!

Hao Huan was about to go crazy, and at this moment, there was a knock on the door, and the voice of the little aunt came: "It's almost nine o'clock, and I haven't woken up yet!" Hurry up and eat breakfast, I was a thief last night, right? ”

Wow!

What a kind and beautiful aunt's voice!

Hao Huan woke up movingly, this long experience in the little black house, the system's prompt sound was so loud that he almost vomited!

But the harvest in the little dark room is great!

"Night of the Soul", a script with a whopping 93 points!

A movie that combines thriller and comedy!

If it is released in the Spring Festival file next, will it create a miracle?

Thinking about it, Hao Huan can't wait to fly back to make this movie now!

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PS: The code word is too sleepy to sleep for a while, two more seven thousand words, and the third is more likely to be written until about one o'clock in the morning, so don't wait for me, you will wake up tomorrow and read it.

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