Testimonials & Summary & Outlook (A must-see for readers!) )
Coincidentally, this month is this year's college entrance examination, and for Zhao Ling, nearly two free public period updates are a long assessment, and it will be officially put on the shelves at twelve o'clock at noon tomorrow Friday, which means that the results of this book are coming out, and the first order results are quite important.
Zhao Ling is now nervous and looking forward to it, he has a thousand words in his heart, and he has also considered writing some words that sell miserably and beg for subscriptions, but think about it, forget it, as long as it is a VIP paid reader, plus like this story, the subscription will definitely be subscribed, it has been open for one or two decades, and the readers who read the book are basically old bookworms, and it is estimated that there are a lot of testimonials on the shelves, and Zhao Ling does not write any fancy things, and writes the thoughts in his heart in a simple way.
Zhao Ling believes that readers' eyes are bright, and as long as they write chapters and stories that satisfy readers, they will subscribe and buy them.
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According to the title, it is said to be on the shelf, and the next is a testimonial, first of all, thank you to all the readers and friends who collected, voted for recommendations, and rewarded during the free public period.
As of the main data of "Black Technology Predator" before it was put on the shelves, 124 chapters have been updated with a total of about 330,000 words, the cumulative total recommendation votes are about 100,000, and the cumulative collection is about 37,000, as of the update of this chapter, 197 readers have rewarded the book during the free period, and the reward amount varies, the highest "Brother Dangwu" has accumulated 15,000 starting coins, and the minimum reward amount is 100 starting coins.
These data are not cold, they all represent the love of every reader, and Chao Ji thanks every reader and friend who has given this book a collection, a recommendation vote, and a reward or other support.
This is the greatest support and affirmation for Zhao Ling, Zhao Ling has already handed in the volume, and tomorrow's first order results will be evaluated and scored by every reader.
Finally, I would like to thank the China Literature platform and the editor-in-charge.
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Next is the update problem after it is put on the shelf.,If there is no moth thing that the platform rectified some time ago,Zhao Ling estimates that there are hundreds of chapters in the manuscript.,During that time, it was really written with fear.,Crazy re-text.,The manuscript has also been greatly changed.,At least more than 30 chapters have been deleted.,I'm distressed to death.,It's almost doubtful about life.。
But there is no way, the river crab is a force majeure existence.
During that time, I couldn't save the manuscript at all, and I deleted a lot of it, plus adjusted the plot. The chapters that have been updated have also been changed greatly, and even "The Travels of the Umbrella Holder" is wooden, what a beautiful lyrical prose, everyone says yes~~ cough cough cough......
To get back to the point, Zhao Ling still has a bit of a manuscript, so he also thought about it that there will definitely be a wave on the day it is put on the shelves.
Tomorrow is guaranteed to be 7 more, don't get me wrong, there's nothing hinting at, it's just that I simply prefer the number 7...
Then there are other plus rules, Zhao Ling decided to include all the data in the plus more sequence, so that it is easy to trigger the number of plus more, and at the same time, everyone picks up firewood and the flame is high, you can look at the data supervision, after reaching the data, it will be added on the basis of the next day's guaranteed 2 more.
First of all, the first order results plus more,The first order breaks 3000 plus 1 more,On this basis, every cumulative 1000 plus 1 more,And so on,So everyone must subscribe,Especially the first order,The first order results come out Zhaoling will report to you the next day,It will also be reported to you in the group,You can also search the starting point data network in Du Niang,Enter the title of the book to view the first order of the book,This is third-party data,Not very accurate,Generally higher than the real results,But almost less。
The next update rule is always valid, and the data meets the requirements of the update and will be updated the next day.
As follows:
(1) Recommended votes plus more: In the future, the number of recommended votes per week will accumulate 10,000 plus 1 more, plus 1 more for every 5,000 recommended votes, and so on, if it can maintain a data trend like this week every week after it is put on the shelves, the recommended votes can be updated here with four or five chapters per week, the key is that the recommended votes do not cost money, and they will be refreshed every day, so please continue to vote for the recommendation votes for this book.
(2) Monthly pass addition: every 200 votes will be added, and so on, with no cap.
(3) Reward plus more: a hall master plus 1 more, an alliance leader plus 5 more, as for the silver meng, the hall master is hanging...... About rewarding and adding more, I'm ashamed that Zhaoling actually has no bottom in his heart about his appeal, and he didn't want to set this rule, but if there is a large amount of reward, he has to add more, in short, it depends on fate, and I have also thought about plans such as everyone picking up firewood and flame high, crowdfunding alliances, etc., but I still have no bottom on my appeal, look at fate.
Regarding the update after it is put on the shelves, for the time being, if you have a better idea, you can join the group private chat, or leave a message in the APP book review area.
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Returning to this book, the title has been typed with the word summary, which is to make a summary of the content of the book during the free period.
The current score of this book has surpassed the previous two books of Zhao Ling, and I am very happy, indicating that there is progress.
But I still found a lot of problems, the shortcoming of the last two books is the lack of character portrayal, I thought about it for a long time after finishing the book, and found that when I wrote it in the middle and late stages, the protagonist had no fierce contradictions and conflicts because of the lack of opponents, and the plot was as plain as water, without ups and downs, collisions, giving people the feeling of being tasteless and abandoned, and giving up over time.
To put it bluntly, the portrayal of the villain is not in place, and the male protagonist has no opponent, so there is no goal to surpass, resulting in the invincibility of the male protagonist in the middle and late stages, especially in the later stage, and then the readers continue to pass and the grades decline.
This is all a summary of some of the shortcomings of the previous book.
Therefore, in the book "Black Technology Predator", Zhao Ling's most desired progress is to be able to surpass the previous book in character portrayal, so that the shortcomings of the previous book do not happen in this book.
However, it is precisely because of the attempt to put more effort into the portrayal of the characters that it has also led to problems with the updated content during the public period, such as the role of the male protagonist Gu Cheng's sister "Mengna", which is criticized a lot.
The second is that the plots of "Mengna" and "E-sports" are unpleasant, and most of them are unpleasant.
Here, Zhao Ling would like to thank everyone for their comments and messages, because of these very meaningful comments and interactions, we can quickly see the shortcomings, so as to adjust in time in the early stage, reduce the content in this area, and strive for perfection.
At the time of the opening of the book, the character of Mona was actually arranged to appear in the first five chapters, but after thinking about it, this character would only play a role in the middle and late stages, and it was obviously not appropriate to have too many characters in the early stage, too complicated foreshadowing, and Zhao Ling did not have such strong writing skills.
Then you should play to your strengths and avoid your weaknesses, and the main line in the early stage must be clear, because readers will not have so much patience to watch your foreshadowing, and there are too many characters in the early stage that readers can't remember, but waste the precious word count of the early chapters and the golden time for readers to read.
Therefore, the role of "Monna" was adjusted to appear after about 20 chapters, and I vaguely remember that I saw a reader comment on the chapter and said, "The sister of the pig's foot is really miserable, and she appeared so late"2333......
But even if there are adjustments, there is still a problem exposed in the follow-up update content, that is, there is a plot of "e-sports", which almost messed up the main and secondary, fortunately, the reader gave immediate feedback, pulled it back, and decisively deleted the plot of the subsequent seven or eight chapters of the manuscript about the description of the e-sports game and adjusted it in time, otherwise it would be self-congratulatory, thank you again.
As you may have guessed, Zhao Ling may have been affected by the shortcomings of the previous book, and subjectively always wanted to portray more characters in addition to the protagonist, so he unconsciously arranged some foreshadowing plots for the character of "Mengna" to serve the role of the middle stage.
The result may have backfired, and the writing did not satisfy everyone, ushering in most of the criticisms, but it was precisely because of these criticisms that Zhao Ling was able to adjust in time, although it was very reluctant to delete the manuscript in a large area, but for the sake of the overall structure of the book, it should be broken.
During the period, a wave of single-chapter "help" was a huge help under the comments of the majority of readers.
Zhao Ling collided with inspiration from it, and now he has found a better follow-up arrangement for the role of "Mengna", which can be well combined with the main plot, that is, "black technology", as for the specifics, there will be no spoilers.
The content of 330,000 words during the public period, the big problem should be the above, and there must still be problems that have not been found, there is no doubt about this, if you find it, you are welcome to point it out.
But some force majeure problems are gone.,After all, river crabs are irresistible.,For example, this kind of bug that seems to be obvious.,That is, the protagonist is becoming more and more important.,The people above don't come out to meet to show their attention to the protagonist.。
Immediately after the meeting, the river crab will come to meet you......
That's a summary of the book's public life.
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Finally, a word about the outlook.
Readers in the group may know, yes, Zhao Ling actually began to conceive and gradually improve the next book from the time of the book's opening and update.
The next book is the sequel to "Black Technology Predator", which follows a worldview and background structure.
Every day, after completing the update task of "Black Technology Predator", Zhaoling basically spends about an hour or half an hour to conceive a new sequel.
Let's start with "Black Technology Predator", the name is indeed a bit of a "sand sculpture", no way, good titles are occupied, but that's not the point.
Old readers who have followed the last two books should know, or readers who read black science and technology literature, should also know that as long as this kind of novel comes out of the earth, it is generally nine out of ten books.
"Super Tech Giant" collapsed when it came out of the earth, which also led to "Almighty Tech Giant" staying on the earth because of the sequelae, and it ended hastily when it flew out.
And "Black Technology Predator" is now certain that it will definitely go to the sea of stars in the later stage, and with the previous two lessons, this time Zhao Ling thinks that he is very well prepared and confident.
But it's still very cautious, and that's why there will be a sequel to the predator.
We will wait and see if we can write what Zhao Ling thinks in his heart, but the starting point of Zhao Ling's heart really wants to start with the book of predators and write a story with a grand background, starting from the cradle of the earth and going all the way to the sea of stars.
Therefore, "Black Technology Predator" is going out of the earth, but the main framework of the entire world background is still unfolded in the solar system, mainly to the story of contradictions and conflicts and disputes within human beings during the early pioneering period of the cradle of the earth and into the great voyage of the universe.
Although it jumps from the framework of the earth to the framework of the solar system, I borrow a sentence from Da Liu's "Three-Body Problem" novel, I don't remember specifically, which roughly means that "the fish that go ashore are no longer fish, and the humans who go into space are no longer humans".
Therefore, from the earth to the expansion of the entire solar system, for human beings, the environment has undergone earth-shaking changes, and for human beings, everything in the future is unknown, for example, the Trinity nuclear strike can become an existence that can maintain mutual restraint in the earth era, because it has a strong deterrent and can ensure mutual destruction, thus becoming a balanced product that the two sides dare not launch a full-scale war at will.
But what about the space age? I'm on Earth, you're on Mars, and this deterrence and balancing act may be gone, and what ...... will be found in that context?
So these are the places that make Zhao Ling very excited, it can be said that this story is the longest and most prepared by Zhao Ling, and it can even be said that the first two books are for this as a pathfinder, after all, they all died on the road, this time continue to sprint!
Zhao Ling knows that everyone may think that such a worldview pattern is too small, and they are still in the solar system in the later stage. Understand,After all, there are so many books at the starting point.,The readers are basically old bookworms.,At present, the most shocking background is the multi-dimensional universe background.,Don't do it if you don't make a multiverse, don't mean to say that the background is grand.,That's at least the known universe.,The Milky Way is still a starting point.,The solar system is just a novice village...... (*^▽^*)
Well, Zhao Ling also admits that he does not rule out the sequelae caused by GG when he left the earth before, but it is not necessarily a bad thing.
I don't know if you have the same feeling, that is, the general black science and technology literature has been limited to the earth, and it does seem that the pattern is too small, but blindly going out of the earth to the universe to wave, and it is easy to collapse, because everything is unfamiliar, the sense of substitution plummets, and there are fewer and fewer people chasing it, and there are too few authors who can write brilliantly, and Zhaoling does not think that he is the minority of the author group.
But what if you zoom in to the solar system? Do you think it's acceptable? At least eight planets, major moons, and asteroid belts, everyone knows about them.
At the same time, the pattern is no longer limited to a small planet, and it can be regarded as entering the space age, expanding and colonizing these planets to Mars and the like, and the sense of substitution will not plummet.
After everyone generally accepted the background structure in the book, after getting familiar with it, the sequel will continue from space to deep space......
Zhaoling was triggered based on this consideration, and decided to position the worldview pattern of "Black Technology Predator" in the solar system, and use this as the keynote to tell the story of human civilization from planetary civilization to stellar civilization, and the specific plot will not be spoiled, so stay tuned!
If you can do it without accidents and smoothly present the content planned in your heart, the length of "Black Technology Predator" is about 3 million to 3.5 million words, so here Zhao Ling has to say that everyone's subscription support is super critical, which largely determines where this story will eventually lead, which is very, very important.
After all, there is no way to avoid practical problems, Zhao Ling himself has to rely on the manuscript fee to eat, and he has both parents and ...... TMD has not yet been lowered (o(╥_╥)o), and the heart-piercing EB needs to make money to make ends meet, which is a very real and must be faced, and it is full of unpredictability.
Back to the main story, tell the story itself.
Seeing that the overall framework of "Black Technology Predator" has been understood, Zhao Ling feels that he can't go into further detail, and it will be a serious spoiler if he talks about it in detail.
The reason why I said the framework of "Black Technology Predator" before it was put on the shelves was to tell everyone what kind of story Zhaoling wanted to write, and whether this story happened to be the dish of the monarchs.
If this is the story you are really looking forward to, then you can rest assured to subscribe in the future, and listen to Zhaoling tell this story, and you will not be disappointed in the end.
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A little mention of the sequel at the end of the end.,The title of the book is yet to be determined.,The sequel is still being conceived slowly at night.,Wait for the sequel to be uploaded seamlessly.,It's no surprise that it's next year.,It's early.。
So even if it only takes an hour or even half an hour a day to conceive, it is completely sufficient, in short, there is no hurry, stability is the last word, and now the focus is absolutely undoubtedly the predator, and the predator has not written anything is false.
In terms of the sequel alone, now the book of the predator can be said to be enriching the world view and background structure for the sequel, which is equivalent to having a complete and solid underlying structure, and the major events in the book of the predator will also affect the background and worldview pattern of the sequel, since it is a story in the same world background, the impact is actually mutual, and sometimes the idea of a sequel can also lead to the improvement of the predator's later outline, and the benefits can also be felt.
A handful of the main characters of the sequel have been identified, with a new core setting and a rough world view background framework further refined.
and the chronicle that is compiling the world background, that is, the Spring and Autumn penmanship is edited and recorded in the order of the timeline, and only twenty or thirty percent of the sequel text may be introduced in the end, and the others are ignored, the ultimate purpose of the chronicle is still to better serve the plot itself, and the conflict with the plot is naturally and decisively pinched.
Anyway, there is time to slowly conceive and improve, and it is too early to talk about the sequel, so please look forward to it.
Let's just say these, the testimonials on the shelves are long enough, and Zhao Ling doesn't know how many of them have seen this seriously, and those who have read it are deducted in this paragraph?
Finally, everyone remembers to vote, plus more rules from now on, tomorrow Friday at noon at 12 o'clock on the shelves to guarantee the bottom 7 more, this week's recommended votes have been almost 13,000, up to standard, tomorrow on the shelves in advance lock 8 more, the road on the day before 12 o'clock over 15,000 9 more, other data such as rewards are measured according to the above standards, and the standard will be added.
Above!